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jadeoracle — Flower, Poisoned Plant, Master
Published: 2006-03-22 01:22:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 41; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description A Vision, it is much like a delicate flower.
And as a flower seeks out water to exist,
So will the vision dare to seek out its Dreamer.
Thriving only when care and dedication are received.
For it can grow with the power of time,
Into a thing so grand and glorious,
When it has reached its purpose, its destiny.

But a Vision is also like a poisoned plant,
It can consume the mind, body, and soul.
Realities become intertwined
And muddled between the Vision.

A Vision can become the Master,
And the Dreamer--A slave,
Trying the best to reach the Master's wishes.
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Comments: 6

Burni-Diru-Noh [2006-03-22 01:24:06 +0000 UTC]

This poem is decent, I like the imagery, and teh metaphor you used.

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jadeoracle In reply to Burni-Diru-Noh [2006-03-22 01:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. This is one of the first poems I wrote. Gosh it was a long time ago though.

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Burni-Diru-Noh In reply to jadeoracle [2006-03-22 01:46:51 +0000 UTC]

How long ago?

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jadeoracle In reply to Burni-Diru-Noh [2006-03-22 02:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Um. Maybe about 5 years.

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Burni-Diru-Noh In reply to jadeoracle [2006-03-23 00:32:37 +0000 UTC]

wow! that's quite awhile ago!

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jadeoracle In reply to Burni-Diru-Noh [2006-03-23 01:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I was moving all my poetry from this stupid poetry site and putting up here so I wouldn't lose it.

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