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jadeoracle — Perfect Image
Published: 2006-07-23 23:41:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 49; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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The pieces were falling into placeA picture starting to form
But I lost my patience and my grace,
And forced some pieces into place.
I look at the ruins
But cannot see
The beautiful that was there at first
And what it was meant to be.
Dismal is my outlook,
Great is my despair.
That perfect image is lost
And gone beyond repair.
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nice one dude. i like it a lot. this perfect image...when i read it i get the feeling you are referring to a person? lol or maybe i am off. either way i like the rhyming and the word choice. it flows well...
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Yeah, this was about a person and our relationship.
Thanks.
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lol man i dont know about you but when i get something in my head for a poem, doesnt matter what time of day it is or what i am doing i have to write it down. haha i will do it when i am driving, or at work, or sleeping at 4 in the morning : ]
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All my poems are written on sticky notes as soon as I get a chance. They are usually pretty wrough, an idea...a few lines...etc and then I write them up for DA I expand on them. I have insomnia so a lot of my poems are me thinking about stuff and then...wa la I have to go run to find the sticky notes.
Driving in the car is also another place...but I usually write entire poems in my head (its a long drive) I just hate it when I had it perfectly worded...and then I forget what it was when I get home.
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Thank you so much. Most people only look at my Photos, and ignore my poetry. So it is nice to hear that people read my poems.
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