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jadeoracle — While Hiding Behind My Suppose
Published: 2005-02-14 02:47:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Expressionless as a statue,
Frozen in the pursuit of something more,
The realization hits like a tidal wave.

Somewhere while hiding
Behind my supposed self,
My timeworn soul is so tired,
Of this endless masquerade.
Always in costume and mask,
Not knowing my true self.

How can it be possible
To hide so that even
I don't know myself?
How can it be possible
To play so many parts
And even have to play myself?

Seeking for answers in the
Catacombs of my subconscious,
Leads me to more questions, not answers.
I fear that I have lost myself forever.
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Comments: 2

thecrazyhobo [2005-03-06 21:29:05 +0000 UTC]

I like! The line breaks are well handled- you have to use such different methods if you're not going for meter. Here they give it the feeling of confusion or of being lost.

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jadeoracle In reply to thecrazyhobo [2005-03-12 06:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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