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jadeoracle — timelessness of it all
Published: 2006-09-21 05:58:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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I feel so lostfor me, time has stopped…
and I can’t figure out how
everyone else goes about their days…
because I’m stuck
and I feel like I have to
remind myself to breath
or else I’d forget the time
and place I’m still in
instead of the moment
frozen in my mind.
time has stopped
but the world moves on.
I’m stuck in a place
that only I know…
and that others can’t relate.
if only time had stopped
for everyone
then I wouldn’t feel so
lost…
confused…
alone
in the timelessness of it all
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Comments: 5
this is a wonderful expression of a horrible feeling. i can definitely relate. great use of space. especially on the word alone.
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Don't you hate what goes on in your head.
I like the spacing you used. It really adds more the poem.
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Thank you.
How have you been doing?
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haha tons of ppl can relate i am sure. everyone goes through this at least once in their lives. and most ppl go through it more. personally i hate feeling this way. feeling stuck. like you can't breathe and you feel hopeless...it sucks...
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