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Description "Hum? Twilight? Is that you?"
-Y-yes, p-princess Celestia. I-I-I'm s-sorry...
"That's fine, Twilight. Give me a moment. I'll be right there."
-'kay.
The Moon at its place, she trotted to the purple foal.
"There. It is done for tonight."
-I-it was amazing!
"You think so?"
-Mmhmm.
"Well, I've been doing this for hundreds of years now. This is simply routine for me."
-Really?
"Mmhmm. And... despite this, I still feel so melancholic...
-Why?
"Hmm... Oh! You haven't told me what were you doing here, young lady."
-I... I couldn't sleep.
"And going on a balcony at night is the better idea I presume?"
-I... I asked the guards and they told me you were there.
"Oh? Is that so?"
-Uh, yes.
"So, your plans when you fail to fall sleep is finding me so I would tell you a story?"
-Um. M-maybe? Could you? Could you? Pleeeeeeeeeease?
"*giggle* Of course. But only this time. You were supposed to stay in your room.
-I know. I'm sorry.
"That's alright. I'm sure you will from now on. And I think I have the perfect story for you."
-Yay!
Celestia took a last glance at the Moon with a sad face and let go a sad sigh.
-P-princess?
"Um?"
She shown her a weak smile.
"Oh. I'm sorry. Twilight? Could you be a dear and wait for me in your room? I'll be right there."
-Okay.
Celestia got surprised when Twilight took the princess's front leg in a embrace.
-I love you Princess Celestia.
Then she ran inside, the white princess following her with her gaze. She then gaze back upon the Moon once again with a melancholic expression.
"She is young and... not so naive, but... do you? Do you still love me, Luna?"
-PRINCESS?
"In your room Twilight!"
-OKAY!
She let another sad sigh.
"Good night Luna."
Then, she put her smiling mask back on and walked inside to join Twilight for a bedtime story about the night, the Moon and her mysteries.

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skendle16 [2017-05-29 23:51:48 +0000 UTC]

LOVE this!

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JAEneth In reply to skendle16 [2017-05-30 18:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Kylecope [2017-04-12 10:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Imagine if this was true? After all that time, she was really sad, missing her sister, but not showing it.

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JAEneth In reply to Kylecope [2017-04-13 14:22:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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afgander [2017-02-15 07:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Woah...

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JaymieDaggerBark [2016-12-17 17:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Best Princess!!!!!Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β 

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LuneBat [2016-12-07 20:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Astonishing full moon, great job

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JAEneth In reply to LuneBat [2016-12-07 20:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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1deathPony1 [2016-12-02 23:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work)

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JAEneth In reply to 1deathPony1 [2016-12-03 06:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Abaddon616 [2016-12-02 19:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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JAEneth In reply to Abaddon616 [2016-12-03 06:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanksss

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cajobif [2016-12-02 01:53:19 +0000 UTC]

True. But she did in the animation of "Lullaby for a Princess".

Wonderful work.

"Hum? Twilight? Is that you?"
-Y-yes, p-princess Celestia. I-I-I'm s-sorry...
"That's fine, Twilight. Give me a moment. I'll be right there."
-'kay.
The Moon at its place, she trotted to the purple foal.
"There. It is done for tonight."
-I-it was amazing!
"You think so?"
-Mmhmm.
"Well, I've been doing this for hundreds of years now. This is simply routine for me."
-Really?
"Mmhmm. And... despite this, I still feel so melancholic...
-Why?
"Hmm... Oh! You haven't told me what were you doing here, young lady."
-I... I couldn't sleep.
"And going on a balcony at night is the better idea I presume?"
-I... I asked the guards and they told me you were there.
"Oh? Is that so?"
-Uh, yes.
"So, your plans when you fail to fall sleep is finding me so I would tell you a story?"
-Um. M-maybe? Could you? Could you? Pleeeeeeeeeease?
"*giggle* Of course. But only this time. You were supposed to stay in your room.
-I know. I'm sorry.
"That's alright. I'm sure you will from now on. And I think I have the perfect story for you."
-Yay!
Celestia took a last glance at the Moon with a sad face and let go a sad sigh.
-P-princess?
"Um?"
She shown her a weak smile.
"Oh. I'm sorry. Twilight? Could you be a dear and wait for me in your room? I'll be right there."
-Okay.
Celestia got surprised when Twilight took the princess's front leg in a embrace.
-I love you Princess Celestia.
Then she ran inside, the white princess following her with her gaze. She then gaze back upon the Moon once again with a melancholic expression.
"She is young and... not so naive, but... do you? Do you still love me, Luna?"
-PRINCESS?
"In your room Twilight!"
-OKAY!
She let another sad sigh.
"Good night Luna."
Then, she put her smiling mask back on and walked inside to join Twilight for a bedtime story about the night, the Moon and her mysteries.

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LuneBat In reply to cajobif [2016-12-07 20:48:03 +0000 UTC]

This story is gorgeous. Great work

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cajobif In reply to LuneBat [2016-12-08 01:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I appreciate it.

That's thank to the artist who drawn a scene I've barely seen illustrated: Celestia raising the Moon. I just wanted to write something based on that beautiful moment and "thought who could have caught her in that moment? Why not her personal student?". But I still wonder if Twilight actually stayed and slept at the castle.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

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JAEneth In reply to cajobif [2016-12-02 05:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, how could I forget? I was LISTENING to that song for goodness sake! I must have subconsciously put that into the "Celestia being sad after banishing her sister"category while with this picture I intended to show her doing Luna's job and showing shame instead of the usual sadness.

Because there aren't other fan works showing that am I right?
AM I RIGHT?!

Also, thank you for the little story, as always you make a wonderful job in giving more life to those pictures.
In fact, would you mind if I put this and the other stories into the description of my drawings?

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cajobif In reply to JAEneth [2016-12-03 06:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Well first, I don't know. It must be pretty rare. Like Nightmare Moon without her helmet. Well, rarer since I found some.

So, you got that right.

Secondly, of course I don't mind. Go ahead. I feel honored.

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JAEneth In reply to cajobif [2016-12-03 06:15:11 +0000 UTC]

And I also have a helmetless Nightmare too! I sure am the most original artist in the fandom *other delusional narcissistic praise noises*

And thank you!

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cajobif In reply to JAEneth [2016-12-03 06:33:36 +0000 UTC]

Keep up making wonderful pieces.

And the pleasure is mine.

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templar127 [2016-12-02 00:08:43 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and sad

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JAEneth In reply to templar127 [2016-12-02 05:45:22 +0000 UTC]

It becomes even sadder when you give it a closer look and you start to notice how lazy I actually am!

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Sardaukarus [2016-12-01 21:05:12 +0000 UTC]

Creat!

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JAEneth In reply to Sardaukarus [2016-12-02 05:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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timmainsson [2016-12-01 17:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Lifting the moon is heaver in her heart than shouldersΒ 

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JAEneth In reply to timmainsson [2016-12-02 05:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Not-so-fun fact: I originally planned to lift her wings higher to symbolize her lifting the moon. (I had to say that to someone, it was such a nice idea, just ugly in practice, but still!)

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DragonClaw27 [2016-12-01 14:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is magnificent, great job!

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JAEneth In reply to DragonClaw27 [2016-12-02 05:47:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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DragonClaw27 In reply to JAEneth [2016-12-02 11:55:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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