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JakePColeman β€” Magikarp of the Ocean

Published: 2012-04-22 20:13:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 901; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 29
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Description My interpretation of what a magikarp would look like in real life.

I have put it in the ocean with a gyarados in the background climbing out of a ship.

my first piece that I can be proud to have drawn.
I spent a great deal of time on this, putting aside all other drawings including prizes,application, contest entries and more.

I think I have spent about 6-8 hours on this however I still see room for improvement on parts of the magikarp and the gyarados in the background.

I hope you like it and would appreciate any comments on what is good and bad about this picture.
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Comments: 13

o0Leanna0o [2013-10-06 12:51:46 +0000 UTC]

realism pokΓ©mons are the best! awesome Magikarp is awesome!! >w< well done!

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JakePColeman In reply to o0Leanna0o [2013-10-06 12:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much, I really do take these comments to heart Β 

I would also love something like an evaluation or just a tip or so to improve, though don't feel too compelled to write anything I just want to know the areas I should practice more at.

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o0Leanna0o In reply to o0Leanna0o [2013-10-06 12:52:29 +0000 UTC]

and the gyarados!!! haha! funny detail...!! xD

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Blak-Foxx [2013-08-23 23:46:50 +0000 UTC]

YouΒ SHOULDΒ be proud :3

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Eevee-Artist [2012-04-23 19:21:11 +0000 UTC]

I absolutelty LOVE the Magikarp!!! It looks very realistic, but I think that more work needs to be done on the Gyarados, as they stand out a lot at the moment, and distract people from the FANTASTIC Magikarp. Also, I think that the Magikarp should be blended into the background a bit more. Keep up the good artwork!

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JakePColeman In reply to Eevee-Artist [2012-04-24 18:22:52 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I'll see what I can do about blending the magikarp further into the background and will also be working on the gyarados.
Thanks for the compliments and advice

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Musion [2012-04-23 00:33:13 +0000 UTC]

better to leave out the gyrados I would think. Or show him blending in more with the darkness.

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JakePColeman In reply to Musion [2012-04-24 18:21:18 +0000 UTC]

okay, I'll will try that and see how it comes out

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pikachuafwc [2012-04-22 22:36:07 +0000 UTC]

cool! great drawing, and yeah I agree more detail on the gyrados.

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JakePColeman In reply to pikachuafwc [2012-04-24 18:20:47 +0000 UTC]

okay, thanks

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pikachuafwc In reply to JakePColeman [2012-04-24 18:25:47 +0000 UTC]

np

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Tsuki64 [2012-04-22 20:38:49 +0000 UTC]

First of all I really like the colors used in this. They're nice muted tones that give off more of a realistic and natural vibe than the bright colors used in-game.
The Gyarados in the background looks rather flat compared to the Magikarp, but I suppose that's okay considering it's not the focus of the picture.
All in all I like this. :>

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JakePColeman In reply to Tsuki64 [2012-04-22 20:42:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks , I'll keep this in mind for my future pictures and I will get onto fixing up the gyarados soon.
I really appreciate that you have taken your time to help me

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