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jalentorn In reply to Tux0r [2005-09-05 20:34:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks friend Tux0r

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jalentorn In reply to soloact-the-bard [2005-09-05 14:41:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your nice words. The poem is written in Spanish.

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soloact-the-bard In reply to jalentorn [2005-09-05 21:28:42 +0000 UTC]

I see, I'm monolingual. I guess I could have my neighbor come over and read it to me.

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jalentorn In reply to soloact-the-bard [2005-09-05 22:33:23 +0000 UTC]

If somebody translates it to you and you like it, you will already tell it to me.
Greetings.

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soloact-the-bard In reply to jalentorn [2005-09-06 02:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Durn, he was over here, but we were working, so I didn't get a chance to have him translate. You'll just have to make an English version
If you want to

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jalentorn In reply to soloact-the-bard [2005-09-06 05:33:04 +0000 UTC]

LLUMBLAU

As a clear-dark one
fué him ours.
And now,
that I am already on
I want to pass balance,
LlumBlau.

Between the dawn and the day
we were owners,
of yearnings
and impossible dreams,
all them beautiful,
LlumBlau.

Light and shades
they accompanied us.
And the time,
that judge to which deceived,
resentful it betrayed us,
LlumBlau.

The sun will conquer at night
when?, I am not sure
maybe tomorrow
or in the future.
And we are again,
LlumBlau.

Josep M. Alentorn
April 2005

Not you if it is a very precise or understandable translation. It is the one that has given me my translator.

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soloact-the-bard In reply to jalentorn [2005-09-06 05:38:47 +0000 UTC]

I understand, it's nice, thank you

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jalentorn In reply to soloact-the-bard [2005-09-06 10:50:40 +0000 UTC]

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jalentorn In reply to Jan-Oscar [2005-09-04 20:14:54 +0000 UTC]

LlumBlau is an invented Catalan word and incorrect. But the meaning that I wanted to give him was exactly the one that your you have written.
Thanks again for your nice words.

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