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Published: 2017-06-30 17:48:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 223; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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So i redesigned dis nerd animegamergirl13.deviantart.co… (btw she can still do the things with her eyes :v) i gave her a name its furball :3 she small she salty and sassy uvu tell me what ya think u3uRelated content
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I'm from and I'd like to critique this drawing!
First, I like how the character has a very straight pose and overall good anatomy. The character has a cute design (I love the sweatshirt!) and the hair is nicely drawn. The bangs of her hair look to be clean and composed. The only bad thing I have to say about the hair is that on the left of her hair, it looks as though it was more quickly drawn than the rest. Still, overall, I do like the hair/. The lines, however, are a little messy. Some lines aren't entirely erased so it doesn't look very neat. The hood of the hoodie also lacks depth; for an explanation of what I mean, it would be good to look at a reference (scene7.zumiez.com/is/image/zum… ) of an actual hoodie. In your drawing, it seems as if they are floating rather than resting on her shoulder.
It may be your style, but I would like to point out a few anatomical errors I've noticed. The neck is too skinny for her body, the head is too big (and the width is larger than usual) and the shoulders are uneven. Besides this, the legs, arms, and torso look anatomically correct.
Good drawing! Keep practicing <3
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thank you for the critique i will work on the lines! thank you for your help!
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nice job on the shading actually! Looks great! ^^
Love the name too. ^^
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