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Published: 2013-06-24 10:37:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1215; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 6
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Description Automaton Kuanos

heyo guys critiques and constructive feedback are highly appreciated.
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Credits:
Extraction Images: [~urbatman ]
C4ds/sparkles: [~MrRoBiN ] & [~Platinification ]
Original Artist: all credits
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Comments: 4

WarrenNeverminds [2013-06-29 07:43:24 +0000 UTC]

i think the focal needs a bit sharpening i think? :/
other than that, i love the text, the atmo, and that depth
you are a real PRO with C4D works bro, Keep at it.
wanna know where those exact c4ds came from bro?
would really love the use that also. thanks. thanks!

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akirasakura531 [2013-06-25 04:34:48 +0000 UTC]

i love the depth that you put in this edit !! Great work I love it !!

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PowerFeud [2013-06-24 12:13:12 +0000 UTC]

It looks great, xpJames. I like the depth in this one. Everything else is also pretty well done overall.

One thing I've noticed about your signatures lately is that they always have this bright white light source in them. Unless something really calls for a whiter light source, I'd say that this is more distracting in the signature than anything. Not only that, but it doesn't look very natural majority of the time. Try experimenting with different colors for your light sources...they help bring out the colors a little more and also help everything blend together much better as a whole.

For example, with this signature you could have used a light blue or light teal color above your render's head, so she would blend into the lighting around her much more. It would have added a slightly blue-ish (or teal) tint to her hair/head, which would have been much better for the blending. The light source is also a tad too strong, and should be toned down, or else it will be distracting more than anything; and you don't really want anything to distract from the focal.

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JamesxpGFX In reply to PowerFeud [2013-06-24 13:04:58 +0000 UTC]

great, great criticism, gave me an Idea, thank you Feud ! !

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