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jamminwolfie — Nice View After Hot Date
Published: 2011-11-24 15:52:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 15927; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 642
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Click for 1024 pxl view, download for fullAn image I did before all my hard drive troubles started...
This is a nice view any man would like after a hot date, would you not agree??
...wolfie
Credits
Mala by Godin (though I didn't do her too much justice, the render's too far anyways, she's a Renderosity Prime and well worth it, but the surface needs some attention in DS)
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Sexy Top III [link] Don't really like what DS4's AutoFit did to it though.
Tights came from the Aven bundle [link]
Freebie Sensible shoes originally by Headkase, redone for Genesis here [link]
Modern Home [link] though I really don't recommend close up renders, it's made for distance renders and is low quality. I used one of Stonemason's concrete textures on the walk/step.
Realistic Grass [link] Pretty high poly, couldn't use the whole ground without crashing, but I really like this set and will use it more when I get a more powerful computer. I used some clumps and rocks.
Ground used came from the Log Cabin [link]
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Comments: 31
Inviting and seductive ... she would have my attention ! Nicely done
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I do agree with the suggestion that the PoV should have been closer. I also believe that a solo spot on her face would have been a wothwhile addition to the scene. I realise that the fixed house lights cast a shadow and that you want that shadow overall, but when you go to the time and effort of making a subtle facial expression, then it's GOT to be visible. It may only have needed 25% intensity and no shadow (in Poser terms) but it think it would have been an enhancement.
Best of luck recovering the data.
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Thanks friend, explanation of the POV on reply to toadz. While the other ideas are great as well, this theme was what I was after. Understand about the face showing, but... no shadows? That would totally destroy the image quality/naturalism. You can't light up anything in the real world and have no shadows, so I refuse to do it in art.
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Thanks a lot, Dennis! 
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Hmmmm nice, Wolfie! I'd like to see her a bit closer up, frankly not so interested in the rest of the composition as I am in her
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LOL... she chose to go braless to tease the hell out of her date... 
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Awesome job! Other than what autofit did to the top, but that ain't your fault
And yes, this would definitely be a nice view after a hot date
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Oh yes, I agree 
I would have used a closer POV maybe, but I like the image, great job
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I gave an explanation as to why it wasn't close up (look up). And thanks a lot buddy!
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Very nice work, Wolfie!! Oh and happy Thanksgiving!!
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Thanks so much, buddy!
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Oopps, forgot to say as well. I cant beleive what auto fit did the the top! I love 3Dage products and sexy shirt is AWESOME! I used it in my last Poppy render and managed to get it too look like it was just hanging off her shoulders. It's a shame to see outofit messing up its look here! 3Dage for the win!
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Nice work dude, but I think you should have pulled the shot in a little tighter for this one, she seems to be getting a little lost in the rest of the scene. Maybe turn DOF on and then using the focal length to pull the shot in and creating a bit of blur in the background might of helped and given her a dreamy feel, considering what it looks like she is gesturing for
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Thanks, toadz
Texture on the house, which there were none lol, I was too lazy for that, but I did apply a texture on the walkway/foundation. This house didn't come with hardly any textures (another low quality issue there). But you're right, I needed a little bit of "dirty" texture for the sidings.
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I hear what you are saying about the close ups on characters, I know I am more than guilty of just taking the easy option and going for a zoomed in shot. Maybe next time you go for a shot in this style, try going for a landscape shot instead of a square one as square images don't sit well with the eye as we have a wider vision than we do tall, so square images can feel squashed together. That way you can focus in a little more on the character and still have alot of the background in. Plus you can have some fun with rules of third and the optical center of the image (which is not actualy just the center of the piece. The optical center is just slighty up and right of the dead center of the image. This is where subconciously your eye goes straight to when you look at an image. A trick often used in design is to have the most important element of a piece located here for the eye to hit straight away) kind of like I did here [link]
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You have a good point in which I wasn't thinking about (landscape), thanks for bringing that up, friend, a true artist critique indeed!
**clicks on your image** WOOHOO I like!
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No worries! Glad to be of service!
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Watch it bub, I was first in line...
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Thanks so much, ridgewood!
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Nice work! Love the little detail of the shirt wrinkling.
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