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'Aight.... page two. I'm trying to do more with Robin's facial expressions and I hope to do better later. That mask can be pretty hard to work with, but much like the Puppet King I want to do more with the character. If y'all were wondering if I was a Starfire x Robi fan, I kinda of am as they are pretty cute together, but more or less I'm doing the pairing like I see in the show, so theres the answer to your question. The next page starts to explain why and how the Puppet King pulled off what he did. I mentioned Terra also because she did give them one of the biggest betrayals in the show and I can imagine that the Titans are a little more hurt by it than they show in the show. It would be hard to move on from something like that and I want to go into this a little more. I havent even started to think about how badly it hurt Beast Boy. Maybe I will later, but I have to get into why they Titans may not trust anyone from anoter team (especially if they may turn their colors in the future). They seem like gullable teens anyhow, so the Puppet King thing is totally believeable. Let me know what you think! I like my editing better now that I actually have time. How do you like it?Check Out:
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Robin, Starfire, and Terra (c) DC Comics
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*is at edge of seat* I'm feeling interested...
Your editing is also good, and I can't wait for the next page!
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Let me make the wait sooo much worse for you. Its an action scene. Thank you for the kind words!
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Hey, it's no biggie. This was and still is one of my favorite shows, and I dearly love all the Titans, especially Starfire who is just so gosh-darn cute!
As for her dialogue, most of it is perfectly fine, just remove the contractions and make them the full words instead. Starfire seems to have a thing for using words that are maybe a little more dramatic then the situation calls for, or using older words, rather than more modern ones. Only thing is, based off the show, it's hard to say if she wouldn't have picked up more habits like using contractions or words like 'sure' instead of 'certain'. All the same, I can hear her voice when I am reading what you've written, and that's the most important part. I'm not distracted by the words to the extent that I think it's out of character.
- I know that it has been hard for you, but you cannot spend all of your time like this.
- Yes but you have been in here for many days now. We miss our dear friend.
- I am not certain myself.
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Aha. Welp, I won't edit it since its so small, but I certainly wont make that mistake again. For this, I will still site you. I read it a few times and I thought it was a bit off, but reading waht you edited as its much more her. I'm super glad that you like my comic so much. Seriously, I want it to be something the fans of the show can like as a supplement to the shorts now. I've gotten to really like the show as of late and I think its a shame the show was cancelled. I hear it might resurface in 2013, but until then you guys have this story. Keeping as faithful to the original is my goal whilst adding more to the story. Thanks so much for taking your time to help me out in this friend 
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The art, as always, is awesome. It's got that sort of grainy flash back quality that gives it almost a noire feel. It sets the mood very well and I love it!
The only real thing I would point out would be that Starfire never really used contractions. Beyond that, the characterizations are spot on and stick to how they are in the television show.
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Dude, I can't agree with you more about the Starfire thing. Actually, I really need someone to help me out with her dialogue. I know how she sounds but man am I having trouble with actually doing it myself. What whould she have said and I can change it and I will certainly site you for helping me with it. I really want it spot on.... er.
Thanks so much for the words my friend. I love it when I get constrictive feedback. I know I'm taking it to a new level by making it a bit darker than the original, but the main thing I want to set is that its as close as possible to the show. I hope that you stick around friend, I would really appreciae it!
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