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janusgatekeeper In reply to DarwinsDomain [2016-09-25 12:05:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you <3

There's a link in the journal entry on my page. Click the image and it will take you to it. It's m/m though.

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DarwinsDomain In reply to janusgatekeeper [2016-09-25 13:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I read quite a bit of it yesterday actually. Your art is lovely, the Yaoi is tastefully handled.  It got a little exposition heavy in the area where I stopped.  Yet I'm not sure how else the information might have been handled with the world you've established - and the amount of time that has elapsed. 

I will probably try to get caught up here in the next few days. 

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janusgatekeeper In reply to DarwinsDomain [2016-09-25 13:32:39 +0000 UTC]

I have a lot of story to get through so unfortunately there's a bit of exposition. It's the first comic i've ever done so I'm learning as I go. I'm glad you enjoyed it though.  Thanks for the feedback!

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DarwinsDomain In reply to janusgatekeeper [2016-09-25 13:34:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.  Comicking is hard...  LOL I've been working on mine for 10 years and am still learning new things...

Yeah but definitely be careful not to get too exposition thick... it can turn readers off...   One thing I had to fix about early chapters.

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janusgatekeeper In reply to DarwinsDomain [2016-09-25 13:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Can I ask which part it was that you stopped at so I know?

10 years is a long time lol, hopefully i'm not still working on the same thing when I reach that long, haha.

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DarwinsDomain In reply to janusgatekeeper [2016-09-25 13:44:39 +0000 UTC]

hmmm... Let me find the page... webcomicarcadia.tumblr.com/pos… This is where I stopped - the exposition was more with the Lord and the human than this area...

Oh... the other thing I noticed... your sound/action FX?  There are instances where what is happening is clear without the additional "glare" "step" etc...    Something to consider - letting your art speak for your action... I think  you're good enough with your implied action that the FX aren't necessary.

Well, my comic(s) are based on full length novels I write, so there is a lot of material going on there!

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janusgatekeeper In reply to Dizzy-Possum [2016-09-25 12:05:53 +0000 UTC]

THANK. 

He's the prettiest bitch lol.

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Dizzy-Possum In reply to janusgatekeeper [2016-09-25 13:12:04 +0000 UTC]

This evil guy I admit he is pretty XD

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