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Description Ok, here is page 2.

This is a fan comic featuring Marvel's Deadpool.

I narrowed down the size of the page I drew on.
The last page took 4 scan to put toghther.
This only took 2. I also like the slimmer look to this page.

With panel one I did an under drawing with a 4h pencil then I went over it wtih a 6b pencil. I seem to have pressed down a bit to hard when I did the under drawing and scored the paper. So te 6b lines are a bit choppy.

So for the rest of teh pages I didnt do under drawings.
I just did a light sketched then went over the lines I liked.

Panel 2 was drawn witha 2hb pencil. Panels 3, & 4 where done with 4b.

I think 4 b is now my fa lead hardness.

I cleaned this pictures line art up by first adjusting the brightness and contrast of the picture.
Next I desaturating it's colors. Copyed the entire picture to another layer, and used the artistic cuts option.
The cut's option takes out small details so I cant use that layer as is. I put that layer over the original, and made gave it 50% opacity. That way it will mask small stray lines while still leaving some detail for me to work with.
Then I digitaly white out the picture.

I also make the borders of the pages using the line tool.


With the women I choose characters that fans could ID with ease. suggested Storm, and that worked out well.
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Comments: 28

crazydude2344 [2011-01-31 04:51:25 +0000 UTC]

This is very Deadpool of Deadpool.

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ToadslyQuinne [2009-07-03 16:57:09 +0000 UTC]

This is a beautiful comic page. Every character is perfectly rendered (I see you behind Lockheed, Kitty!) and the perspectives are spot on. Great movement on DP, too- the leaves blowing in as he bursts through the entryway are an excellent touch. Really great job!

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Sweet-Nymph [2009-05-21 21:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Last panel is absolutely perfect!

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jaredjlee In reply to Sweet-Nymph [2009-05-22 06:41:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!
Thinking about it cracked me up.

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DraggoonX12 [2009-02-26 04:44:50 +0000 UTC]

LMAO!!! You rule!

You have captured Deadpool's humor!

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TeiOuja [2009-01-27 00:53:16 +0000 UTC]

Screamer "You're worse than the jointrons." Deadpool "Shut up!"

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ChaosLizard-44 [2009-01-17 04:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Deadpool:Weasel! I Got some tacos. Tacos rule.
DP:Weasel? now where did he go? mmore tacos for me.
DP:wait what it that?!
DP: that better then tacos

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jaredjlee In reply to ChaosLizard-44 [2009-01-17 11:20:17 +0000 UTC]

Good one!

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ChaosLizard-44 In reply to jaredjlee [2009-01-17 15:31:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah i'm starting to turn into deadpool after thanking like him

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Fatalist555 [2008-08-18 23:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Haha, so typical DP. Lurv this comic so far... your art fits DP perfectly!

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jaredjlee In reply to Fatalist555 [2008-09-26 06:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!
I've seen a lot of Deadpool art( I really liked Joe Mad's Deadpool fromt he Circle Chase story).I just choose the things from artist I like and added them to my Deadpool.
Thanks again for the great comment!

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Marsonite [2008-07-29 17:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Ha - I noticed Wolverine. Ha ha. Sexy girls. Even Marrow looks ...kinda hot...in her own way...
But who's the chick on the left? Is it Psylocke? Is it Shadowcat? I must know!

Deadpool seems like pretty funny guy. I once read Ryan Reynolds was set to play him in a movie. How do you feel about that?

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zippymax In reply to Marsonite [2009-10-09 14:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Marrow's not THAT physically ugly! (Unfortunately her personality is ugly enough to compensate for ANY kind of physical attractivness...)

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Marsonite In reply to zippymax [2009-10-12 14:47:13 +0000 UTC]

I acually kinda like Marrow's personality. Sure she's prickly and mean, but she has her moments. And no, you're right, she's not too bad-looking...

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zippymax In reply to Marsonite [2009-10-12 15:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I should have specified, you see, when I first saw Marrow, my only problem with her was how ruthless she was, but after she got a "make-over" in one issue, I was shocked at how happy and gentle she appeared to be! that was all it took to make her nicer?! a more stable version of her mutant power combined with a new look?! Marrow didn't need that! even Colossus thought she was looked fine! he drew pictures that proved it!

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jaredjlee In reply to Marsonite [2008-07-31 16:00:20 +0000 UTC]

It's Shadowcat. I put Lockheed, and the pony tail on her so you can spot her. That look I put on her face doesn't help.

I haven't heard from Psylocke in a while. I thought that she died a while back?

Ryan Reynolds is in good shape, he's Canaidan, he knows the character. I think he can pull the character off.

In CAble & Deadpool, Deadpool descibed his face as a cross between Ryan Reynolds, and a sharpei.

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BenSoulstone [2008-06-27 21:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome! Hehe. I'm glad my suggestion helped out, my friend. And yeah, I don't blame Deadpool. I'd do the same. XD

Fave!

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Jin-Saotome [2008-06-27 19:58:48 +0000 UTC]

YES! LAMO!!!

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Jin-Saotome In reply to Jin-Saotome [2008-06-27 19:59:12 +0000 UTC]

Wait, LAMA! Hmmm no... L..M..A..O! Ah, got it right.

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wbd [2008-06-27 19:15:57 +0000 UTC]

Again, nice work! I like your composition- everything on the page flows nicely, and it's easy for me to follow the story with or without text. The motion in the last panel is really well-conveyed, too.

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RMan021 [2008-06-27 17:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Hee. That last panel is so Deadpool.

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sagatt [2008-06-27 16:42:48 +0000 UTC]

hummmm? did the guy run ?...in light speed...he has something to do with flash , lol

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jaredjlee In reply to sagatt [2008-06-27 18:13:51 +0000 UTC]

He moves like that in the Marvel Ultimate Alliance video game, and X-men Legends 2 game.
Heh, I just thought it would be funny .

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sagatt In reply to jaredjlee [2008-06-27 23:01:40 +0000 UTC]

yeah it was funny ...but who is he exactly...? the deadpool guy ?

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Saqism [2008-06-27 13:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Even without his Little Yellow Boxes and Yellow Speach Bubbles, the ol' Merc with a Mouth says so much. How many of these do you plan on doing? I love 'em!

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jaredjlee In reply to Saqism [2008-06-27 15:15:27 +0000 UTC]

It could be 3 moe ,or 10 more; I dont know.
I'm just going to go until I finish the story.
I already know how I want it to end.
I just need to think of a clear path to it without giving away the ending.

Next I need to think of how Deadpool & Domino are going to meet.

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Saqism In reply to jaredjlee [2008-06-27 16:48:05 +0000 UTC]

I have an idea, if you're open to suggestions.

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jaredjlee In reply to Saqism [2008-06-27 18:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Lay it on me.

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