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Published: 2012-08-23 19:24:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Nice boobs Sybilmore practice
also trying to flesh out her design better
this is what is under her skirts and such
Sybil(c)Me
REALLY MISS HAVING A SCANNER
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I am being a pensive man right now....
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Perhaps... I do see a few issues with the proportions here. They're there, but you have the talent to fix zhem.
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is it alright if I state it?
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The biggest issues I see are the arms and legs.... Her legs are, in that pic, from the bottom of her sole to her hip joint, roughly the size of her torso, maybe a bit longer; in most women (and I'm going from an average anatomical way here) their legs are longer than their heads and torsos, from joint to sole. I don't know the exact difference.... But from what I can tell, about half her calf and from her ankle down are above her head, assuming she isn't long-legged. Also, your torso itself could use a little work... Her hips seem to utterly disappear into her legs without any indication of her pelvic structure (in other words the thing that gives women dem curves in terms of being a pear shape and whatnot). If you want I can send you a pic of a respectfully anatomically-accurate sketch, the same model I used to draw Lunixiana. Granted, I know Sybil is of a full figure so I'm taking a lot of what I'm saying as for the "hourglass" base body, but it also seems to apply to the "pear" base body. Also (please don't hate me for reaming it) her left breast looks a little.... Funky. Humans are by no means symmetrical, but we're usually similar enough that women VERY VERY RARELY have breasts of differing sizes. Now to move from legs, hips, and bewbs to her arms... I can see how you're trying to cross her arms behind her back, but with the way you have her torso and such drawn her arms look like they'd be super-long, and they just seem to poof behind her back... I try to draw through to avoid it.
And one final note about her pelvis/hips; don't take my word for it because I'm still a noob with female bodies; a lot of the times the hips SEEM to flow into the thighs, but they often have a curve of their own that gets overlooked.
Please don't hate me, love.
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Oh and, something I learned a while ago was that the breast that's over the heart, is the one that's slightly bigger (because boobs are hardly ever perfectly symetrical, but the difference not usually THAT noticable OTL)
But looking at the picture, it's her right breast that's bigger asdf
which is actually plausible, because my right boob is bigger than my left (and I realize this because it's my body asdf)
but I usually like to draw boobs as symmetrical as possible. So I kind of bungled it OTL
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I know THAT.... I just meant that it's so freakin' rare for the size difference to be as noticeable as it is in this pic. The size difference is often pretty minimal; to MY knowledge, it usually differs by the number by a few integers but it's usually a congenital defect if someone has one C-cup and one A-cup breast. XD but don't worry, I see what you mean. I tend to make them pseudo-symmetrical due to aesthetic purposes. (blame the artists I've studied)
And you're right. But what I mean is that it's usually not THAT noticeable, as you said. XD breasts, like someone's face and legs, are hardly ever on a symmetrical plane.
I know what you mean OTL
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Well, I'm sure there is cases where the cup sizes get all weird but yeah.
Yeah. It just looks better when they are.
Nope. Symmetry is for pussies anyway //shot
Still. I know the sizes are weird but I'm a little proud of their shape. sorta. I used to draw them really weird kgjlhdfkghkfjghkljh.
Pro tip with boobies: Breasts, not balloons kfjhkjdfhkdjf
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Pretty much. And like I said... It's rare that anyone but the owner of the breasts notices a non-massive size difference.
//takes the bullet
Precisely. I used to draw balloon boobs... Now I draw actual BEWBS.
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yep. o3o
fghkdjhkfjgh /revives
ME TOO
HOORAY
and Sybil's will be fun to draw. yes.
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DON'T SAY GLUB GLUB.... MENTAL IMAGES OF MARKUS SHAHKRIS KILLING HOMESTUCK TROLLS.... XD
hehe
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why would I hate you
I keep saying I need this kind of thing, how the fuck else am I going to improve?
thank you, by the way. I appreciate it.
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I know, I'm just used to people who get feelinghurt over my critiques....
I'm taking anatomy... I might sketch up an anterior diagram of both genders.
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For the longest time I've asked for people to pick apart my work and tell me how I can improve and they just ignore me
I LOVE getting critiques.
That would be extremely useful OuO
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I see. I try to be constructive... Only issue is I hold everyone to the same standard, with a few exceptions OTL
I'm working on getting there. XD
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So please DO NOT HATE ME FOR THAT!.
Hehe
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Pffft I don't hate you
ouo
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*superduperhug* I try to hold people to the highest standards of their talent...
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So yes. Critiques from me shred your work apart.... But it's because I KNOW you have the talent to do better.
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I want you to nitpick.
Again, how else would I learn?
So yes, exactly. Yes good.
You're never a butt about it so don't apologize when you critique me! o3o
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