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They are actually looking for the Exit to the dam graveyard they were in from the start.Videl Groaned and snapped her fingers. Herself Aya Luna, and nick where returned to normal. “What just happened?” Luna asked in an adorable voice. Videl came over and patted her on the head. “Some dumb person just decided to confuse you, don’t worry about it.” She said softly. “Wait back on subject where the exit is?” Nick chimes in.”It should be that way” she says unhappily floating down the path. “Let’s go!” Luna says and skips down the Path videl was originally leading them down. They follow, totally disregarding the cloaked dead body lying on the ground.
After about 15 minutes of walking and backtracking in the dark they eventually find the exit. “Let’s Get out of here” Videl says floating away. “Wait!! Ledza, I left her!” Aya yelps and dashes back into the Graveyard. “Ugh, she dog” Videl Whispers under her breath and floats after her. Luna and Nick follow closely behind. “Hey, Videl you said you were related to us right? Then who are you a Demon?” nick asks in a very serious tone. “Well I… i… I I do know but it’s really complicated, do you REALLY want me to tell you?” “Yes” both nick and Luna reply in unison. “Well basically it is Demons die sometimes, and when they do they need someone to replace them. But the person who replaces them is someone who shows all but none of the sin they represent. I was just really unlucky and got stuck as a Demon of Envy.” Videl explains, a hint of sadness in her voice.
They find Aya cradling Ledza in her arms. They lead her back to the orphanage where they live. They wander in, seeing lots of children sitting on the floor. Most of them are much younger than themselves. “Ah hello, your back! Oh and who is this?” says a woman with short brown hair and a caring face. “Wisteria! Yes we are back” Aya says startled by the appearance of this woman. “This is Videl she mphhh” Luna begins, then her brother coverd her mouth. “She is a friend of ours, we invited her to come stay with us for a while” he says, still holding his hand over Luna’s mouth. They walk up the stairs and to the left. Aya pushes the door open and ushers them all in. “Who was that?” videl Questions. “Her name is wisteria, she is the main carer at the orphanage. We often help her because we are older than all the other children.” Aya reply’s in a sombre tone. Videl turns to inspect the room. There is 3 beds in the normal sized room. There is 3 dressers near each bed, and a communal Wardrobe. The room lacks space for any more than that, as it houses 3 teen aged children. Luna flops onto the dark blue bed and Aya wanders over to the dresser next to the red bed, and ties up her long, Red hair. “Here Videl you can sit here!” Luna says as she bounces to one side of her bed and Gestures for Videl to sit on the other side. They all sit and wait for one of them to break the scilence. “Skeek, chirp chirp” she silence is broken by the little Squirrel like creature in Aya’s arms. “ahh Ledza! Yor awake!” aya coos as she strokes the little Flying Fox. Luna and nick also go and pat the little creature as well. “You really care about her don’t you?” Videl whispers as she sees the three of them laughing happily while stroking the little Squirrel like creature.
“Well of course!” they all chime in together. “That remind me of Akemi and how…
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Comments: 18
watashiwabakadesulol [2014-05-27 09:07:12 +0000 UTC]
I have a small feeling you are unhappy with what I did to the story ..... you basically pretended like it never happened BUT ITS CANNON!
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jasmines-eevee In reply to watashiwabakadesulol [2014-05-27 11:49:05 +0000 UTC]
yes I acknowledged it, then I gave up... how do you continue from that, the READER DIED!!!
I could not explain that in a logical even slightly story, I know it is cannon, but if I remember you did not even remember the characters names or where they where, ignoring some of the story too, and you knew that was all cannon~
I rest my case~ :3
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watashiwabakadesulol In reply to jasmines-eevee [2014-05-28 08:35:33 +0000 UTC]
okay I will try to make my next chapter logical ...... not
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jasmines-eevee In reply to watashiwabakadesulol [2014-05-28 08:43:01 +0000 UTC]
yeah it wont be
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jasmines-eevee [2014-05-26 10:10:04 +0000 UTC]
yeah I tried to bring it back to a more sane note, and I wrote It kind of quickly.
but I DID have to continue from Daniel
but basically I made it logical to a point, I tried to get them OUT OF THE GOD DAM GRAVEYARD, them since you killed their parents I made them live in an orphanage. they all share a small room. and because you tried to KILL my lovely little Ledza, I saved her. and ended it so you can make it feelsy, explain the demons more, or just plot twist it again... but I DID have to continue from Daniel
so you go next...
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AliceAbyss16 [2014-05-26 10:02:39 +0000 UTC]
lol wow damn that makes TOTAL sense I am kinda confused but it was really good
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jasmines-eevee In reply to AliceAbyss16 [2014-05-26 10:10:26 +0000 UTC]
yeah I tried to bring it back to a more sane note, and I wrote It kind of quickly.
but I DID have to continue from Daniel
but basically I made it logical to a point, I tried to get them OUT OF THE GOD DAM GRAVEYARD, them since you killed their parents I made them live in an orphanage. they all share a small room. and because you tried to KILL my lovely little Ledza, I saved her. and ended it so you can make it feelsy, explain the demons more, or just plot twist it again... but I DID have to continue from Daniel
so you go next...
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AliceAbyss16 In reply to jasmines-eevee [2014-05-26 10:21:08 +0000 UTC]
lol okay dw I will make some weird shit happen
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jasmines-eevee In reply to AliceAbyss16 [2014-05-26 10:25:09 +0000 UTC]
wow I actually believe you, that's the sad thing
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AliceAbyss16 In reply to jasmines-eevee [2014-05-26 10:26:49 +0000 UTC]
really? wait wat do u mean?
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jasmines-eevee In reply to AliceAbyss16 [2014-05-26 10:29:14 +0000 UTC]
I really don't know anymore, by brain hurts
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AliceAbyss16 In reply to jasmines-eevee [2014-05-26 10:35:17 +0000 UTC]
ohhh thats not good do try to relax
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jasmines-eevee In reply to AliceAbyss16 [2014-05-26 10:36:34 +0000 UTC]
Quack!!! D:
I take offence to this statement, even though i know you mean well by it
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AliceAbyss16 In reply to jasmines-eevee [2014-05-26 11:01:23 +0000 UTC]
how?? i am just tellin u to take a chill pill!! >.<
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jasmines-eevee In reply to AliceAbyss16 [2014-05-26 11:07:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I know... Im sorry
I had. Terrible week, and today was not the best either...
I am really sorry!!!!!
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AliceAbyss16 In reply to jasmines-eevee [2014-05-26 11:27:22 +0000 UTC]
nah don't sweat the small stuff, I hope u feel a bit better tomorrow though
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jasmines-eevee In reply to AliceAbyss16 [2014-05-26 11:34:04 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm thanks I guess... I hope too...
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