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My Little Pony - HasbroArt / Onyx - Me
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First I wanted to do a picture of him WITHOUT his hoodie to show his scars off. Also updated his eye color and all over color scheme as well as adding more detail to his mechanical leg. Also added a beard for extra adorableness. Dont question my logic just accept it.
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Cherry Berry gave a paper towel as the two ate together in relative silence...
Meanwhile, Blitzen was freaking out outside! "No... not now! She is my friend, and I need to stay! Hope's Asylum needs me!"
A Pegasus in Royal Guard Armor flew in and landed nearby, causing the Kirin's horn to stop glowing.
???: "I guess that spell Luna placed on you really did work! How are you, my little Private?" The Pegasus stallion asked, hugging the colt.
Blitzen: "Sargent Feather Fury sir! I... need to ask, if I may, why are you here on my vacation, sir?" he said with a salute.
Feather Fury: "I am here as last night, Rapi-Dash declared herself no longer the Guardian on the township, and BEGGED the Princesses to destroy it, and especially that Kelpie. I honestly have no idea about this place, but I know of the Kelpie,and her crimes.. why then do you live here with that.. MONSTER?"
Blitzen frowned, his C/O never showing that face and expression before.
"Sir, she may have been a monster, but she is my Auntie, by way of being a member of my family, even before Rapi. I ask you, please hear her out. Also.. Hope's Asylum, as a Guardian. I am he! I know I am still loyal to Luna, and Celestia, but I need to be here for my town as well. SIR!"
Feather Fury: "Let's talk later, I need to head back in a couple hours to report your side, but I smell food, and quite sure I saw an attractive Earth pony mare when I flew in!"
Blitzen guided him in, and introduced him the Cherry Berry, but he was focused on the other mare...
Sgt. Fury: "Hello! You look very beautiful Miss?
Blitzen growled, and charged up his electric reserves out of anger, but said her name. "Sir, she is Kit, Miss Kitistraza, sir! Please do not touch her, she is --"
Sgt. Fury: "Why she going to bite or..let me kiss the lovely--"
Blitzen had enough, and out of 'protection' of both his C/O and Kit, he attacked the stallion...
(oh no! Blitzen attacks his Sargent! This is not good! What shall happen next?? Yes, Fury is a schmooze as well, though, as I hinted, Blitzen is trying to hide feelings for the mare too, this, just makes it obvious!")
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Kit: the mare stalk over to him and slammed a hoof on to the guards chest and he feels the same draining sensation but on a larger scale as kit forcibly drains him of his emotions. She pulls back leaving him light headed "THAT'S why you dont touch me."
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Blitzen: "I am sorry Sir.. but you need to leave her alone! Please! I cannot explain..."
Cherry Berry.. "Um, he was asking rude, but may I get a ride back home now? I am finished"
Blitzen: "Sure, that HippoGriff and his friend will take you back via chariot. Please visit soon, and we'll fix you balloon soon!"
Sgt. Fury: "Miss Kitty or whatever.. I apologize.. and just my luck I get a bad ass mare to try and put the moves on.. OW! Private, come with me really quick, ALONE!"
Blitzen was afraid, but Kit smiled at him, and continued to eat.
In a nearby room, the two talked.
Sgt. Fury: "You like her? I am sorry Blitzy, I thought, well.. what about Swe--"
Blitzen: "It's a long story.. Her sister and I didn't get along after our second talks, and her parents were worried. That said, I care for her as ever. I shall always love her, but, just not how I wanted to sir!"
Sgt. Fury: " Ok, I am sorry, reminds me of the librarian and I.. although I messed that up! I didn't know she'd be a Princess!"
Blitzen: "Well, apologize to her and do NOT tell her. I want to be friends, and if she is anything like... her.. I want us to be friends before anything happens... Please Sir!"
Sgt. Fury smiled. "I am not on duty now.. Go for it, I shall apologize, you get ready for your ceremony." he said as he exited and turned to Kit.
"Ma'am I am sorry, and I don't expect forgiveness, but I am here for Blitzen... I apologize, by my honor"
Blitzen trotted up to another room to find his award jacket, and dress uniforms, and got ready for the ceremony...
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Kit: Her eyes follow Fury intently "Hmph. Your lucky Im to lazy to tear your heart out right now but." SHe grabs him by the collar and pulls his face within an inch of hers and snarls "Try to flirt with me again I will make sure you cant walk ever again." she lets him go.
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Feather Fury's wings gave the story away he was.. interested, to say the least, but, being a profession, he nodded, and walked outside "Damn wings have a mind of their own!" he said outside.
Blitzen came down wearing a Navy blue, military pressed uniform, with three rows of awards, and a few insignia that made no sense on his front legs, and a rubber set of slacks, on his rear.
Blitzen: "Do, I.. look ok? I made sure this was pressed to military code, and I know the rubber pants are.. form-fitting, but I tend to get... staticy when I wear the uniform.. so, don't touch me, unless you want to be shocked. I cannot control static as well as other electricity!"
He smiled at the mare, and offered a hoof in escort. "I shan't touch you, but, may I have you join me on this wonderful day?"
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Kit: The mare stares at him takes one medal off shines it and puts it back "Thats better. It had a smudge."
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Blitzen smiled: "Thank you, let's go. Sgt. Fury will be escorting us down there, and I shall talk with Kellie a bit, you may stay near my side if you like, but just know there are so odd Dragon chants I have to say. Don't worry, it is nothing bad!"
Blitzen escorted his mare friend, and his Sargent followed behind walking through town the the center podium.
Kellie: "You are early, but let us get ready. Kit, please stay as close of far as you'd like, the only thing Blitzy MIGHT do that is harmful is charge his electricity in happiness, but don't worry, he controls it well."
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Kit: "Dont worry my jackets fireproof. One of my selves spontaneously combusts."
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Kellie giggled. "That is good I suppose! Now... Blitzen, please repeat these words, and I shall correct you if need be."
Blitzen practice his lines, but was distracted by the mare near him. Kellie noticed, and suggested a few ways to memorize the words, and she left to prepare the rest of the items needed.
Blitzen: "Just twenty minute, and everypony will be here, listening to a colt, take over a town..." he said nervously
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Kit: THe mare looks at him and tilts her head as if examining something he cant see. "I can make this easier for you. Tell me is it the crowd that bothers you?"
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Blitzen: "The crowd doesn't bother me.. well, a lil. It is.. I am not ready for this. This was always supposed to be given to me, once I married, and found a mare of my own. Now, I am twelve and simply have to balance being a Guard, AND a Guardian as well! I am so stressed and scared I'll... screw up!"
The kirin tried his best, but the tears flowed, and harden into the tearstones... very ashamed to admit his fears, to a mare, he (not so secretly) had a crush on...
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Kit: The mare slaps him and grabs him by the collar "GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF MAN!" She slaps him again "I KNOW YOU CAN DO THIS NOW GET OUT THERE AND MAKE ME PROUD DAMMIT!"
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Blitzen: "You didn't need to hit me silly! But.. thank you. if I could hug you, well, I wouldn't.. because it would offend."
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Blitzen walked and delivered the initial speech to everypony gathered, and while he was nervous doing the oath, Kit smiled at him, and he was able to do so!
Blitzen: "Thank you so much Kit! You really helped me, and.. I really.. like you... um. I am sorry. That came out, but. I wish to be friends with you still...!"
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Kit: "Sounds good because you wont be getting rid of me anytime soon."
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Blitzen: "I am so happy! Look, I am going to go to Canterlot, very soon, after this ceremony, and you are welcome to come, but Canterlot is..iffy..
If you prefer you may stay at my place, do as much art as you can, and maybe I can send my favorite visitors, if you'd like!"
Blitzen smiled, and winked at his friend. "Let's go mingle a bit, don't worry, I think everypony will leave you alone!"
Some distance a way, a certain Changeling watched everything. "She will be exposed I swear it!" Subterfuge swore to herself!
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Kit: She blushes "I dotn think I could talk your place while your gone im bad with taking charge...you see im actually very shy..."
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Blitzen: "I don't expect you to. All I ask, is if somepony comes to my house, place their request down, my Guards will do the rest. You, just live here, and if you need company, they will be near, you need anything, they can get it.
I want you to be comfortable here, but, if ever you wish to leave, feel free, but as Guardian, I would love it if you stayed!" Blitzen smiled as his Sargent approached, weary of the mare.
Sgt Fury: "I am heading back to Canterlot... please report what happened to the Princess tomorrow when you get back. Don't worry ma'am, he can run from here to Canterlot in about 20 minutes! He shouldn't be too long!"
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Kit: She kicks at the dirt absently "Oh okay...ill do my best."
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Blitzen carefully approached the mare. "I don't have to go until tomorrow, and the Guards will handle most questions asked. That said, before I go, is there.. anything you'd like to do?"
Blitzen was smiling. He would miss the simple times of simply being in his home to relax, but now he had to help run it, but that didn't mean, he couldn't have a friend to help...
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Kit: She frowns as she studies you "You look stressed."
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Blitzen smiles still, but hides his worry away. "I am, but, you help me. You and some others do, believe it or not. I just.. want to be a colt.. but I can't."
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Kit: "THe thing is you can." She jumps to her hooves and shifts her weight from side to side "Just not when others like mr demandy pants is around."
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Blitzen smiles wide. "um, may you join me for some games, of some sort? I have really played much, but I would like to learn!"
Blitzen hovers lots of board games, a few Pony gaming systems, and a radio.
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Kit: "Sure it sounds like fun!"
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Blitzen set up a few games at the same time, and had read the rules. "Well, I like this property buying one, if you wish. Although I think I'll be careful with my money!"
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Blitzen: "Yes it is! Um, go easy on me, I never played this before, ok! I want to be a horse shoe!"
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it: "COuld I be the puppy then?"
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Blitzen: "Oh there is a doggie? Go for it! Ok roll the dice... what is income tax???"
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Kit: "Tax? Um...I dont know never played that way before."
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Blitzen reads the space. "200 bits or 15% of what we have. um, wait, I am not going the right way... I am supposed to go purple side first, not Blue!"
(Yes, I derped!!! 
Blitzen continued "Ok I get a card and.. Go directly.. to Jail..."
Blitzen sighed and slumped.. this was NOT starting to well...
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Kit: She rolls the dice and moves over a few spots "Youll get the hand og it soon enough and besides its only for one turn."
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Blitzen: "Ok, I shall wait.
His turn came out, and he managed to buy a few properties and get some luck, but still found himself not progressing, but not losing either.
Blitzen: "I am bad at this game.. huh???"
(bah, ignore the other reply.. that was the other rp! I am silly!)
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Kit: "No Im bad at this game."
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Blitzen smiled, both bought properties, but none had monopolies at all! This was very silly indeed!
"Well, we should be done soon, I mean these games don't last that long, right?"
Several fights and idle competitive threats later...
Blitzen: "I cannot play with you again! You cheated!!!"
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Kit: "A lady doesnt cheat! I simply uses a slight of hoof."
(What rp was someone bound on exposing Kit?)
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(the rp you are referring to.. is this one. Subterfuge is planning something very soon, don't worry!)
Blitzen: "You did cheat! I think I better go to bed.. Kit, please use the same room if you'd like.. I am staying here. I have to clean up some, but if you need me..."
Blitzen smiled. "You are always welcome here!"
Blitzen went to work scrubbed some pots and doing dishes he had neglected for a while...
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Kit: She yawns "I think Ima go to sleep if you dont mind" Without a care sh steals your bed and curls up under the blankets.
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Blitzen turns a blows a kiss to the mare quietly. He finishes up his pot cleaning, a goes upstairs to bed, but tasks two Guards to watch for anything suspicious.
Little did Blitzen notice both Guards looked different than before.
Guard one: "Good night Blitzen...forever!!!"
The guard snuck into Kit's bedroom, and turned into something that looked like Blitzen! It attacked the sleeping mare restraining her with an anti-magic feild exposing her identity!!!
Subterfuge: "I told you I'd get revenge and expose you! I may not be able to defeat a pony who can change to a dragon, but I can kill you now, and break the lil colt's heart! Oh, and don't scream, or 'lil Blitzy' gets it first!"
The other Guard, a Changeling as well, went to deal with the colt...
(Oh no! Don't worry, I leave it up to you, if you want to scream for help, attack her yourself, or have somepony else notice! Anyway is fine by me!!!)
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Kit: "MRPH!" SHe lashes out and catches the changeling full in the face with her rear hoof. She tries to get up and run but the forced change leaves her dazed and she fails the first few times since the ground keeps slipping from under her hole ridden hooves "BLTIZEN?! ANYONE HELP?!" She doesnt make it far before she falls again cursing violently "WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME?!"
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Blitzen woke up hearing a scream, and a loud zap all at once. He usually slept with a small charge ready, should an alarm sound while Guarding, and while he was not guarding, old habits die hard, and as he woke, he felt somepony hit his horns hard, but get zapped in the process.
Blitzen: "How dare you! Subterfuge, if this is you, and you harm Miss Kit!!!" He warned, but the other Changeling jumped on him to attack. Sadly, Blitzen had dealt with them before, and stabbed the attacker in the carapace, cracking the creature open, and nearly killing it then.
Blitzen felt sick, he never had to see a body before, but he held it down, and ran down to rescue his friend and crush. However, her found a very scared true form Kit, and another Blitzen mocking her!
Blitzen: "STOP NOW! I am the Guardian of this asylum, you will NOT be warned again. You harmed my friend, the mare I like, and if you do ANYTHING more, I will see your death!"
The other Blitzen laughed, and pushed Kit into a desk using it to pin her. "You have no idea. Subterfuge is more than you know, and there are many reasons this.. 'mistake' should die! You have nothing to attack me with, Kit is soaked with water, and if you use your element, she will die as well, you will do nothing!"
Blitzen aimed his head away, and his horn instead blinked rapidly. "I shan't... Kit means more to me than you know Changeling. I have no quarrel with the Hive. YOU however, are not your Queen. For that, I shall not respect what I have to do next..."
(I'll leave on a cliffhanger for now...)
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Kit: The mare struggles to try and pull herself free and chokes as shes further pushed into the side of the desk. She tries to throw her weight at the other changeling to throw him off but only manages to get a quick gasp of air "JUST SHOOT HIM ALREADY! DONT WORRY ABOUT ME!" A moment later shes shoved back and starts to choke again and her struggling slowly gets weaker.
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Blitzen stands there ready to shoot, but backs off, worrying about the mare, but knows this will end soon if her does nothing.
Changeling: "You are weak! and she shall die! Anything you wish to tell her lover colt?"
Blitzen smirked. "I like you Kit... DUCK!"
Manny, the Manticore's tails broke through the nearby indow, and barely missed the trapped Kit, but hit the changeling square on. It collapsed and Kit snuck away with Blitzen helping her catch her breathe.
Blitzen: "Manny? Enjoy that somewhere else, please?"
Manny looked like he nodded, and dragged the paralyzed Changeling away, where it would most likely be devoured...
Blitzen: "I lied.. Manny DOES eat ponies.. if they harm the ponies I care about. I am so sorry. I couldn't protect you... I am. A. FAILURE!!!" Blitzen cried, sacred he nearly lost a friend's life, but more concerned he had to have something else protect her and NOT him. He was, after all, a lil colt.
Mimic arrived after seeing the Manticore in town. "Blitzen, we found two dead Guards and... what happened here??? Miss, please tell me!"
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Kit: SHe shutters and a ripple affect courses down her and she whimmpers in fear "I cant transform anymore." she starts to cry "What did they do to me?"
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Mimic comforted the Kirin...
Mimic: "Ma'am.. your hooves and horn, remove those bindings! They are stopping all your magic! Quickly before the other Guards come! I can only protect you two, if your secret remains a secret!"
Kit listened, and Blitzen whispered everything that happened. After Mimic checked upstairs, and dragged the Changeling down, Mimic was furious.
Mimic: "Go to the other room colt, and Miss. I.. don't want you to see what I am going to do to make this thing talk! That said Blitzen... is she... is she worth it?"
Blitzen blushed. "I say more than worth it, but let me go! You don't have to!"
Mimic: "The Hive would LOVE a Kirin Changeling! NO! You stay, Hope's Asylum needs you.. and if I die, so be it.. It has been an honor.. but I SHALL return, please DO NOT look!"
The Changeling screamed as Mimic did some sort of spell, and Blitzen showed Kit away.
"Please don't watch this...!"
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Kit: "Whats going on? I want to know."
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Blitzen starts to explain, but the screams tell the story. "Mimic, is torturing the Changeling.. we don't need to see it, but I have to stop him! Pleas stay!"
Blitzen hit Mimic to stop him from tearing the Changeling's body apart.
"We shall NOT torture! I don't care if you did this before. I saw my Auntie go to jail for this, you cannot go down this path! Please Mimic.. go to the Hive, have the Queen, whoever it is now, meet me. We shall discuss Subterfuge later!"
Mimic: "What about him...?"
Blitzen: "He goes with you willing, or Manny eats him, his choice...."
Blitzen felt bad giving this creature such few options, but he did attack the town that was neutral, nd as leader it was his job to make a decision like this.
"Mimic, send a Guard, the one you trust most, to Canterlot as quick as possible. Tell Captain Rouge we have been attacked, and I shall be delayed. If she has any questions, give her this." He give Mimic the wing of the Manticore attacked Changeling.
Blitzen turns, but sees Kit, back in her Earth Pony form. "I am sorry I couldn't protect you. But it seems, Subterfuge wants you dead. and I shall not have that happen!"
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Kit: "Why would he want me dead? What did I do?!"
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