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JCBrokenLight — PMD explorers of space [Part 1]
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Published: 2015-12-04 21:45:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 6692; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 0
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Note: This is a continuing of a comic I made if you want to know what's going on read it from the start hereAlso this is NOT a game, there is no choices or game play, it's just a story.
I finally did it guys!
I finished the first part of my first Visual Novel of my comic "Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Explorers of Space"!
It took me a lot of work and time so don't skip it too fast.
I hope you guys like it
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Part 2 --> Never.
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Aww, thanks for the kind words!
It makes me feel very motivated when people let me know that I inspired them.
I wish you good luck with achieving your dream :>
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Aww, thank you for your kind words! I'm happy that people are still enjoying the story c:
In my interpretation, Grovyles words from the special episode had left Dusknoir very thoughtful.
Dusknoir who had expected to stop existing, now had to find a purpose. Probably why he acted the way he did in this chapter even if it seems extremely unlikely of him. I personally dislike this set-up I created with the kind of pick and choose sacrifice scenario as it feels rather dumb.
Sadly I didn't have a good conclusion to his story, and the end result would be really disappointing D;
I like Dusknoir in particular because of how he evolves as a character.
Despite being a cartoonish sadistic villain his fear of not existing is a rational fear that one can relate to.
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Did you spent more time in this than in your own life?
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What are you trying to say?
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I don't work on this story anymore sorry! D;
R.I.P. Explorers of Space.
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You were doing it so well...
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Thank you. I just lost my passion D;
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it was awsome and sad at the same time
hope in the future near or far you will continue (even though you say never) but if not then fine
"lol"~ cweb
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Thank you~
I'll try to make something that quickly explains the rest of the story, I don't like leaving things unsolved, and then I'll most likely move on to other PMD related projects someday.
The story itself is sort of old and messy and I don't have the patience to polish it. I just feel like I'm getting too old to put this much work into imperfections like this.
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I just know it works on old fashioned computers with old fashioned flash player.
But you apple pros knows all the hacks on how to make things work on your odd devices, right? Why else would you have those things instead of a lovely computer that can run everything without problems?
I'm kidding~! I just hate phones-thingies, and I would never think of using them for something like this!
I really have no idea if it's possible to read it like that though.
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No link working,
So Nah I doubt
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There isn't supposed to be a link at all, so I don't know what planet you ended up on
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It says that in the thumbnail/preview image. There isn't any links. The flash is supposed play by itself.
Give up on it kid. Apple stuff can't run flash unless you do some magic voodoo shit with it. It's just how it's supposed to be :')
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I read this when I got a good internet connection since the connection of our internet is bad and I can't read it. The story is really great and I love stories told in visual novel-style and it is really sad that Melody has to sacrifice herself since she is really interesting and her species is one of my favorite Pokemon. I really like how you drew Dialga, his design is very complicated and I can't wait for the next one but take care of yourself, don't rush yourself and stay safe!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you for your concern~
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I just found this series yesterday and I have to say...Nice. You are an amazing artist and this comic some laughs,chuckles and maybe the tiniest amount of tears.
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OMG I'M FREAKING OUT RIGHT NOW
JC
YOU'RE AMAZING LIKE SERIOUSLY
This was just like watching a real PMD2 cutscene and you wrote everyone so well... it's people like you that keep the fandom alive! You're so talented and I'm so happy that I got to read this.
I really like this. I'll probably read it over and over, and I'm looking forward to the next part.
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Aww, that's really nice. Thank you! 
I'm glad that you appreciate my work~
Thanks for reading with such passion!
It may be a while until the next one is out though.
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...... I didn't read the comic first so I'm kind of confused and excited at the same time.
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omg that was awesome i loved it also i love this pmd comic
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Thanks~ Glad you enjoyed it
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This was so great!! I could tell this comic had a lot of thought put into it. I'm super curious to see what happens to the characters next! This is so good, keep up the good work!!
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it
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that was a amazing story! but im sad melody had to do this... but do keep up the good work!
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Well, Sparky was right in one thing. Melody really didn't have to die.
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Wow impresionante ... (aunque no entiendo todo muy bien... no tengo tanto conocimiento de ingles pero algo entendi)
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No not impressive.
(I don't do German 
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No te gusta lo que hiciste(?)... Bueno si no estas satisfecho algun tema te molesto uwu.
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Man.. you are just trying to bother me now...
Ihatewhenpeopledothat
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Yo no trato de molestarte, solo me llama la atencion que me dijeras que no es impresionante. Pero bueno ya te moleste. Lo siento.
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I know it's very terrible.
I wanted to rewrite the pages I just didn't find the time for it
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No, its fantastic! I was speechless! I did even know stuff like this was possible to create in Deviantart.
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.. wow.. don't be sarcastic... It's not fun.. I'm an adult.
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I wasn't tho... (Completely honest here, I like what was done here, and I think it is incredibly impressive to have something this complex on Deviantart, but I do prefer the comic style. Don't beat yourself up though!)
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All right if you are happy then that's fine.
I just could do so much better at this point in time that I feel embarrassed about it.
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(So sorry if I comment now,I lost the sense of the time!)
...I LIKE SO MUCH THIS!I see all the parts...very nice!I'm waiting the chapter 2!^-^
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don't worry about that It'll take me some time to make the next part so...
anyways thanks~ I'm glad you enjoyed it
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