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Description The two Turtles and Rainbooms vist Dimension X, to vist the Utroms and investigate the Kraang portals. There, they run into the 2003 Turtles friend, Mortu.

Mortu: I believe our friends have told you about our origin?

Leo: They have, Mortu.

Princess Twilight: And it was, shockingly interesting to say the least.

Sweetie Belle: So how was Ch'rell able make you ship crash on their earth?

Mortu: Ah, that is an excellent question, Sweetie Belle. And I assume that you all have the same question, yes?

Donnie: Well, now that you mention it, I would like to know myself.

Sci Twi: Yeah I’m curious about how you came to be in their dimension.

Princess Twilight: Same goes for me.

Fluttershy: I wouldn’t mind learning.

Rainbow Dash: Count me in.

Leo: Us too.

Raph: Only because I’m bored.

Applejack: Knowing is half the battle.

Pinkie Pie: Hope that’s not copyrighted.

Applebloom: We’re In as well.

Starlight Glimmer: How did Ch'rell cause your ship to crash into their world?

Mortu: Well you see, the dimensional teleporter had been damaged when we captured Ch'rell, but still functional. Although we had to go through each dimension one at a time in order to reach Dimension X. Which as you can assume, gave Ch'rell plenty of time to escape and destroy our ship. But as for how that happened, I think it would be best to show you. Follow me.

(They all follow him to a chamber room with a line of pods)

Raph: What are these supposed to be?

Mortu: These are Utrom Oracle Pods. Think of them as a virtual reality machine. They will allow you to experience the lives of our race.

Scootaloo: (speaks for herself and her friends) Yeah..., we've seen enough sci-fi movies to know that going onto an alien pod is never good idea!

Michelangelo: I thought so too. But don't worry, these pods are ligit.

Mortu: I assure you, Scootaloo, that these pods are completely harmless, despite being tampered with.

Rarity: Tampered with?

Leonardo: When we tried it out, our Baxter Stockman snuck into the TCRI building and tampered with it so the virtual reality was more realistic and really deadly.

Donatello: The Mortu in the simulation helped us get back only to see that Shredder had infiltrated the building. And you all know the rest from Pinkie. (To Mortu) Which I'm still baffled about how she could've guessed the whole incident.

Mortu: Our Professor Honeycutt fixed any bugs to make sure that would never happen again.

Sunset Shimmer: Doesn’t look like there are enough pods for everyone.

Master Splinter: We will stay behind to make sure nothing goes wrong.

Raphael: Yeah we don’t need to see what we already saw.

Michelangelo: But if it does, I highly recommend trying the sushi. (Raphael knocks him upside the head)

Mikey: Will do, Michelangelo. (Raph clonks him upside the head)

Splinter: I also have some very helpful advice. The world you enter will be an Illusion Within An Illusion. An Illusion Of The Mind. Control your minds, and you will control the Illusion.

Turtles and Rainbooms: Hai, sensi. (Although none of them had a clue to what he was talking about)

(They all enter the pods and the headgear attaches to them)

Apple Bloom: You sure this is safe?

Mortu: Absolutely. Prepare yourselves to share the history of our lives!

(The pods turn on, and group find themselves floating in a void of swirling lights, then their standing on a Utrom ship)

Leo: Where are we?

Donnie: Looks like we're on some kind of Utrom Star Ship.

Sci-Twi: But that would mean?

Pinkie Pie: We're in space again!

CMC: WOW! (They run to the window and gaze out in amazement)

Casey: Whoa! Deja vu!

Raph: Yeah, pretty much.

Scootaloo: Was it like this when you guys traveled in space?

Rainbow Dash: Pretty similar.

Starlight Glimmer: Time travel was one thing, but this is impressive! Kinda wish Sunburst was here to see this.

Sunset Shimmer: I’m sure we'll show him this someday.

Mikey: Guys, look. It's Mortu!

Mortu: You're blessing, Honoured Navagators?

(Everyone looks at three utroms floating in a purple tank.)

Navagator 1: Your course is straight and true...

Navagator 2: Through the vastness of space and time...

Nagagator 3: Captain, you have the blessings of...

All 3: The Navagators!

Scootaloo: Did they just speak off from each other?

Apple Bloom: Yeah.

Sweetie Belle: So weird!

(They notice everyone looking at the smugly)

CMC: What?

Turtles and Rainbooms: Nothing.

Princess Twilight: Looks like Mortu's the captain.

Fluttershy: Um excuse me, Mr. Mortu, But I was- (tries to touch Mortu but her hand falls through him and screams as she runs behind April)

Pinkie: (waves her hand couple times through Mortu then gasp) He’s a ghost!

Sci Twi: No! This is all a hologram, remember? He can’t see us. This is the past.

Fluttershy: I forgot.

Karai: I still find this creepy. (Waves her hand through Mortu)

Apple Bloom: It's like watchin' a movie!

Scootaloo: Or better yet, staring in a movie!

Sweetie Belle: I know! How awesome is that!

(The scene shifts and they find themselves face to face with another Utrom floating in a orange tank. He appears to be imprisoned)

Rainbow Dash: Who's that guy?

Utrom: These security procautions are pitiful! You will never hold me!

Mortu: We have finally captured you, after a hundred year's search! We're not about to lose the most ruthless criminal the universe has ever known!

Princess Twilight: That must be Ch'rell, this world's Shredder!

Raph: Kind of hard to believe he's the most dangerous guy in the room.

Ch'rell: (laughs at Mortu's words) I will escape! And you will all perish! That, is my promise!

Rainbow Dash: Big talk, little slim ball!

Mortu: Big talk, little slim ball!

Rainbow Dash: Ok, that was creepy.

(As Mortu leaves, Mikey and the CMC make faces at Ch'rell, then the scene shifts again)

Shini: Now what?

Donnie: Looks like their passing close to this world's Earth.

(As they watch, a horrible realization hits Starlight)

Starlight Glimmer: Wait? Guys! Remember what the other Turtles told us what Ch'rell did?!

Utrom: Captain! The prisoner has escaped!

Moru: (gasps) Security, report!

Utrom security: The prisoner is attacking! We are-(screams)

(Then the ship's power shuts down)

Navagator 1: Emergency! Power! Cut! Engines are offline!

Navagator 2: Our minds are going dark!

Navagator 3: Cell by cell! We are undone!

Mortu: Helm, you have control of the bridge! Security detail, with me! To the engine room!

(The scene shifts to the engine room)

Mortu: Be on guard! He is extremely dangerous!

Mikey: There he is!

(Ch'rell walks out with two sparking cables)

Ch'rell: (laughs) You were a fool to think you could hold me!

Rainbow Dash: He's gonna sabotage the ship!

Raph: Get him! (He, Rainbow Dash, and Casey leap at him, only to faze through him and crash in a heap)

Sci-Twi: What did I just finish explaining?!

Ch'rell: You see! I always keep my promises! Good bye, captain! (He crosses the cables together and ship begins to shake)

Mortu: Take cover!

Leo: Donnie? What's happening?

Donnie: Crossing those wires must have caused the engines to shortcircuit, overloading the-!

Raph: In english!

Donnie: The engines are gonna explode!

(Everyone runs out of the room and onto the bridge. The engines do just that and ship begins to plummet)

Mortu: Helmsman! (All the utrom crewmates scream and panic) Helm, set course for that uncauncharted planet!

(The ship falls to Earth)

Mortu: We are Utroms, we are one! We shall not fail! We shall not fail!

(The ship falls even faster)

Keno: I don’t think chanting isn’t helping much!

Pinkie: Wheeeeee!

Everyone: PINKIE!

Pinkie: oh yeah. AAAAAAAAH!

Fluttershy: anyone got a bag?

(A bag appears in front of Fluttershy who takes it and hyperventilates in it)

Raph: How did you?

Sweetie Belle: Look!

(Mortu steers the ship over the ocean before it crashes on land and blows up. The Turtles and Rainbooms rise up through the debris)

Rainbow Dash: Whoa! I can't believe we survived that?!

Donnie: What part of this is a virtual reality do you not understand?

Rainbow Dash: Everything is photo-real! How could we not think it is?!

Mikey: Uhh! Tell that to my stomach! (Barfs on the ground close to Rarity)

Rarity: (dryly) Tell me you did not just throw up on my shoes!

(Back with the 2003 Turtles, they watch everthing on a monitor)

Raphael: (laughs)

O'neil: So this what you guys were doing while we me and Casey were outside.

Michelangelo: Pretty much.

Donatello: I'm impressed that you installed some viewing screens so we could see what's going on, Professor.

Professor: Well, I wanted to make sure we could see what was happening in the virtual world, after the last time.

Fugitoid: I must agree with Donatello, we really must talk enginenuity.

Professor: That we should.

Leonardo: At least nothing's going wrong this time.

(Two figures watch them all from a holoscreen)

Figure 1: (in a dark voice) That is what they think!

Figure 2: (in a western accent) Their in for a real surprise! (They both laugh)

(Back in the virtual reality)

Mortu: My friends, and honored Navagators, we are all safe. But the ship is destroyed. We are stranded on this primitive planet. Billions of light years from our home dimension.

Navagator 1: There is not enough to salvage...

Navagator 2: To repair the ship. We can not...

Navagator 3: Return to our world?

Mortu: No... we can not.

Fluttershy: Oh, no!

Shini: How did they get back home?

Yellow Utrom: Captain! There's a structure beyond the next rise!

(They follow the Utroms up the rise, then they gasp at what they see on the other side)

Leo: We're in... Japan!

Donnie: Judging from the surroundings, I'd say we're in the 11th century period.

Pinkie Pie: You mean during the Feudal Area, like Donatello said?

Donnie: Actually, the Feudal Area didn't start until the 12th century.

Dog Spike: Guess Donatello got that part wrong.

(Donatello is shocked)

Donatello: Wrong?! But- But I'm never wrong?!

(The others just laugh)

Professor: (humorously) Corrected by your dimensional counterpart, oh the irony indeed.

(Back in the virtual reality)

Scootaloo: Look over there! (She points to a samurai practicing with his sword)

Donnie: I don’t believe it.

Rainbow Dash: A samurai in person? Awesome!

Casey: Cool! Hey! Check this out! (Runs up to the samurai taunting him as he unknowingly swings his sword which phases through Casey) Can’t touch me!

April: Casey, quit goofing off!

Mikey: Yeah! You’re doing it wrong. Watch this.
(Walks up to the samurai, bows, and speaks in Japanese, which translates to ‘I will spread peanut butter on curry, You handsome devil you, and we will watch the emperor play ring around the Rosie with his mother in law’. Everyone looks puzzled while Shini laughs her head off)

Karai: (humorously) Did you even know what you just said?

Mikey: Uh... I don’t know? I heard it in a movie once.

(Splinter hides a chuckle)

(Mikey swings his nunchucks as if he was sparring with the samurai until Raph grabs him by the mask)

Raph: Will you quit goofing off? Now c’mon!

Mikey: (notices a tray of food nearby) Then he won’t mind me snagging his lunch.

(Mikey tries to grab a rice ball only for his hand to phase through it. Then Mikey continues to try to grab the food like crazy)

Applejack: Aren’t ya gonna remind him that it’s virtual reality, Twi?

Sci Twi: (Smiling) I think this time I’ll make an exception.

(Later at night)

Utrom scientist: In brief, captain, we conclude that the technology on this planet is to primitive to build a flying vehicle. Let alone a interstellar ship or even hyperspace trans matt device. The technology simply dose not exist!

Mortu: Not yet. But we can wait.

Applejack: And that there's gonna be a looong wait.

(The scene shifts to the utroms hiding from humans)

Mortu: (getting an idea) Hmm?

Mikey: What you think he's thinking about?

(Scene shifts again)

Spike: Looks likes we're gonna find out.

(The Utrom scientist presents something under a bamboo tarp)

Utrom scientist: From our technology that we've been able to salvage from the crash, I give you- the Exosuit! (Unveiles it)

Donnie: It looks just like the ones the Kraang and our Utrom use!

Pinkie Pie: Oh course it does! These Utrom are from Dimension X too, duh!

Utrom scientist: With the proper covering, this will allow us to move around these humans, undetected.

Applebloom: Who are they foolin with that?

Applejack: I’m sure they can figure that out, sugarcube.

Rarity: And with an extreme makeover.

Donnie: Remember they had limited technology back then.

Utrom scientist: I believe a field test-oh! (Stumbles around in it) Is in order.

(The Turtles and Rainbooms follow the desguised droid as it wabbles through the streets. A pedestrian runs right through Karai)

Karai: Still, creepy!

(Soon they move through a forest)

Utrom scientist: Ah, satisfactory. Most satisfactory. Test run, concluded. First outing a complete success. (The droid steps on a trip vien) What?!

Pinkie Pie: Log!

Leo: It's a trap!

(The log goes right through them and knocks the droid off it's feet)

Fluttershy: (gasps and runs over to it) Ohnoohnoohno!

Casey: Who set up that trap?!

Spike: No idea?

Dog Spike: Me neither?

(Fluttershy looks up then she squeaks in fear)

Sunset Shimmer: Fluttershy?

(Fluttershy points a trembling finger. Everyone follows her gaze and the gasp)

Princess Twilight: Oh, no!

Utrom scientist: (groans. Then a shadow falls on him and he looks to see who it is and gasps) You?!

Ch'rell: What a wonderful toy! I want to play!

Leo: It's Ch'rell!

Raph: Figures that creep survived the crash!

(Ch'rell knocks the scientist out and takes control of the droid,then the blue parts turn red. Ch'rell grabs the scientist by the tentical and flings him into a bush. Then he walks past the glaring Ninjas as Raph throws a punch, which just phases through. Ch'rell laughs as he walks away into the woods)

Rainbow Dash: Why that no good! (Tries to chase him only to be stopped by Sunset)

Sci Twi: And I thought Abacus was ruthless.

(Scene shifts to where lots of utrom now have droids. The scientist's head is bandaged. They are constructng more droids and salvaging more parts from the ship)

Applejack: Now what's happening?

Twilight Sparkle: By the looks of things, it appears their building more droids.

Flutter: Oh! I wish I could have helped that utrom.

Pinkie Pie: (feels someing) Oh no! My knees are feeling pinchy!

Keno: Meaning?

Pinkie Pie: Something scary is about to happen!

(Suddenly, ninjas leap in and attack the Utroms, and the Turtles and Rainbooms gasp)

Donnie: Are those... Foot ninjas?!

Leo: Then that would mean!

(The ninjas leader arrives)

Karai: (gasps) Shredder?!

Mikey: Ch'rell's debue as the Shredder!

Ch'rell: Ninjas, attack! Destroy then all!

(The Foot attacks the Utrom, while many droids pile on Ch'rell, but he throws them all off)

Mortu: (having no idea who he is) What is the meaning of this?! We mean you no harm! (Ch'rell attacks him and knocks him down) We come in peace!

Ch'rell: But you will go, in pieces! (Tries to stomp on him, but he rolls out of the way)

Princess Twilight: Even as a memory, I can still feel his hatred!

Starlight Glimmer: And I thought Chrysalis was full of it. I remember what you guys told me about him, but wow!

Leo: He’s just as ruthless as our Shredder!

(Karai, in anger, draws her sword and tries to attack Shredder while her attacks phase through him again and again until she gets pulled back by Sunset and Rarity)

Sunset Shimmer: Easy, Karai. Remember, he’s only an illusion and not our Shredder.

Karai: (calming down) Doesn't make me hate Shredder any less!

Leo: It’s understandable.

(With 2003 Turtles)

Michelangelo: Karai attacking the Shredder?! Now I've seen everything!

Leonardo: It's getting to the part where things suddenly became real for us!

Mortu: Yes. Well, thankfully, that won't happen again.

Western figure: That's what they think.

Dark Figure: The systum has been hacked. Now to give those Turtles and Rainbooms a very unpleasant nightmare!

(Back in the virtual reality, Mikey walks right up to Ch'rell)

Donnie: I-I-I wouldn't get too close, Mikey!

Mikey: Dudes? It's not real, remember? (Waves his hand through Ch'rell) Hey, Ch'rell? Our Shredder had a cooler helmet then you! (Blows a raspberry in his face)

Pinkie Pie: (feels the Pinkie Sense, and gasps) I've got the Shutters and my knees are pinchy, again!

Keno: Meaning?

Pinkie Pie: A doesey of a scare is going to happen!

Raph: Like what?

(Suddenly, their colors return and their weapons vanish)

Pinkie Pie: Like this!

April: What the heck?!

Donnie: Our weapons are gone!

Twilight Sparkle: And so are our geods!

(The Foot and the Utrom notice them, and Ch'rell notices Mikey)

Ch'rell: What is this?!

Mikey: Uh... what up, dawg?

(Ch'rell attacks Mikey, who dodges until evil Utrom knocks him off his feet and onto the ground, hard)

Leo: Mikey!

Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie: Oh no!

(The other group is shocked by what just happened)

Raphael: What da Shell?

Mortu: No! Not again!

Leonardo: What happened?

Professor: Someone hacked the virtual reality pods. It’s not Stockman this time. The coding is more complicated.

Fugitoid: There's something familiar about this coding? But I just can't remember where, though!

Jones: We gotta get them outta dere! (Runs to break Rainbow Dash’s pod only for Donatello to stop him)

Mortu: Don’t do that! If any one of the pods are damaged before a safe shut down, their minds will be lost forever.

Leonardo: How could this have gone horribly wrong again?!

(Somewhere, in the shadows, the two figures chuckle)

Dark Figure: What chumps!

(Back in the virtual reality, the Turtles and Rainbooms run over to Mikey)

Raph: Mikey!

Sweetie Belle: Are you okay?

Mikey: (groans) He's definitely as tough as our Shredder!

Scootaloo: Guys? He's looking at us!

Ch'rell: Curious? (To his ninjas) Capture these strange creatures and humans! They may prove useful!

(As they help Mikey up, they find themselves surrounded by the Foot ninjas)

(With the 2003 Turtles)

Michelangelo: How come the other me get's stay in traction?!

Donatello: Well, he didn't just stand there and let Ch'rell hit him.

ONeil: So how can we help them?

Mortu: I’m not sure.

Raphael: Well, we gotta do something! They don’t stand a chance against Shredder! Especially the CMCs!

Michelangelo: Yeah! He's not dumb enough to fall for a rope trap, like you were! (Raphael flicks him in the head) Ow!

Donatello: Mr. Mortu, Where’s the control unit for the pods?

Mortu: Follow me! (Both hurry to it)

Leonardo: I just hope they remember what you told them before they went in, Sensei.

Master Splinter: As do I, Leonardo, as do I.

(With the Turtles and Rainbooms)

Raph: I thought Mortu said this wouldn't happen?!

Donnie: Something must have gone wrong with the system!

Leo: Whatever happened, get ready, ninjas!

(They all get into a stance, while the CMC get behind them)

Leo: Things just got real!

(To Be Continued)


Trivia
  • This is a callback to the episode "Secret Origins.
  • If you 2003 tmnt fans think I'm still bashing the 2003 Turtles, by having Donnie correct Donatello about the Fudel Area being in the 12th century and not the 11th, then your wrong. That was a mistake the show made.
  • I tried to color the 2012 Turtles and Rainbooms in the same way the 2003 Turtles were when they entered the virtual reality.



Quotes by me and TMNTony

Equestria Ninja Girls by DarkMagicianmon
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Comments: 19

X-distroyer [2021-05-05 00:24:00 +0000 UTC]

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yuki3mikoto [2020-10-22 21:46:52 +0000 UTC]

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Gojira012 [2019-12-26 03:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Demon Tengu shredder grabs Ch'rell and pins him to a wall.

Shredder- A petty Slug like you...HAS DARED TO USE MY NAME FOR 600 YEARS

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Jisow777 [2019-12-14 23:36:49 +0000 UTC]

if this helps you, I made it in my fic that the 03 utroms and 12 utroms are two different species, hence the difference

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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2019-12-15 14:50:52 +0000 UTC]

We'll I'm doing what they did with Krang, made the 2003 Utroms part of Dimension X.

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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2019-12-15 14:56:29 +0000 UTC]

someone is bound to ask why the two look different 

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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2019-12-15 15:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Well, Krang looked different too

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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2019-12-15 16:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Krang may have come first but dose still look like a 2012 Kraang with just shorter arms and is fatter

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Fanaticguy1001 [2019-12-14 18:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. By the way, I know the 2012 turtles and Rainbooms will have to fight Shredder, but can you have it believable where he is good enough to match them all. It would be a bad idea for them to hold their own and beat him so easily as it would mean that they are better than their 2003 counterparts. I also have a few quotes for the second part.

Karai vs 2003 Shredder

Karai: You took them from me.

Shredder: I don't even know who you are, child.

Karai: But I do.


After the Turtles and Rainbooms get out or the VR simulation. 

2003 Raph: I can't believe I'm saying this, but you did pretty good.

2003 Mikey: Yeah, it's not often someone points out Donnie being wrong.

Sci-Twi: Well, I think we can assume which counterpart is smarter. 

2012 Donnie: I believe so too.

2003 Donnie: Ha ha. Very funny.

2003 Leo: Although, we did manage to do one thing you didn't.

Sunset: What's that?

2003 Leo: Not drool.

(the 2012 Turtles and Rainbooms realize they drooled and react disgusted.)




What do you think?

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jebens1 In reply to Fanaticguy1001 [2019-12-14 23:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Good, minus the drool part. And yeah, the Shredder will defeat them all, at first. Until they realize what 'Illusion Within An Illusion' means. The CMC will realize it first and use it to "Pony Up".

And then they'll use it to regain their weapons and powers and fight Shredder again, until Donnie has a plan and has Leo use the Sword of Tangu to shut down Ch'rell's droid.

Keno: Don't look so tough now, do yah?!

Casey: Let's squish this jerk!

Ch'rell: (grows and knocks them both into some bamboo. Then he latches onto Raph's face; laughs) What did you say?! I can't seem to hear you?!

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Fanaticguy1001 In reply to jebens1 [2019-12-14 23:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice. It's about time the CMC get their chance to Pony Up, I always think the Rainbooms hog the spotlight, even though the MLP series had episodes that centered around the CMC and had nothing to do with any member of the Mane 6. I am a little bit disappointed over the no drool thing though, it would've been pretty funny. 

And for when Raph having Ch'rel latched to his face, I was thinking that after he gets him off it goes like this:

Sunset: Raph, are you ok?

Raph: No! His tentacle went in my mouth and he tastes like uncooked calamari. Gross!


Or something like that. What are your thoughts? 

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calmoose415 In reply to Fanaticguy1001 [2019-12-14 19:10:44 +0000 UTC]

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Fanaticguy1001 In reply to calmoose415 [2019-12-14 21:50:21 +0000 UTC]

True that. Not to mention that the 2012 Turtles and Rainbooms make it look like they are the only heroes any world need and anyone else is there just for the sake of being there. It's like any other hero that team up with them are inferior in skills, accomplishment and capability. 

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DarkMagicianmon [2019-12-14 16:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting

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NomisKahn In reply to DarkMagicianmon [2019-12-14 18:20:21 +0000 UTC]

How are they going to get out of this one?

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DarthWrex-49 [2019-12-14 16:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

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FoxFlameBlade125 [2019-12-14 16:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

i love the reactions of each and every one of them

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TMNTony [2019-12-14 16:34:05 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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DSCartoonFan34 [2019-12-14 16:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Zoinks! It's Utrom Shredder!

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