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jedimasteryoda98 — Voices
Published: 2004-01-10 22:34:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 11
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Yeah, my most recent poem. It's pretty much crap. Ah well <.<;Related content
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It tis not crap : P I could possibly see more room to put in more imagery, but this is great still! ^^ The last stanza is very powerful, especially the last two lines. I don't really have much to criticise : P Excellent work! Keep it up^^
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Wow, thankoo so much for the +fav! ^^
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