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Published: 2012-07-03 22:05:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1245; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 3
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NextTwo Happy Lives
Two Different Paths
Two Different Perspectives
One Big Catastrophe
Tis the story of an angry moon, a clueless man, and how a cotton ball evolved. By sun stones. Ripped from sun rocks. Good times. Okay, so there isn't a story about the cotton ball. He's still stuck in the pokeball. That would be an uninteresting story if we focused on that. We'll just stick with the clueless man and angry moon then.
Miguel- [link]
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I am super late commenting on this but ghhhh Jee what can I say that doesn't sound like mindless drivel?
Fantastic intro. I love the simplistic shapes, they fit well into both stories (almost animalistic for Major A, lighthearted for Miguel). We can clearly see the contrasts between their perspectives on the war. I was creeped out by Major A before, not going to lie, but now seeing this I feel almost sorry for him. He's still psychotic, not gonna lie, but seeing the reasons behind his craziness makes you sympathise with him so much more, and that is fantastic. This whole round (I'm not going to comment on every page because a) I'm not smart enough to say much other than ALKSDJHFAWKERWER BEAUTIFUL and b) I'm lazy orz ) was just fantastic. The syncing was awesome, as always, and it was great to see so many perspectives on the same story. Miguel remains clueless without being a weak character--a feat unto itself--and Major A manages to walk the fine line between being a character in a horror film and someone you want to hug sobbing in a corner of your room. Ok, maybe not hug, but you get the point. Your art is gorgeous, as always, and I'm excited to see where you go with Miguel's story!
I think I just wrote a novel. I'm sorry orz
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Mindless drivel? Nonsense! I always love hearing what you have to say~ ;u; /
And the longer, the better I always say!
And I feel much better knowing there was enough sympathy to balance out all that crazy the moon was throwing out. And the moon wouldn't mind a hug at all~Those are very good reasons to not comment every page, haha, tis understandable~ XD and still very happy you like eeeeeet ;u; and I will forever be happy dangit! *C*
One day, Miguel will stop being clueless, one day! Hopefully on a good day. And He will do his best to continue his story!
Nooovels~<3
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Holy crap, this is a wonderful introduction! I love the use of two viewpoints, trainer and pokemon, and how they connect in the end. And the art! I adore the difference between the first group of panels and their block-colour silhouettes and the last four, when it's time to return to the present and it's darkness. Gotta read the rest now!
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Ha, I always have difficulty thinking up intros, so it's always wonderful to hear such lovely comments about it. >u<
Thank you very much, man!
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Oh man, the intro! What a great idea and execution; I love the transition between these two worlds, especially how Miguel's hand becomes all claw-like when it's in Major's part of the panel.
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:U Alright, it's official, I have not a clue what to say right now. It's like an honor hearing nice words from a fantastically amazing artist and story-teller such as yourself, man :'D Lemme just-aslfja;sfdsf;jlkafds;lkd *flails and falls out of chair*
Okay... I think I got that out of my system. Ha, yes, in the moon's eye, all the humans are horrible black-hearted creatures, even Miguel. Ain't he lucky? XD
But gaaaah, thank you very much! I'm glad you like the intro! 
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Because I can read your entry over and over and it's always just as exciting and awesome as the first time *V
I love how you did this intro so much man. Perfect juxtaposing between Miguel's half of the story and Majora's. And my Goooood I love what you did with Majora. Poor thing, even with all the crazy that she is, after this it's still so easy to empathise with her. You really can't blame her for this *,V
I love the colored silhouettes and the text boxes, especially how Majora's kind of.. fall apart as the story goes on. That, and the echoing words beneath them before her nice typed text gives out entirely. It's like a reflection on her sanity O: I love it..
Those panels with her on top of a pile of her fellows' bodies, and how they start to deteriorate, her included.. ah. Wow O,: That's just.. so. ;a;
And the group shot, with Miguel's hand on her, we see exactly what she sees when she looks at any human. They're all the same..
Rehabilitate her Miguel ;o; If anyone needs the rogues, it's Majora ;ooo;
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:'D You're too kind raaaaaaaa *keyboard smash of feelings activate* vcncvnaewr8rthr4n;ganvn;adscas;owier
I think the intro is my favorite part of this comic lD
I'm glad you like Majora's story~ ;u; / I thought the whole sympathizing with her would have been impossible, haha. Was difficult to find a way that's for sure.
But hearing how bad Majora's got it from somebody else opens up my eyes, man :'D I can't stop feeling bad for that evil moon now... Just gonna have a whole new wave of feels to deal with now. ;a;
Ra, you're reading my mind again lD
Miguel will do his best ;u; /
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Never too kind! heioatheroiafhneoiahngnho agrho e
XD well this page is definitely deserving of the favorite title. I love it so much. And Majora's story so much *VVVV
It's all you man, you're the one who made her story as great as it is *,V thorns and all. Embrace the feels man, make them fight for you! V,*!
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ALWAYS TOO KIND lksd;alsdjkfasdf
*embraces the feels cause don't know what else to do at this point*
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Ha, yes, poor Miguel....And everybody else after this <:'D
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Oh god, oh help. I've been hearing about a creepy moon, and is that it, oh man.
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Yes, yes that is the creepy moon~ Glad word has been getting around, haha XD
Unfortunately, help is the last thing on its mind and certainly none will be given to the squad, haaaaa :'D
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OH CRAP. o o; THAT'S SERIOUSLY ALL THAT IS RUNNING THROUGH MY BRAIN RIGHT NOW.
I love how you wrote/staged/drew this. It's done so well. ;-;
. . . Yes. Yes, I shall keep reading now.
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Muahahaha, as was ma intention~ eve
And d'awwww, thank ya, man! Glad you like how the intro was made~ It was a lot of fun, that's for sure! XD
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I was all wow, the differences in the first few panels. And then the angry moon went and told Miguel off in a freaking hilarious way. (THE ENDING WAS AMAZiNG.)
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Hee, yes, sometimes even Miguel's chatter is too much for the moon. It can take only so much, haha~ XD
And thank yooouuu, I'm very glad you liked the ending~ ;u;
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