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Published: 2010-11-20 01:27:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 929; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 9
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this is *Karrawong 's completed
commission of a character howling.I chose her character bear because i liked his design ^^.
i hope you like it
[link] (Commission info)
Character (Bear) ©
artowrk © 2010
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Comments: 26
Very creative posing. I enjoy looking at your work, very much so!
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thank you [= i didn't want to contentional howling pose so i misxed it up abit. im glad ^^
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Hmm, I like the pose alot, but I do see some problems, so I'll just give a crit. here.
First off, I love the paws, they look really good, considering the hard poses they are in.
I also like the positioning of the legs, very nice.
Only thing I really see a problem with is the shoulder, in a side view, the chest is hidden.
[link] < like this
Also, the mouth looks like it could be... more open in the jaw? (if that makes sense)
Since wolves can't make 'u' shapes with their mouths, Er-- Hope I helped...?
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thanks 
thank you ^^
ok, (yeah it does make sense) yeah it did
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DX
I usually don't do critiques because I don't want to feel like I offended someone.
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yeah that's what i fear i'll do too, but no you didn't offend me. i've change the mouth of the wolf but i didn't change the shoulder thing. after looking at it i was confused as to what you ment 0.o
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OH lol, it's just the shoulders look like they're turned more toward me than the hip are..
I don't know, I'm bad at explaining....
Maybe a redline to show you what I mean?
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0_0 i didn't draw the shoulders, do you mean like the fluffy bit on the body infront of the legs? yeah that would help because im still confused because usually im good at keepinf everything kindof parelle with each other, so it would be unusual for my to draw one thing facing on way and the other thing facing a different way
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lol, don't freak out, idk, I'll do one right now
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haha im not freaking out, just confused XD ok
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Alright, I start to work on it then :3
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Sure thing buddy~
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