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Ok, I've meantioned that i was going to make recolour bases that you guys can pay me and i'll colour them in for you of your character.

Here Are the sketches I have so far and will most likely remain as im running low on ideas.

I used no reference or images. So what you see here is completely from my mind. The sleeping pose was the only one that had an influence but the image wasn't up when i was drawing it. I also realise that the aggressive pose looks like a free lineart but i onl noticed that after i'd sketched it out.

The reason why im posting this is to get feed back from you guys and critique and/or red lines for these poese as i want them to be perfect as people will be paying for them. I dont see any major mistakes else i'd correct it myself just odd things that bug me.

My favourite poses is the face and style of the leaping pose, the tail on the standing pose

Here's the deal though, Paying me to colour these [once they're done and have been shaded of course] will be about 300-400 IF you successfully help me in improving these, be it one or more. You'll get 100 off the price. That doesn't mean that if you help me one all of them you get one for free just if you help me in any way you get 100 off. but on the contrary that also means you can't just say "leaping poses heads to big" and that's it. proper critique that's the length of a critique or a successful red line. There's no point redlining it if there's no improvements made after all XD

I shall decide how helpful you've been and if you are eligible to get 100off

100 off is now over
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Comments: 34

Jewelthebat [2013-06-12 02:57:41 +0000 UTC]

this so helped me in rl but now I have a reqeast from a friend*sigh*

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to Jewelthebat [2013-06-12 03:03:52 +0000 UTC]

haha im glad it helped my anatomy is no way near perfect though XD just keep that in mind and i dont mind it being used as a reference for certain things and elements in a picture just dont copy the sketches directly if that's what you meant by helping you of course XD

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Jewelthebat In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2013-06-12 19:22:32 +0000 UTC]

nope that's not what I meant if u look at my pics you can see that I didn't use yours...yet

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to Jewelthebat [2013-06-12 20:40:46 +0000 UTC]

yeah i know you didn't as i checked before i sent that comment XD

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Jewelthebat In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2013-06-12 20:57:53 +0000 UTC]

ok...wait what?!

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to Jewelthebat [2013-06-13 04:16:22 +0000 UTC]

before i replied to you i was interested to see if you had used it them as reference or not [= so i looked at your gallery.

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Jewelthebat In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2013-06-13 18:01:55 +0000 UTC]

ok

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racotaco [2012-12-22 11:44:55 +0000 UTC]

adorable! you've done very well when you didnt have referance the only improvement you could make is the front leg on the lowest one, the one furthest away :3 on the second red one the muzzle looks slightly a little off, and it could do with a little more neck hair but apart from that there adorable

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to racotaco [2012-12-22 18:40:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you i try not to use ref to keep my style then i go back and use ref to edit it before i lineart it
arr ok 0.o i kinds know what you mean for the lowest one. also for the red one do you mean the sitting pose or the stretching pose?
hehe thank you XD

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racotaco In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2012-12-22 18:47:44 +0000 UTC]

the sitting red one :3

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to racotaco [2012-12-22 19:00:44 +0000 UTC]

arr well the idea is the wolf is looking down and being cute XD that's why the muzzle is long it's not meant to be facing forward. XD and yeah i'll fluffy it out during the lineart stages

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racotaco In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2012-12-22 19:02:53 +0000 UTC]

ah cool, but i personally thought the muizzle looked a little to chubby

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to racotaco [2012-12-22 21:11:37 +0000 UTC]

arr i see what you mean

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racotaco In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2012-12-22 21:21:38 +0000 UTC]

k
keep up the good work!

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ask-araknia [2012-12-16 16:15:30 +0000 UTC]

i can redline some ^^''

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to ask-araknia [2012-12-16 18:32:40 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you ^^ that'll be great!

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ask-araknia In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2012-12-16 18:45:03 +0000 UTC]

yayz okay they will e done as soon as i can.

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to ask-araknia [2012-12-16 19:10:48 +0000 UTC]

hehe ok ^^ thank you.

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PBnJam [2012-12-01 00:54:33 +0000 UTC]

1. The angle on his back was off. But the face rocked!
2. His grounded foot is pointing an awkward angel because it seems as if the rest of him is running right.
3. legs need to be straight if he's stretching. Hs head was also at a weird angle.
4. I went a little crazy on the cute sitting one >.< so sorry!!! Just his head is at too drastic an angel and his muzzle is too small for a wolf.
5. just too big a head and he needs a chest (resized his head)
6. Just adjusted the proportions

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to PBnJam [2012-12-01 01:28:34 +0000 UTC]

arr thank you so much iyou madeand showed some very good points there ^^

1.arr i see. but you see for that pose i wasnt aiming for a really curved sleepy pose. just a slight curve. hehe thank you XD

2.well the idea behind that was he was like in mid change of direction type thing n is pushing off that foot

3.haha yeah XD many a fail on that one the front legs and feet where bugging me >.> i was trying to make the toes stretch out. n the idea behind the head was like the end of a yawn so his lifting his head but yous makes more sense XD

4.haha nice XD i was trying to go for something beggy/ goofy/ cute type thing but yes i see what you mean

5.i didnt even notice his chest was missing XD its alwas the turned head angle it throws me off XD

6.yeah i see that i like this pose the best me thinks XD

but yeah thanks so much for the redline ^^ i can put your name down for 100 off one of these bases when they're done if youd like ^^

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PBnJam In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2012-12-01 18:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Nah consider it free.

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to PBnJam [2012-12-01 19:12:24 +0000 UTC]

awwwh XD ok ^^ well thanks for your help [= i appreciate it ^^

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PBnJam [2012-11-30 22:09:59 +0000 UTC]

I could give it a shot for you?

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to PBnJam [2012-11-30 22:31:22 +0000 UTC]

sure go ahead ^^ if i find what you suggest helpful i'll knock 100 off :3 but thanks I appreciate the help XD

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Tokoas [2012-11-30 21:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Do you have to do a critique on this to get one for 300-400? I don't really see any problems with them.. I like them all the way they are. xD

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to Tokoas [2012-11-30 22:34:27 +0000 UTC]

the idea is they're already priced at around 400. so if you can successfully help me improve them as im not happy with the quality of them atm, i'll knock 100 off the price once i've decided what it's going to be. The idea is they're refil bases. so it's not lke if you buy a sketch you get it. anyone can buy them i colour them for the person [=

awwh thanks XD i appreciate that :3 i just know there are issues with them XD nothing mjor as i say. i could've left them the way they are but i dont pan on redoing them anytime soon so i want them to be perfect before i decide to line and shade them XD

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Tokoas In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2012-11-30 23:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Ahh.. ok xD so lets say I give you 400 or so to color one in.. would you do it?

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to Tokoas [2012-11-30 23:43:10 +0000 UTC]

that's the idea [= im going to finalize the sketches then lineart and shade them then set up payment for the sta.sh system XD but that's the idea [= you can have as many coloured as you want and so can everyone else XD. that payment s basically paying for the colour [= as i've provided everything else.

also if your considering it, dont pay me yet XD i need to submit the final base upload first with the price button on

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Tokoas In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2012-12-01 00:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Ok lol

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to Tokoas [2012-12-01 00:54:32 +0000 UTC]

hehe alright thanks it shouldnt be too long now

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Little-Painter [2012-11-30 15:07:44 +0000 UTC]

For sketches, these are actually very well made. I do however see a couple of issues.

On the sleeping pose, the muzzle seems a tad large compared to the face. Also on the sleeping pose, the back leg doesn't look relaxed to me, as if it's being forced to stay in the position that it's in.

On the attacking pose, the back knee seems too pointed. You can try curving it a bit, that way it flows a bit better.

For the standing pose, the head sort of looks like it's blending in with the neck. Maybe some cheek fur would help with that.

The sitting one is adorable and I don't see any major issues with it.

For the running one, the front leg looks too skinny.


I hope you found this helpful.

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to Little-Painter [2012-11-30 16:02:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

yes i agree with you on that one [= some facial rearrangment is in order XD haha yeah i again can see where you're coming from with that as well [=

arr yep ^^ i getchya

arr yeah i see what you mean [= with those types of poses i never know how fluffy the neck should be XD

hehe XD i know right. twas meant to be cute :3 thank you ^^

arr yep [= i think i can see what you mean with that one ^^

thank you i did in fact find this helpful ^^ if you'd like can put you're name down for a 100 off? of course you don,t have to purchase it once the bases are made, it's completely up to you [=

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Little-Painter In reply to Jenny2-point-0 [2012-11-30 16:05:44 +0000 UTC]

No problem. ^^
And thanks. I'll be sure to check back up and see when you've lined them. :3

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Jenny2-point-0 In reply to Little-Painter [2012-11-30 16:23:18 +0000 UTC]

hehe ok XD i can link you too if you want [= btw they're gunna be lined and shaded XD

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