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Published: 2021-06-07 22:24:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 3984; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 7
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Commission from a friend. Gerkuman on TwitterRelated content
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I'll see what I can do. But anatomy and proportions... At least for me... Is really something that comes from study on the topic and practice.
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I see, well seeing you're very dedicated I'll see if I can give some critique and maybe some advice on this piece. First of I like how you decided to set outside of your comfort zone for this one.
At first glance it's a little hard to see what you were going for but I think that's mostly because of how her out fit sort of blends with the background in terms of color. One advice I would give for that is to either try shading the clothing and give it some shadows or darken the background abit.
The way the sword is foreshortened is very good however it feels a too bit far to the right from where her hand would actually be. The body seems properly proportioned to the head though. The out fit makes it hard to see but the body proportion seems pretty OK.
For now that's all I can say but it definitely seems like abit of improvement from your previous work. One major advice I would give is to maybe use more reference when drawing. My rule is always if it's something you're not comfortable with or don't know how to draw very well use references to help you.
Also I like that you drew Mei 😉
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