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Published: 2015-10-29 02:28:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1674; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Its been almost 3 years, and the war keeps changing him. He now captains and runs his own ship. One thing after another and he is starting to question why he even fights anymore.Related content
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Thanks. Went a little crazy with a bunch of new techniques I wanted to try.
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I also like very much idea of the character, I hope that you will create more art with him in future. His log-based background story also inspired me to write story in this way. It is even actually almost ready.
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will do. Though, I'm going to try to knock off a few other big projects first ^_^ one in particular is $1000 dollar commission.Β
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Thanks. 
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Can't wait for you to start the book/story. I think it will be a good book to read!
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Thanks. I'll be starting in a couple days.
I'll be entering it in National Novel Writing month to boot.
nanowrimo.org/
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YES!!! I'm excited to see what you do!
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What about his relationships? I imagine if he had a girlfriend/wife (I think you hinted was Lora), wouldn't his changes strain his relationship? Also, what about his parents? I'm curios what has been done to him socially.
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Yes, very strained. ^_^ you should know I'll be turning this into a full length novel. I think I'll make this one my new side project for the summer. I'll be starting on the outline as soon I finish the dragon and the onion girl.
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thanks 
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3 years... and war was not yet changed. It never changes.
Cool art by the way. Would you ever write a story about him?
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yes. ^^ in fact its going to be a book. if you want to read some random log entries I wrote for him you can read them here.
Also I wasnt talking about war in general I was talking about the war he was currently fighting. Also I didnt say the war was changing I said he was changing as a result of the war.
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I know about him, I know that by changing you meant Don, not the war, and I already readed the other posts (preety cool so far, Im looking foward to that book), but it's a thing of mine that when I see something in DeviantArt (or in the internet in general) related to war, I always quote the phase "war... war never changes". Also another thing. Did this happend 3 years after the TF or the last image? Also talking about the other image, the one named only "Don", I really think this is war being easy, after all it seens these enemies that were shooting those beam trained at the stormtrooper shooting school. Just kidding
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the idea is that he never stoped transforming. his body is in a permanant state of rapid adaptation. He has been changing for 3years. so when i said the war was changing him it is litteral as well as figurative.
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What I meant is to ask if 3 years passed since he left the planet he was stranded on or 3 years have passed since the last image. And by the way you said it, it seens it was 3 years since the time he was stranded. Thought he keeps changing to adapt to his surrondings, I don't understand why the parasite made him have some purple scales (I assume those are scales), because I'm preety sure that purple won't work as camuflage in these grayish corridors, but who am I to judge TF induncing parasites?
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Each change had its modivation.Β
ampt body heat regulation:- as a result of being on a incredibly hot humid planet with no night time.
gills:- planet is mostly lakes and bottomless swamps
sharper more equiped teath and claws-: respons of hunting and foriging life style on planet.
tail:- better balence while climbing the convoluded and entangled trees that float on this planetΒ
electrical detection-: residual atribute from the previous symbiotes host
purple spine:- residual atribute from the previous symbiotes host
Multible limbs:- as a result of working dilligaintly with hands trying to build a lifeboat from recked ships.
Darker skin:- camo reaction to time spent in the dark deep of spaceΒ
Quils start to glow:- this is a side effect to the large number of discharged energy weapons that have struck at or around him. his body has learned to collect and store this energy. making energy weapons less effective against him.
the changes continue.
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Good to know about his strong points, like for example that I should use the old-stlye balistic weapons agaist him... not that I'm planning to face him (or am I?). Well friend, good luck with your book, and let's hope Don doesn't get in my way.
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^^ I know right. Though I dont think you would want to face him. He owns the battlefeild... no searioulsy he plays the game Battlefield and I think you will find the tables a little more ballenced out on those terms.
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I know about his skills, but it doesn't matter how good someone is in the battlefield when facing me cause you be down before you know what hit yah. Some people think that stealth is for cowards, and well, the persons who said that are buried under the ground. But the thing is, I don't really like cuttingΒ throats neither giving headshots with my trusty sniper. I spend all of my childhood training, and all of my adulthood fighting, but I'm weary of fighting, not because I'm tired of it or because I lack conviction for my cause, but because it seens every effort of mine only generates more chaos. That's why I'm in a personal quest for anwers, to know WHY am I fighting. But our little friend Don here is getting in my way. I'll try to stop him, but if he refuses, I'll have to take him down. Let just hope he doesn't get in my way, cause like I said earlier, I don't like cuttingΒ Β throats or giving headshots with my trusty sniper.
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You know i was talking about the video game right? as in Battlefeild the xbox video game. and yes they futre still has those. ^^
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lol... how I could have not noticed you were talking about the video games! Anyway, I'm not much into those kinds of games, I rather play grand strategy (it's just like regular strategy... but grand). So yeah, at least I already introduced you to my RP character that is set in futuristic universes. His name is [redacted], Felipe [redacted].
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XD you still dont get it. XD I mean my character plays battlefeild, not me. What i was trying to get at was that Mr. Donnald is rather friendly despite his looks. More then that he is a bit of a peice maker always using words where words are an option. ^^ His greatest weapon is his mind and his ability to reason and use critical thinking to solve and or overcome any problem he is presented with. You could say he has like the living encarnation of addaptation, growth, and understanding.
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He is a chatter them! Man, I hate whem my targets are chatter, always saying "you can't kill me cause of Y and X". Then I look at my target and say "Look dude, I'm commiting a crime of killing a officer/governor/whatever and don't you think I already thought thisΒ through? X doesn't matter, and while Y is indeed bad, my objectives are more important. I have to do this, but you won't understand, your filthy [redacted]!". But of course, Don is not a [redacted], so the lastΒ phrase doesn't count.
But anyway, like I said before, let's hope this is not necessary, that he gets out of my way so I can keep doing my quest for truth. And who knows? Maybe I will be able to recruit Don into [redacted]. He is a promising candidate for some time now.
BTW, it's my birthday today
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"Its been almost 3 years, and the war keeps changing him. He now captains and runs his own ship. One thing after another and he is starting to question why he even fights anymore." This oddly reminds me of Captain America.
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Yeah, kind of. XD more like captain alien lizard man in this case.
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If you are naked, yet show nothing visibly explicit, are you really indecent?
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Still playing with the drawing. Haven't decided what outfit I want to give him. Any ideas? ^_^ I was thinking something along the same lines as the last drawing, only with an updated uniform. something official looking.
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Maybe some kind of simple, leather suit?
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I know it took me a while but I just finished him. His legs were by far the most troublesome and now he has a uniform.
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Ballin'! Looking good!
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maybe. still playing with it.
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yeah, a leather suit with some trinkets to show his rank in the military (like some bagdes or that fancy looking things that military officers use in their shoulders)
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So I took you up on your idea. The suite might not be leather but I gave him the rank trinkets and the shoulder things that some military officers use. I also added texture and fixed his legs. wow those legs bugged me, and I couldn't for the life of me figure out why. turns out they were just the wrong shape.
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I like it. working on it.Β
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