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jeremy3 — Everfree part 51en
Published: 2016-10-06 14:03:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 8325; Favourites: 79; Downloads: 39
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Hello to everyone, that was pretty obvious, but some of you already know that Bloomy was not finaly in good hooves.As usual, if you find english mystake, please tell my, I will make the change as soon as I can.
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Oh my, look at the circumstances...
Hope they get out of there soon.
I look forward to the next set
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Ah knew it! XD..... wait, broken ribs!?.... aw, man.....
*heats up the grill*
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Other than looking more beaten up than a MMA fighter (sans blood) Apple Bloom should be okay when aid arrives but Sweetie Belle might get exhausted and eat dirt in around a few minutes...
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alright i'm organizing a lynch mob lets all go take care of cloudy who's with me?
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Certainly all the readers of this comic, a lot of angry readers against Cloudy.
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Sweetie looks so... "dead", usually she's full of life
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She'll give US some explanations in next part.
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Yay! You did it, Sweetie Belle! You did it, you did it!
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She's out for the rest but allive.
The appleforce is strongh in her family.
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the first 2 panels reminds me kinda on a beginning of a dirty movie XD
i know that this is wrong haha XD
but good to see all three save and sound ^^
as long as you dont let the cloud discover them again XD
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Oh ni, thing's will be a little bit different now.
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uuuh happy fun times from now on? yay ^^
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Not from now, but later, believe me.
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Sweetie's first text bubble in panel 4 should say
"Scootaloo, delivering a letter was my idea to begin with!"
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I'll mais that change tomorow, Thanks you .
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do you like less AB over the two other cmc? she's always the one who's hurt
ou si tu préfère en français, préfère tu les deux autres CMC à AB? C'est toujours celle qui à des problèmes
and not related, are you friend with mustlovefrogs?
et sans lien, est tu amis avec mustlovefrogs?
and are you french?
et est ce que tu est français?
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Au contraire, c'est justement car je la praifaire qu'elle a le rôle le plus dure, d'aucun pourrai dire que j'aime la faire soufrire, c'est un peu compliqué, une forme de " marie sue" sadique.
Je pense, on se partage un de mes personnage, des idées, je dirai oui.
Et oui je suis français.
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Well it was exactly like what a couple of us predicted but I have a feeling that Sweetie will her meet ground in about a half a second. Still very great work, looking forward to the next page.
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Yeah I was a little bit surprise to see all this good predictions.
Ans Thanks you .
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It also looks like Sweetie Belle is going to collapse from exhaustion next page for her heroic effort...
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It's a really hard day for all of theme, you will see in next part.
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....well, if by being unconscious and with broken bones is OK, then yes, yes she is.
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LAst panel You say "I think she have broken ribs" it should be "I think she has broken ribs"
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It's done, Thank you so much.
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I hope I will please you for a long time with my comic.
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