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jeremy3 — Everfree part 92en
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Published: 2017-10-05 14:07:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 5049; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 36
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English is not my first language, if you find mistake or error, please notice me.I'll made the change as soon as I can.
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It's already working on my computer, my phone and my Iconia tab, did you steel can't see it now, because I don't understand why do you can't.
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No I can't I don't know why they are vary good thow
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Maybe could you try to download it?
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Quick question: who's the unicorn nurse in the upper right half of the panel...?
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I used the one on the left like a model, just had a horn and changed the colors.
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I can see that; I just want to know what her name is...?
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Oh sorry, I didn't planed to name her because she was just a background character, why not Emerald lily.
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Oh this is getting very good, looking forward to the next page.
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ah crap cloudy won't you just DIE!
oh and translation thingies.
panel 2 Momy should be Mommy
panel 2 Tyrek should be Tirek
panel 4 Waow should be either Whoa or Wow I am thinking it is Whoa as it conveys a sense of sudden realization of a big event coming.
panel 1 Another such this one and we shall lost our everfree forest. it would sound better as "another like this one and we shall lose our everfree forest."
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actually, shall is a rarely used word, only used in the most formal of situations. in this case, it would be we'll lose the Everfree Forest.
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Thanks you , I will change that tomorow.
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They did the next best thing! THEY WERE BORN!
Cause apparently they were just a highly mobile magic egg, not an eyeball. Go figure.
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First panel: "Like " instead of "such" and "lose" instead of "Lost". And "Everfree Forest" should be capitalized.
Second panel: "Mommy", "sweetheart", "Tirek, and "Tartarus".
Fifth Panel: "Please"
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Thanks you , I'll like the change tomorow.
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It's . . . it's . . . THE END CREDITS!!
RUN AWAY! RUN AWAY!
:-D
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This may be my favorite page. Beautiful Trissie-mom! <3
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Thanks, it all belong to you, it was your idea.
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"its rainbows corps/skeletton, woah" XD
pop goes the rainbow. so much tragic.
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