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jeremy3 — Quest for Apple Bloom part 15
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Published: 2014-10-16 09:45:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 20490; Favourites: 173; Downloads: 73
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A special thanks for, scootabyte.deviantart.com/ Without him, my comic strip would look like as my comments, poor and full of english mistake,if you find one, it's because i forget it
Sorry "everypony" No part for next week, i'm going to be in vacancy.
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part2 :fav.me/d7lukdc
part3 :fav.me/d7mwtv8
part4 :fav.me/d7n5g29
part5 :fav.me/d7o1bny
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part10: fav.me/d7vnynr
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part12: jeremy3.deviantart.com/art/Que…
part13: Quest for Apple Bloom part 13
part14: Quest for Apple Bloom part 14
part15: Quest for Apple Bloom part 15
part16:Quest for Apple Bloom part 16t
part17:Quest for Apple Bloom part 17.2t
part18:Quest for Apple Bloom part 18t
Part19:fav.me/d89672s
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Comments: 57
Hypothermia.
Oh god, she's gonna die with more warm hugs.
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AWWW. The feels.
Also, the tears suddenly dissapeared from the first panels to the last.
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Just read the whole comic. So far I'm enjoying it!
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So glad to reading that, and thanks for the watch.
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oh <3 this was a very nice comic, i liked it and i'm looking forward for the continuation.
The only downside are the jokes, that feel a little out of place.
btw: "my comic strip would look like has my comments". You're supposed to use "as". "Has" is the verb "avoir".
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I'm glad you like it.
I think that without these jokes it would have been very too sad to follow, but I can make a mistake, thank you for your comment.
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well, it depends on the moment. If you're going for something sad a joke feels out of place.
You can add a joke in a sad moment, but it's quite hard.
For example, you can make some jokes while they wait for the medical response and sweetie and scoot tries invain to enlight the mood. But even that is hard to pull out.
Now, i'm not a professional critic, i'm just suggesting how you could improve your story. You are free to ignore my advices.
They're all my impressions.
p.s.: are you french, right?
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It is true that at the beginning I had difficulty in choosing the orientation of the comic, the first 5 parts were based on of the comic comedy, then I forked on of the most serious, but I was afraid of annoying those who had liked these parts.
I thank you for your advices, I think of taking myself there otherwise for the next comic strips.
And yes i'm french.
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J'ai la chance d'être bien entouré, en anglais comme en francais
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First the early grave digging and now this. You make Sweetie Belle so amusing in this story. And Apple Bloom is just thinking "Keep telling yourself that, Scootaloo."
One question thought. Apple Bloom said she wanted "another" warm hug, but between this panel and the last there was no "first" hug, so shouldn't it just be "A" warm hug
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If i want to define this 3 fillys
Scootaloo is strongh
Sweetie is the heart
Apple bloom is the head of this trio
The first hug is in part 2.
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Elle aurait du faire une apparition dans cette BD, mais j'ai dut changer mes plans, et puis au final, aurait elle laissé Apple Bloom sortir dans cette état, donc officieusement elle est en livraison, si besoin je peut remanier l'épilogue et la faire apparaitre, mais j'en suis qu'au stade de la réflexion.
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Even in the sad moments, we can really connect to these characters. This is a beautiful story you've got here. Thank you for writing it.
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And thank you for reading it and love it.
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I wish you the best with the rest of this series!
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aawww... the nice feels of a hug. nice work on the comic.
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In all seriousness though, what the fuck is wrong with AB... O_o
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Sorry to have copied stuck this answer given to another reader.
She caught a powerful enough disease to weaken a member of the family Apple, but I let the reader imagine which disease she was abble to catch.
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No prob, and holy shit it sounds dangerous... O_o
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It's interesting that even though Applebloom is the one who is sick, she has been the most calm of the three
Being tough must be a family trait.
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She's a very brave filly, i like to define her like that.
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right in da feels brah <.<
now they all get ill ;D
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That would be a real nightmare to draw.
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Oui, la il sont en aparté, mais on vera Derpy de la partie 16 a 19.
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