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JessHavok — Eclipse: issue #1 page 20

Published: 2013-03-28 01:34:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 949; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 10
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Description This is the original day time version of the page I colored, the final page I changed to night, you can see here: jesshavok.deviantart.com/art/E…

You can also see the black&white line art here: petewraymond09.deviantart.com#…

Other pages for this upcoming comic can be seen here:

Issue #1 promo poster: jesshavok.deviantart.com/art/E…
Issue #1 page 3: jesshavok.deviantart.com/art/E…
Issue #1 page 19: jesshavok.deviantart.com/art/E…
Issue #1 page 20: jesshavok.deviantart.com/art/E… (night version)
Issue #1 page 21: jesshavok.deviantart.com/art/E…
Issue #2 page 1: jesshavok.deviantart.com/art/E…



Credits:
Written & Created by Trevor Talbott & Scott Meier
Pencils/Inks by Pete Raymond
Coloring/Lettering by Jessica Jimerson
Product of S&T Comics

Official Eclipse twitter: eclipsethecomic twitter.com/EclipseTheComic

ECLIPSE IS NOW ON KICKSTARTER!!! Check it out: www.kickstarter.com/projects/e…
Get your copy of the comic  book here: comics.drivethrustuff.com/prod…
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Comments: 6

DraculeaRiccy [2013-04-07 08:14:40 +0000 UTC]

colours look really nice, I like the soft blending a lot. The foot looks a bit odd, but you didn't do the inking, so that's not your problem

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JessHavok In reply to DraculeaRiccy [2013-04-07 18:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I ended up making the lighting a bit stronger on the final nighttime verison of this page. But I'm still found of this one myself too... But thank you for your comment.

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edf [2013-03-28 11:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Very sharp image! I do have to ask- I am pretty sure- that you colored the piece only not inked? I am preyy sure I am correct so I will do the crit.

I think the coloring is realy good. I think the bg is handled perfectly- you get the bg but its not overbearing. ( however, at first glance I did not see the sun/planet there, however, I dont think it could have been handled differently)

For the coloring on the character- I am wantign to know what it would look like with some more darks... I think you are almost there- but there are some spots that I think would push back better if there was a darker shadow on it ( teeth- where they go back behind the lips)

The hair could be more defined with darks too, or color it in a way where it feels more strandy.


I think its colored in very well tho. Nice dynamic pose and great color choices!

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JessHavok In reply to edf [2013-03-29 05:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the detailed critique, much appreciated! And I agree with your points, I will keep a watchful eye for stronger contrast areas with future works. For things that get printed though, can't go too dark because what often looks perfect on LCD/computer screens will be just on the too dark side when printed. So I have to be mind of that, but again much appreciated and I will try out refining hair for the next page a bit more.

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SpacedOutBunny [2013-03-28 06:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Love the dynamic pose of this, and the lighting is good too!

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JessHavok In reply to SpacedOutBunny [2013-03-28 06:56:01 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like

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