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Published: 2011-11-13 06:13:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 6138; Favourites: 335; Downloads: 0
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He can't take it anymore -

Ed stared back at the dull reflection in the hotel bathroom,
gazing into eyes he could no longer recognize. An eerie
stranger stood before him, beckoning to make a move.

What had he done? What was he going to tell granny?
That he willingly handed over her only grandchild to the
demoniac creatures that lurked beneath Central City? His
best friend. Their hostage to keep him in line. And now Al
couldn't even grant him some sort of comfort.

He was utterly alone. In his thoughts, in his actions, in his
plans.

Again and again he mulled over alternative options that
could have been taken. Marco? Using himself as a
philosopher's stone again? Anything would have been
better than asking him to help.

A bubbling rage sizzled along his skin until he couldn't
contain it any longer and drove a fist into the mirror. Shards
fell and knuckles bled, and the pain almost served as a
buffer to ease his guilt stricken mind.

That bastard had the nerve to defile her into a demon.
How was he going to save her and fight Father all at
the same time? As if this wasn't already complicated
enough, rescuing a damsel in distress was now in the
grand scheme.

Thoughts of how she would be corrupted seeped into
his fuzzy mind. All the horrible things she'd be forced to
live with after the fact. He couldn't take it anymore. First,
he ruined his brother's childhood, now his best friend's
innocence.

...Tears began to fall...



(Al's not dead. Keeping pride occupied just the same as in
the manga.))

This story is an AU that splits right after Ed leaves the
Rockbells for the last time before the promised day. A
stubborn Winry secretly follows Ed into the battle with pride,
When pride observes her as useless meat, he fatally
wounds her, causing Ed to seek help from Father.

The story is very emotionally driven. So my arts of it are
mostly going to be showing high stress level scenes. I have
more in my fandom gallery along with more info on the
story.

The next one is: Shame

Too-de-loo!

((NOTE to writers! This story is up for collab. I'm looking
for a partner. I illustrate - they write))

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Comments: 53

Amblerrone [2013-04-16 06:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that sounds like a really nice story! Sad, but nice! So many stories, so little time.

Great picture! Love the emotion and everything in it.

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wateralchemist121 [2013-02-09 19:31:42 +0000 UTC]

AWW!DX i wanna give hm a hug!!!!

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nerdygangsta [2012-09-03 21:19:43 +0000 UTC]

oh my gods that sooo effing amazing!!!!!!

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marziyyih [2012-07-04 17:17:25 +0000 UTC]

This deserves a D.D!

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Jessimie In reply to marziyyih [2012-07-04 22:46:45 +0000 UTC]

you are way too kind. haha thank you ^__^

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marziyyih In reply to Jessimie [2012-07-05 01:49:04 +0000 UTC]

I really mean it. ^^

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i-am-tsukiko [2012-05-18 21:39:16 +0000 UTC]

.........wow. I read what you wrote. so....*looking for the right word, but words escape me*................yeah. Amazing.

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harrellgirl [2012-05-13 01:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Powerful

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La-Anime [2012-04-14 05:20:33 +0000 UTC]

sweet. Although I'd hug Ed if I could.... ;_; this shiz is awesome.

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Akeyuri [2012-02-10 21:08:40 +0000 UTC]

I love this, so much!

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Jessimie In reply to Akeyuri [2012-02-10 21:20:35 +0000 UTC]

\^o^/

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thisismyringtone [2012-01-08 04:30:03 +0000 UTC]

nice art

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2ndAvatar [2011-12-26 17:48:54 +0000 UTC]

Soooooo beautiful and emotive! *weeps from joy*

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WorthSudoku [2011-12-06 20:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is really good.

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SKKDragonKnight [2011-12-04 03:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Love the picture!

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ArtsyVana [2011-11-26 23:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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shebeast2 [2011-11-15 14:47:34 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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jack-pictures [2011-11-14 16:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Great!
The dark color make you to feel with Ed

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daisukebebop [2011-11-14 15:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Hi there! I do a lot of writing myself, but if i wasn't so busy I would take you up on this offer. I write with an idea to be emotional, I often stick close to the emotions of the character, what they're feeling, thinking and such. I'm open to both yaoi and straight pairings so I'm not picky.
Sorry, it sounds like I'm already advertising myself, but I'm afraid I can't offer my services to you. I'm in the middle of a Fullmetal alchemist and Matrix crossover called The Clier Path (on fanfiction under Ophelia Davis) and I have readers eagerly awaiting chapter 21, so it would be unfair to them if I decided to go onto a completely new writing project.
If you wanted to read it and do art work for that you're very welcome! Otherwise I'm sorry I will fave this in return though because it absolutely deserves it! It's such as amazing picture! So beautfiul as well in the emotion it purveys!
Sorry for disappointing you, but I'm afraid you can blame my sixth form for that.
Thank you for this wonderful piece!

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hikari-no-tenshi [2011-11-14 06:16:54 +0000 UTC]

The picture is so beautiful and the story is so touching!!

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mizukai [2011-11-14 02:41:02 +0000 UTC]

Are you still interested in a writing partner?

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SonicTailsBros4ever [2011-11-14 01:13:15 +0000 UTC]

...OOH! So awesome! Absolutely wonderful! *U* Rock on!

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ReaderWriterArtist [2011-11-14 00:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Dude(ette), this is incredible! It sounds like it's going to be an awesome story, and the art is fabulous. If I didn't have so much going on in my life--and if I had finished the manga--I would love to collab with you. As it is, I'll keep my eye on this! ^^

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AmyNChan [2011-11-13 21:56:18 +0000 UTC]

That is such a haunting piece, but i can't look away. it's done so well~! *^_^*

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IAmDeprivedOfSleep [2011-11-13 20:51:47 +0000 UTC]

wow this is so good i thought* is was just realy good cosplay XD

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NeonSplash [2011-11-13 20:35:53 +0000 UTC]

This piece is amazing and beautiful! I love it! The colors in it just draw so much emotion and the dark shading gives it such an eerie, depressing feel. Did I mention I love this? xD Amazing job!

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sexykyo [2011-11-13 20:12:49 +0000 UTC]

wow i thought this was a photo!! awesome drawing! ^-^

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Phantomrose96 [2011-11-13 19:08:14 +0000 UTC]

This sounds so great! I'm interested in writing!
[link]

That's the link to my fanfic . net account if you want to look at my writing style. Just let me know what you think of it. If it's not what you're looking for, don't worry, I'm fine with a no. ^^

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LadyDemona [2011-11-13 18:57:22 +0000 UTC]

I love it

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Katrina-Crane [2011-11-13 18:03:57 +0000 UTC]

So depressing! I love it! The story sounds awesome 8D
I'm really interested in writing it...>3>

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VampireNerd13 [2011-11-13 18:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful picture, and such an interesting story! Poor Ed, and poor Winry! I'd love to read something like this!

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Zchantie [2011-11-13 17:39:31 +0000 UTC]

This was so awesome Jess, I saw the pic originally on your Facebook and liked it, but with the story, just, God damn. <3

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Jessimie In reply to Zchantie [2011-11-13 17:44:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks Jakie! XD

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Jessimie In reply to Jessimie [2011-11-13 17:45:13 +0000 UTC]

*Jackie (sp?) lol

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Zchantie In reply to Jessimie [2011-11-13 17:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Bahahaha, yessim, Jackie. XD ♥♥♥

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Jessimie In reply to Zchantie [2011-11-13 17:49:33 +0000 UTC]

got it! XD

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Supahfrog [2011-11-13 17:37:15 +0000 UTC]

Amazingly detailed, probably the best realism Ed i've ever seen.
Incredibly done

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Jessimie In reply to Supahfrog [2011-11-13 17:42:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Supahfrog In reply to Jessimie [2011-11-13 17:46:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SnowsGhost [2011-11-13 16:52:06 +0000 UTC]

I have no words...
Ok maybe I do, the story this tells is amazingly emotional I can't wait to see more

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ShadowIshAweshome [2011-11-13 15:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That is absolutely amazing.

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alannacrystal [2011-11-13 15:43:04 +0000 UTC]

The detail, colours and atmosphere are stunning. Ed look so realistic in your style that it feels like he's going to walk off the page at any second. Wow. I love it.

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Naomi-Nazo [2011-11-13 15:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh. My. Goodness. This is, just wow! Not only is the artwork amazing, my favorite part is his hair, its incredible; but the story itself is beyond words. I read just the first paragraph you have here and I've been hooked. This is beyond a doubt, just incredible!

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Merides [2011-11-13 15:00:48 +0000 UTC]

HOLY. And the story... O.O I'm in shock and awe. Amazing.

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VanityShadowz [2011-11-13 14:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow theres so much detail in this
It looks amazing, I seriously can almost feel Ed's pain o.o
Theres blood under his hand too right? Ohh Ed what've you been doing o.o

anywayz! Epic piece!

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Shadowpaci [2011-11-13 13:57:24 +0000 UTC]

I just... LOVE it. The picture, the text, everything. Awesome! Can I read more somewhere...?

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Jessimie In reply to Shadowpaci [2011-11-13 17:42:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm still in the process of searching for a collab writer.
if you have an LJ account, please spread the word! thank you!

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sashimigirl92 [2011-11-13 10:59:42 +0000 UTC]

wwwwaaah the picture is amazing and so powerful. and the text is so touching aswell.
can I read more of this somewhere? it's really good.
gonna fave this so bad. great job!

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Jessimie In reply to sashimigirl92 [2011-11-13 17:41:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm still in the process of searching for a collab writer.
if you have an LJ account, please spread the word!

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red-winged-angel [2011-11-13 06:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Amazing.

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