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JessyMcBump — TRON OC
Published: 2012-06-14 14:37:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1703; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 10
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I love tron sooo much ;A; from the graphics to the music with Daft punk
So here's my OC 
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YAY MY FIRST CRITIQUE! a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/o/f… " alt=" " title="foxyayzplz"/>
kk a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/m/s… " alt=" " title="smartyplz"/>DOWN TO BUSINESS:
(REMEMBER I MIGHT BE HARSH CAUSE I LOVE Ur ARTS AND U R SO GOOD ALREADY U CAN BE PERFECTTTT!) a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/i/f… " alt=" " title="finallyplz"/>
Good points or Bad points first? kk a.deviantart.net/avatars/i/c/i… " alt=" " title="iceuplz"/> bad then~
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a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/o/m… " alt=" " title="monkeyclap"/>Good points!: (Keep these up!)
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a.deviantart.net/avatars/i/l/i… " alt=" " title="IloveItplz"/> WELL THATS ALL~
a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/i/m… " alt=" " title="miguelplz"/> dont h8 me. i spent a goo hour on this
a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/u/b… " alt=" " title="bunnyloveplz"/> BUT I LOVE U AND UR ART SO MUCH
a.deviantart.net/avatars/g/o/g… " alt=" " title="GoodJob-plz"/> I HOPE THIS HELPS U B A BETTER ARTIST CAUSE U MADE ME A BETTER ARTIST!
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Thanks Kai omgsh this criique is perfect! yeah dont bother with the background, I hate backgrounds and refuse to try with them XD hhahaha and yeah anatomy.... I ... I try but will never be able to accomplish DX lol but thanks I =love htis so much!
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heeee <3 imsogladudonth8me4this <3
yeah BKGs r a bore~ but they can really add to a piece~
BUT ANATOMY IS YOUR FRIEND! DONT NEGLECT UR FRIENDS <3
YW <3 im glad u lieked "htis"
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Very-very good critique! That is exactly what I prefer to see even in my own critiques. I'm talking about how constructive the critique need to be without to be afraid to express your own point of view any work like this should be marked as fair even for its honesty instead of those comments where would be written only "Super", "Good" or even "Wow"! Yours is a beautiful example of an incontrovertible work/critique!
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Oh~ Thank You so much! <3
Miss you have done so many helpful critiques!
I am so glad that you liked my critique! Now I know I was doing it right! yay
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Don't worry about the reaction of the artist because for me, when I only started writing a critiques, it was so necessary and nervously that mostly I was very disillusioned after some time about how in fact my critique is needed. In fact I have done much more critiques then you may find in my page but some of them must to be deleted because it is no longer need for the authors. Some other my critiques still in the storage but they weren't posted by the artists to their artworks for some reasons. [link] This one I love very much because it was the first really critical one but the reaction of the artist was very disappointing for me because this young girl said that my critique is "unconstructive". I was very angry about it but won't delete it because I'm proud about what I'm doing. And I have few other works that weren’t posted by some reasons like "not needed" etc.; or authors may even not react on your work at all! [link] I was doing this critique for at least two days because I didn’t know how to express my own point of view to this very respectful artist on DA, and I still didn't receive any answer from him.
I'm saying this only to support you in your "art". For me writing a critique is the only way to show everyone on DA that I do exist because I'm not an artist in the way they are. This is like my job and hobby in the same way and I'm proud about what I'm doing. In fact, you should find one artist for yourself who would always be glad about receiving critiques from you nevertheless how good, long and nice it would be! is my very good friend who I met on DA and we are supporting each other in our art.
Also you may create your own style of writing! I discovered that I have one only after a few months of writing. For me it is always "First of all" or "Sorry my darling" in the beginning, talking about the color palette, frequent using of the word "nevertheless", "thank you for showing us your talent", and "With all my respect" at the end. It would be much easier for you to write by one scheme without "inventing a bicycle" each time!
Well, good luck and if you will need anything or just would like to talk with someone on DA I'm always would be glad to hear something from my "colleague"!
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Thank you so much!
This is just what I needed! <3
Those critiques were so thuro and so thought thru~ I dont know what those artists where thinking to not give proper agnowledgement to them~
Deviantart needs more users like you~
I personally know this particular artist, and I know she would never hate me for some pointers~
But to critique a stranger and not know how the artist will react, that probably takes a lot of confidence! <3
-admiration-
Thank you so much again! I hope I can develop my own writing style someday!
Best wishes!
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Wow, thank you very much for your complement and you're welcome!
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Daft Punk= coming from MY country ('m so proud !)
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lucky!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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She is drawn very well and I like her a lot. The colour is great, I just feel there is something wrong the the anatomy of her feet or ankles
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yeah i tried to make her like anime - ish where theyre really tall and skiny with small hands and feet
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Yeah, it does come through. Still great job
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