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Published: 2012-01-19 23:33:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 383; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 6
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Cloud turned into sorasora + cloud fusion
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wow you did an AMAZING job on the hair! seriously fantastic! and the wolf symbol is just GREAT. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
now for some pointers...
~the face is a bit "flat". if you extended the nose and extended the lips a little more it will really look more like Cloud instead of Sora, like what you think e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="
~also, don't be afraid to go darker!! what you have is right now is great, but it could be improved if you took your shading to the next level. darken under the chin and other places to give a sharper light source. you can also bring out highlights in the hair with an eraser if you so desire
~the ear could use work. I know ears are difficult, but if you look at the reference picture, you can simply draw the tones you see instead of drawing lines that aren't actually there (it's a hard concept to grasp, no doubt). you'll get it if you practice though e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
overall great composition and I can't wait to see more work!
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Thanks for the critique!
This was actually my first time to draw cg character cloud
and it took me 3 hours lol
thank you for the helpful pointers. i would practice
harder and correct my mistakes. thanks again for
the kind words!!
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My, my, I don't see a Sora/Cloud fusion every day. Certainly a fun idea. Before I begin, I must say, the penciling here is absolutely gorgeous. My favorite part of the piece must be the penciling technique. The delicate strands of the hair, as well as the soft curves of the face, are about perfectly captured. Nothing major that needs real improvement sticks out to me about this piece. however, there are a few small things that may need work. His shoulder seems to lack a bit of definition, and looks a little like he lacks arms. It is likely just the angle of the piece, however, and there's nothing wrong with it, it simply doesn't look quite right. It could easily be solved by showing a small bit of the far arm. Aside from this one thing, nothing else really seems as if it needs work. Overall a fantastic job, and I hope to see more from you.
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thanks for the kind words.
I will reupload this with the rest of the body
sora looks like the younger version of cloud
so i think he would look like this in KH3 :]
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