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My own take on Disney's Maleficent.Here is the WIP
Credits to the amazing Mervilina
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Comments: 24
moonbaby17 [2014-05-03 05:53:18 +0000 UTC]
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Let me begin by saying, 'Wow, this is impressive.' The vision is ideal for a woman of her caliber and the technique is exemplary. Your brush strokes are so refined, precise, and subtle, this looks as though it were produced on an oil canvas instead [I'm sold by your aptitude]. Furthermore, the addendum of Maleficent's alter ego has been done before, but you demonstrate her fighting her inner demons so lucidly, it's timeless. The impact reads loud and clear: Maleficent is conscientious of her decisions and shows no mercy. It's intriguing. I've questioned Maleficent's morals by the end of this critique, and have decided she has none. Your work is exemplary, as previously mentioned. Also, she bears armor similar to that of Loki's apparel. I enjoy plausible crossovers, and because Loki and Maleficent are cohorts for calamity, they would benefit from a mutual relationship that would eventually bloom into a monogamous love, and produce the woman depicted in the picture above. I love it.
However, there are a few flaws that I've noticed. Bear in mind, these are only trivial. The regalia she wears is a tad too small for her face; as a result, her countenance is the most prominent feature about this picture. Her décolletage should be expanded to complement her face accordingly, thus resulting in broad shoulders for a woman of her frame. Her left (her left, not the viewer's left) arm should be slightly elongated to match the pinnacle of her right elbow. Her left hand's fingers' length should be slightly reduced to a more realistic proportion, and the width of her right hand's fingers' should be slightly thicker. The cap on her left shoulder should be slightly lowered to match the height of her right shoulder cap, and the adornments behind her left shoulder cap should be slightly extended to match the length of the opposing side. Also, is the cape a solid or is it flexible? It appears to be a solid because of its designated color. Also, her right eyebrow should be the same width as her left eyebrow, and the tip of her lip on its right side should be slightly extended to match the other half; as a result, the left side of her lips look plump and luscious as opposed to the right-hand-side that needs a little tweaking. Apart from that, everything else is fine, and the neck is just perfect. Excellent choice in palette and wonderful execution of your skill. The lighting is marvelous. Well done.
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jetvls In reply to moonbaby17 [2014-05-03 06:26:25 +0000 UTC]
These are helpful. I am grateful! Thank you so much!
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moonbaby17 In reply to jetvls [2014-05-03 11:47:57 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Glad I could help!
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levy009 In reply to jetvls [2014-07-09 15:37:11 +0000 UTC]
salamat yeahh .. mas astig lang sayo kasi may 3d pa e.
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