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Published: 2004-04-25 05:51:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1979; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 1071
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"he leaves me broken, exhausted, weak and breathless"Related content
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Nice touch, nice shot. Nice lingerie. 
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The bed's pretty clean for, like just after...
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lol really? you make a mess, do you?
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you faved it! yay! thank you!!
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how can i put into words what you ahve put into this photograph..?
I cant.
but i can and will try to express what this piece shows to me
what it expresses to me
what is portrayed and shown through the lens..
I was writing a piece sometime ago...
and this image
and your words..complete it flawlessly
I hope you dont mind..
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"These Creases
Pleated cotton still holds your scent
Hushed anxieties still linger subtly but surely
In the dim stillness of morning light
Your figure flickers as my eyes flutter
A phantom of an outline is all that remains
Those Folds
Pressed delicacies of silken caress
Dance briskly about lone heated flesh
Memories reminded revelries touched"
βhe leaves me broken,
exhausted, weak and
...breathless"
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you've managed to capture something so beautiful here within this shot..
a feeling so fragile that it must be forever immortalized..
expressing that moment..the moments that follow
every bit of every ounce of anything or nothing at all..
encompassed here within this magnificent photograph
your body positioned and settled in just such a way..
your flesh, your clothing your knees,
your lips...your lips took my breath away..
no matter how the shot was cropped
the eyes drawn to the gentle curves of your body..
the russled and gripped sheets..
your lips tied them all together for me..
as i imagined you speak that line..
those words aloud... truly this piece.. is poetry without words..
and art worthy of praise..
again you have outdone yourself..and
again i am..impressed..
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sigh... you speak such beautiful words that i have no idea how a photo of mine could cause you to speak them. i really enjoyed your piece. i think it works wonderfully with the shot. i'm glad you approve of the lips. i wasn't sure about them but i wanted some facial left in it. and also, i could hear the words whispering out of my mouth. i have no idea how i manage to outdo myself but i'm glad you think i do!
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Ooooooooo I like it. But why did you cut the Face off? I love the feeling and the quote. bravo!
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to be honest, i disliked the facial expression, lol
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the only thing I don't like is "weak".
the rest is fine.
powerful imagery.
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cause a love whould leave you strong . . .
I've had way too much of the "I'm left with a sinking feeling, lost and weak" in my life . . I guess you just hit something personal for me . ..
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i'm glad you like it. may i ask why you don't like "weak"?
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I would have liked to see the expression on your face aswell, would have made the picture i think. Really excellent though.
Lovely hips
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it can be in a good way. but it can also be in a bad way.
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thanks for the fav! i'm glad you like it
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Great picture, but it leaves an awful gut feeling inside me
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thing is recently, around here in Australia, the headlines have been filled with reports of gang rapes and other sexual assults.
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why kind of feeling?
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Your collar bones & anklet are a beautiful aspect to this fabulous narrative image
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funny you should say that because i was going to crop the picture so the collar bones were gone because i didn't think they were attractive. it's a good thing i left them!
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The softness of this image is what really makes it. I can almost feel the sheets. +DevWatch
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thanks for the watch! i hope i don't let you down!
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A mix between perfect ecstasy and a sense of emptyness. Interesting description and matching picture. I like the combination of feelings to make it all seem almost ironic but seemingly purposeful. Well done.
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empty goes along with what i had in mind. i wanted there to be a sense that the girl (me) was alone. i wanted to feel loneliness. but i still wanted that ecstasy feeling though... yay, i'm glad you got it!
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have to say that this picture captures that feeling well. not a good feeling... but a lovely picture.
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awww, thank you so much for the fav!
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