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Published: 2008-12-08 20:28:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1092; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 33
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I finally used my pencils again... ^^Reference used (yep, flipped horizontal... and liquified a little bit before i began drawing): [link] by
I'm kind of unhappy with how her lips turned out but the rest is okay to me..
I hope you like it..
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Wonderful detail in the shading. I always have trouble with lips, myself. But these look just fine for the expression in the eyes.
I found you through a feature we were both a part of, and I'm certainly glad I did, your work is outstanding.
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Die Highlights stören mich hier als Einziges, da sie so losgelöst von der Textur das Papieres sind. Sind die digital hinzu gekommen oder deckt die weiße Farbe einfach so stark?
Sehr nettes Bild
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Danke für den Comment!
Die Highlights sind digital dazu gekommen (wie bei meinen meisten bildern, da ich noch keinen weißen stift gefunden habe, der absolut befriedigende highlights setzt). Damals hatte ich auch noch nicht die Übung, um sie einigermaßen subtil in das bild einzufügen und ehrlich gesagt, stören sie mich mittlerweile auch!
LG
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Ist durchaus nachvollziehbar, ich regel auch nichts mehr an alten Bildern obwohl ich sie dadurch noch optimieren könnte.
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this is really nice! indeed-io! like the expression and just the fact that you used pencils! gahhh,,,!
keep it up!
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WOW! This is awesome! I can't believe it doesn't have more views/faves then it does.
Great job!
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Thank you very much...
As more as i look at it as less i like it... I can see a new mistake every time...
But i'm glad you like it... 
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You did a really nice job, I like how you intensified her expression and the soft shading on her skin.
I think the problem with the mouth is the shape. The lower lip protudes in your drawing - it almost touches the line which defines the end of the jaw. In the reference it doesn't curve outward so much.
Also notice the line between the lips: yours goes up from the middle and then curves down. In the reference it goes up, bends down and then curves upward a little.
If something looks off it's always good to check the reference and look close at the shape of it
Anyways, keep it up, this looks really nice already
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Thank you very much for the critique and the advices...
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Thank you..
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