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Music is my energy,I only need to hear to see,
Everything you have done to me,
It started with you loving me.
I always thought the trials and tribulations would be worth it,
If you gave me a sea to cross I'd steal a ship then sail it,
I'd spend eternity in desert winds if you declare it,
I only did those things because you said I had to prove it.
I don't have to prove anything,
You gave your heart to me and I,
Swore never to let it be harmed,
Is my word not enough for you?
I held you tight when you started to fret that you would lose me,
I calmed you down and let you know I'd be with you forever,
I swore I'd be with you until the day death separates us,
I only did those things because I didn't want to lose you.
I never wanted to lose you,
I gave my heart to you and you,
Swore never to let it be harmed,
Your word was just enough for me.
When your friend told me you were dumping me, you may as well have,
Just shot me in the chest and saved me sleepless nights of pain,
Instead of me trying to throw myself into the water,
Then coming to my senses in the truth-revealing rain.
I now wish I never met you,
Because heartbreak's all that ensued,
Despite the happy memories,
Now they all just cause pain to me.
I'm sure you understand that I'm deeply upset about it,
Apparently you don't, you get angrier by the day,
All you had to do was say so, and I would have changed it,
Instead, you send an army of your friends marching my way.
After your friends had dealt with me,
I needed some more energy,
So I just put some music on,
And everything was fine for me.
There's nothing that music can't solve,
If you need to deflate or grow,
Just put your music on full blast,
And all your woes are washed away...
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Comments: 3
Jiggibidy [2009-01-03 19:44:32 +0000 UTC]
P.S. beacuse I'm too lazy to edit the deviation, I know it doesn't rhyme and there's no real structure, but it written on a spur of the moment for the most part, it's all raw thought, no post-work.
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catnipguru In reply to Jiggibidy [2009-01-03 19:47:26 +0000 UTC]
That was actually what I was going to comment on... the content itself is good, but there isn't any rhyming pattern, or none that is consistent.
However, if it was on the spur of the moment, congratulations.
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Jiggibidy In reply to catnipguru [2009-01-03 19:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it was harder to keep a rhyme scheme but still keep the same theme, that's why I prefer poetry, you can elaborate a lot more and nobody notices.
Thanks for the favourite.
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