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Published: 2004-09-26 13:56:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1274; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 201
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Well.. i guess its more or less done.. i think
Anyway.. i still have problems with the feet... i cant get it right.. anyone kind to help me out??
Will color this soon enough--- XD Wish i had many many hands that can multitask both darwing and painting at teh same time.. ahhaha!!
Comments and critiqs are welcomed...!
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I like her face. She looks cute!
Umm, are they on a bed or on the floor? I rarely see windows that's at a low level. But if on a bed, it looks to have a hard surface, without any folds. (though can easily be accomplished with the colored version.)
And I think her right leg (her POV) is a bit strange....
Color!! XD
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Ooo. its liek those sofas on a elevated plane.. i duno.. those ang mo sofa by the window kind... XD
Hmm your right with teh missing of folds! I totally missed it out! XD XD Hee hee! Thanks for reminding me!
yeah her right leg is kdina wierd.. i fixed it on me hard copy.. maybe i'll post it up once i cged it
Thnak you!!!
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Overall its great, but the right foot is angle too downward. Try pointing it the right heel alittle more.
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Excellent line styles, as usual. Very clean subject and a clever concept.
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Hmm, try angling her heel more 'inside' and see. Or if all else fails, grad some reference.
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Thanks!! XD
Hee hee yeah, i was trying to look at me leg as i do it.. cracnking and trying to imagine what will it look like... but little did i realize there's a thing called mirror.... X_X
XD Thank yew~!
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It would be nice if the straight lines are supposed to be uh.. straight, lol. Everything else looks awesome though, I really like the phonograph? Or is it just a really old record player, hehe. The pose is really cool, as the cat as well.
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is the heel on her left foot too small? I'm not sure because generally my feet turned out like mutated duck feet anyway.....
But the general atmosphere of the picture is nice, very calm and collected with a hint of anticipation. Now thats what i call yummy. *thumbs up and winks* XD
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