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OH MY GOD WHAT THE FUCK HAVE I DONERequesting advanced critique on this as i have a number of anatomical issues (especially with the muscle toning). please, please, PLEASE for the love of god, crit this hideous thing whenever possible.
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OMGZ I THINK MY BRAIN BROKE...........WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN.....!!!!
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eeeh!! nice to meet you too ^^
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hehe so u r a new zealander?
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Oh my i find this extremely adorable <3 thoose colors are so awesome <333
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hey erm.. . this might sound stupid but which yuu am i drawing? this one or the other forme?
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huh? i thought you were going to draw slifer
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i thought i was doing the sketch/layout for yuu vs demon atemu...
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yeah, but we each draw our own characters...
you start off drawing demon atems first, then i'll draw yuu.
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ohhhhhh ok
hmm on the same canvas?
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the only bad thing i can notice is the inbalace in the buff-ness. hes small and chibi yet has muscles like a powerfull adult worior or something.
i thnk its well-coloured to say the least
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As far as critisism goes from me, I'll say that HIS EARS ARE ADORKABLE and also that I love the stripes and spots. No, but really now, the forearms are a bit too curvy, and his animal-stomach (what?) should be much 'skinnier'. Gee, I really hope that helps at all. By the by, I friggin' love the colors...
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EARS CAT also...what's a forearm? :0 (is it the top of arm? or is it the.....fffck) his lower half is also supposed to be a lion and judging from the reference pic i have of lions....but still I LOVE YOU FOR TRYING TO CRIT 
<3<3
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I believe it's the, er, bit with the hand attached. Unless I'm just being stupid and messed up my terms again. Oooh, lion. That makes more sense. Wasn't really thinking. -_-; Hey, no problem. I'm trying to get better at critiquing as well as help other people by critiquing. :3
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Yuuuuuuuu! 
Now you can be used as a transportation device.. an adorable little mishy-mash transportation device! 8D
For some reason I just adore that his collar is being used as a belt now 
Colours are just... Gyaaaaa
Great work! *steals Yuu* Can't have him back now 83
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i can be used as a transportation device? COOL 8D
*gets you to ride on her back*
....owww my back..
i know it's cute eh? xD and he IS an alley cat...and older than you think he is (he's 17) so yeah...xD though i hate how the way i painted his muscles makes him look really anorexic here...Dx
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Did you just... add muscle because we said his hands looked girly? and he still looks like "AHH THERE'S A SEME BEHIND ME RUN!!!"
Your shouta fetish is still showing no matter what you do!!!
But really maybe a little bit too much muscle in his right arm. His right, not your right, your right is his left.
Is it just me or does he have a penis?
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...not really. he really is supposed to be muscly..
he's supposed to have a penis you fool. he's a booooooooooooooooooiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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he looks adorable as a chimera 
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and lion. his animal half's body's that of a lion. :3
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Constructive critique: U SUXX
I lie of course
I find this awesomely amusing actually. Just the thumbnail made me grin xD The colouring is super gorgeous too!
I haven't really studied up on 4 legged anatomy so I don't really feel fit to crit this, though I can try if you wish. Stylistically speaking, I would make the head smaller and/or the shoulders bigger, but that's just my personal preference, not the law of the land obviously
<3
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that's a 100% true though. x3 i suck and need more training! KUNG FU TRAINING
I KNEW IT that head is fucking huge (and those small shoulders make him look so girly!!)...it's a bad habit i picked up from drawing so much shota-styled characters for more than 4 years...Dx i'm glad you picked up on it
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Well, I'm not gonna add to the critiques myself for one reason: I can't stop giggling. ^w^ Sorry, but for some reason Yuu just looks absolutely fucking adorable like this. ^w^ Seriously! Let me list the various reasons WHY I like this picture:
1. It's Yuu. ^w^
2. He's shirtless and looks good without a shirt. ^w^
3. A kitty is involved in multiple ways.
4. It's just an adorable idea. ^w^
... Yeah, that's about it. ^w^
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i knew you'd like this because of the aforementioned ideas. ^w^ so in a way it's kinda like a gift for you...
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how about
I LOVE PENIS
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I have no idea what is going on here, or what the bloody hell happened to Yuu, but I like it.
I don't think I have anything to add to the critiques you've already receieved, so nothing more from me.
...Except for: I hope, and am sure, you will only gain from asking for crits; go you!
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he is scared because a gazelle is chasing after him.
sorry i'm taking so long with your commission. D: i'm currently trying to do some serious learning to draw...did one want an angled portrait or just a portrait?
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It's alright, love, I totally understand.
I wanted a full-body picture, by the way, incase it slipped your mind~
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....i really don't want to know what your thinking then <____<
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I agree with pretty much what was said already. Sorry it doesn't help much, but malanok brought up what I would've said about some of the anatomy with the hand and legs. -__- I'm no good at anatomy.
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roflol. same. :C i'm shit at drawing anything with anatomy. (including cars and trees RFLOL)
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malanok made some good points, as for the bottom cat half, if not said already the tail is not consistant with what was made ath teh staart of the fluff, younger cats tend to have a curve upward on their bellys to the tail. the front right leg seems to come off sooner than it should, it needs tohave more eh body in it so it looks a bit more connected <_<
and please don't take any of these crits bad
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i love you too
also, please elaborate on "have more eh body in it" and redlining plz if possible.
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it just seemed that the leg seemed detached a bit, like there was nothing connected behind it much, and i must say, muscles are evil <.<
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critique... ok...
his left hand is too big; his back right leg is at too large an angle compared tot he rest of his body; tail should be furry if the base of the spine is furry; the shading on the left front paw is inconsistent to the rest of the shading (In my opinion); the fur should at least come up to his belly button; there should not be a patch of fur outstanding in the center of his back (the black patch) as it looks out of place and is not part of a tiger or leopard (that's my guess at what the back half is... or an albino cheetah); texture on the belt should "curve" with the belt; text style does not match that of the speech bubble; and finally "Donde esta la background?"(~my brother)
Malanok
P.S I hope this is what you meant, if not feel free to hide
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