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Published: 2016-05-27 23:48:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 778; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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I've decided to take out the information on jinx thus far, I'm still not satisfied with her oufit. I will keep on working on her tho, she is the main character after all! Tho I'm quite annoyed with myself becuase nothing seems to be satisfying for me when it comes to this character!So far it's the jacket, the tie, and her face design(her war paint) that's making me unsatisfied, could be her outfit too but I'm now going to be uppity with the details, what do you guys think?
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Well this is just a constructive critique, but I feel like Jinx's sideway stance is unnatural, particularly how the right hip (not the viewer's point of view) looks and moves outward of the body. I might be wrong since there are lot's of shapes and flexibility among women.
I do like her design but, this is just my taste, I don't think that type of shirt goes with the jacket....although I do like the shirt. Maybe a a more loose double shirt without sleeves and no suspenders?
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I was thinking of ditching the suspenders as well, I'll leave those for another character her pant and leggings are what I'm ok with but, her shirt does seem a bit to much for her especially since this characters image is her jacket. Also I will admit the jacket does not work well, not in the slightest. I've been looking at some letter man/varsity jackets that was suppose to be her original key design, and I noticed what I was doing wrong, I kept adding too much white, it looked like she was sort of overwhelming to watch lol. A red letterman jacket was the key thing I was aiming for but it wasn't working out for some reason (I pretty sure it was the white) I'll see if I can re-do some color and redesign a letterman jacket.
I'm gonna see if I can also redesign the design of her jacket (actually spend some time on it instead of half-ass the concept. Gonna make a template so I don't have to keep drawing it (I'll be adding a tattoo on her as well!
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