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Published: 2010-10-02 13:09:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 6647; Favourites: 138; Downloads: 1
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This is an as-of-yet unnamed character for a RP a few of my friends are planning. She is the apprentice of the wizard king and is sent on the journey to supervise the heroes, being his eyes and ears as they try to save the world from darkness, yada yada.
She's a holy mage and attacks mostly with glowing gold fire and her staff which has a blade of crystal on one end and a crystal focus on the other.
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Let me start out by saying your coloring skills are great, I love your blending and the colors you used fit the character nicely. You also did a great job on her hair.
The thing I think needs the most work on this is the anatomy. For the most part from the feet up to the hips is pretty good, Maybe changing the position of her legs a bit would look more natural, but that's a minor detail.
The part that looks the most off is her breasts. They seem to be off center to the right quite a bit. Her right breast looks almost like it's floating. Also it looks like there is skin showing in between her breasts, wich from that angle you would not be able to see. The final part that throws this off is that the shoulder should not be visible from this angle either. It should fall behind her head and her right arm should be pushed back.
The other place that I can see is that the head looks a little too small.
My suggestion would be to have a female frind (preferably with large breasts in a bathing suit so you an see how and where they fall.) or something stand in this position to get a more accurate view of the anatomy here. That is the thing that takes away from the picture the most, your coloring skills are great! Work on anatomy e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you very much for the feedback! I agree, her torso is definitely off. I altered the sketch so many times I think I lost a bit of the original proportion work I did and didn't really realize it until pretty far in, haha. Definitely something to keep pushing myself on and I appreciate the comments.
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no prob bro, You have talent, keep it up!!
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Nope! Β Gosh I haven't been on Gaia in maybe a decade or so. Β Should go check it out
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hehe C: sorry but this is awesome art!
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Oh its not a problem! Β Reminded me that I loved Gaia.
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome.
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Amazing drawing :3 I loved the tutorial too! thanks a lot
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My pleasure I hope it comes in helpful!
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She's pwetty. I especially like the erm... glowy-crystal-sword-wand-staff um.. thing. @-@ Shiny.
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lol thank you, I wanted to do something atypical of a traditional sorceress with a staff.
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Well, she looks awesome. Great job =3
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Amazing image, love the colours and the detail!
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Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoy
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owach! @.@ not only does she look mean with that staff, but those heels would do mighty damage too
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lol, true, metal heels would pack quite a.. kick?
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nice movement of here body, hair and bat.
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Thank you so much, I didn't want it to look too static.
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haha, thank you. I'm so glad you like it.
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This is amazing I can't wait to read that tutorial.
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Aww thank you hun!
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Thank you so much.
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Oh wow, imagine getting smacked by that staff? D: You'd be humiliated and set on fire
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bahahaha, I love you Dok.
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Lovely work on the pose and the outfit is very neat too! Great shading too! Especially on the white cloth!
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Thank you so much! White is usually a pain but I'm happy with the way it came out.
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you are wellcomme ;D ^^
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Your coloring is impeccable! My only concern (and it might be the angle) is that her head looks very small compared to the rest of her body, especially the navel.
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That is a valid concern, haha. Her breasts are also off center >.> *hangs head in shame*
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