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Published: 2014-01-02 14:37:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1006; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Soo pretty! You've done a great job. Especially with the hair, it looks so realistic! The dress is also beautiful <3
To make it look even more realistic, maybe you could work on adding more shadow / depth to her face. Right now the face is receiving the same amount of light all over, which rarely happens IRL.
But it's hard to critique this piece, since it's already wonderful
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Thank you! And you're right about the face!
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The hair strands are amazing. The details you have captured with seemingly little brushwork is awesome.Β
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome!
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Because you requested a critique, I'll say that this is really good. I especially like the lighting on the hair. What I think could use more definition are the eyebrows - such as drawing in the individual hairs to make them flow more naturally. The lips too could use greater definition to really pop - such as seeing more subtle lines or subtle specks of lights. I would suggest looking at lips to get a reference. I like the lighting on the necklace and the dress. Overall my favourite part is the hair on the left side, it looks smooth and touchable 
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Thank you for taking the time to comment!
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No problem. I hope it was useful
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Always useful!Β
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Thank you!
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Nice picture! The tonal values in the hair look amazing (actually you did good job on her face as a whole). However, it looks like there was not as much attention put into the necklace. Her earrings shine just like how I imagine a jewel would but her necklace lacks tonal variety making it look a bit drab. I would add some highlights to the chain (not to each link) Β and the jewel on her necklace. Also, I think her neck needs some more shading since it's under her hair and head
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Good tip on the necklace! I'll try to make those changes! I actually used some reference for the necklace as far as the design was concerned, it wasn't something I came up with, and it initially was brighter and shinier than it is right now, but I was afraid the necklace would detract viewers from the face. Have to recheck it!
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Nicely done <3 I really like the subtle texture of the skin on her face and the detail of her hair.
One thing I would suggest is to try and remove the lines on her necklace as make it stand out a little against the rest of the drawing.
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Thanks for the tip!
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