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Published: 2007-01-27 00:21:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 283; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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one of my new-er things the face is kinda stylized an inspired by one of my teachers name from one sayin it reminds then og german expressionism--have ta look it up yet--if anyone can think of betyter location peas say so an if you can tell me everythin thats used ill owe ya pic/thing of youre choice
piece is on floor in my room fer shot
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I think it would look better if the arms or at least one were at the side or somewhere else besides behind the back, to me with them both behind it kind of focuses to much on the body part so it looks disporportionate.
The neck seems just a little bit too thick.
Kinda agree with first post about the dress looking medieval, but I only see it looking that way in the style and not the coloring.
The face and ears look shaded carefully very nicely, it pops and draws attention to it, but the dress looks completley flat besides the top square part so compared to the face and ears kind of looks bland.
The square thing (not sure what its called..) I like whatever you did to make it different than the rest of the dress because it looks like real cloth.
Anyways these are just my opinions..
sorry this was really long
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"square thing" do ypou mean shirt/smock --origonally--?? as fer length i dont mind much (exception poetry an pose) so yea
behind back--ib guess kinda focusesses on body as society tends to (yea "my thing" is kinda statementt on american culture)
look like cloth-- could that be bulk of dress or?? cause that i used "snot" (gloss/matt medium water glue machet powder an some outher stuff that i think ive still got) an added color an texture--color paints---acrylics-- texture-- graphite/charcoal shavings or like-- that was really fun
over all thanks much (semi-clueless on midevil yet tho ill see in a few as fer a class have ta look at art in 16 periods in time with art history disks --ive lucky 13 allrewady copyied to quickie-- so yea)
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Sorry Im unspecific alot 
By the square thing I mean the part of the dress right at the top that isnt made of cardboard (or at least doesnt look like it is) The rectangle with blue on both ends surrounding the white.
I think the reason I think it looks like cloth was because of the wrinkles(especially to the right of the rectangle) you could see in it instead of just being flat seemed more realistic to me.
&Welcome ^^
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ahh --paper pasted on cardboard-- thats from mainly graphite an charcoal if im right
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ohh, well that was really good to me it made it look very realistic
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lol i thoght you painted your floor tell i saw you tell someone lse you didnt. its realy nice iof you ignore the face. lol just kidding. i like it
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thanks an yea i shot them on wood(few things) an with coloration it might be thought that it was done right on the floor
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What's with the shoulder area? Is it supposed to be raised up like that, for it makes the rest of it look disjointed. The hips start too early and where are her breasts?
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the breastsa are marked by the white yea sholders are like that an i know with the hips as there wasnt enough room on the piece of cardboard(face was done first then put on cardboard) so yea like many of my outher things seems its kinda a statrementv on how society views women so yea
thanks tho
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thanks face was pretty fun ta do
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Whoa I thought you drew on the floor when I looked at the thumb 
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thanks an yea shot on floor so might do the trick--should i re-shoot on mt whitr tiger blanket or green carpeting??
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I think it would look nice on a green carpet; to me it seems like the colors would match. You should try it!
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if i get a chance ill have ta (my mom an uncle both have green crapets)
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painting the floors a pretty cool idea, but do you have to be careful about how it wears?
i feel like it has a meaning, the design on the stomach of her dress looks a bit like the earth
cool idea
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not on floor on cardboard set on floor if was floor itd be alot more worn by now--an how do you explain outher things in same area of room?? aka my outher things shot at the same time--
so yea
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ah, my friends have painted every imaginable surface so i wasnt sure, she did some crazy floor work once so she was all 'dont step there or there or there!' wouldve been cooler on the floor...lol
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proubly but then if i moved that patch would go with me
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fun huh?? an plus whatb if my uncle dosent like my paintin on the floor?? then the room would have ta be re-done
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I love the details in the face, and the colors you've used are amazing! I love the way they work in the dress!
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thanks face started pencills an yea moved to add conte an charcoal likely so yea
dress cardboard roughed with charcoal pencil then paint mixed with snot an graphite/charcoal or whatever i felt like
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wow, that is impressive that you managed to make that on cardboard! that sounds like it would be very hard to work with
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actualy not really its kinda easy least compairsed som oragimi that ive tryied its kinda thick stuff too
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well..I am still impressed
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didnt work fer ya or not tryied yet??hardest part mixin the snot as is base fer everythin else
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I like how well you did the face, and the coloring job is spiffy as well. I do think the left arm looks kinda awkward though.
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sinks back an yea i see what ya mean
done as 2 parts then tryied ta pull together an thanks
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thanks more then a few things were mixed in with the snot
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love the overall look of the peice, the face stands out so much its so smooth, yet dramatic, the bottom, dress part seems to be rushed to me, mayb try and take more time in all areas of the peice, but other than that looks cool
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(only sayin cause no one woulda guiessed it an i wasnt countin it) mixin the snot wasnt that fast or easy especally not the 2nd batch so yea
thanks
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The face, hair, and ears are really good.
The rest of her could use a little work, honestly it looks like you just wanted to get it done instead of really get it good. The face has a totally different quality than the dress.
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did head first an yea kinda wanted it like that in away theres somethin up i think called growth head done first then added rest thats there tryied ta blend some elements i know should do all at once but im thinkin of exlporin piecin together things as is done here
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pretty cool, her dress looks like one of those medievil time
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hmm cant say i noticed that
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