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Published: 2006-11-06 04:57:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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just a bunch of pics of my 5 gallon tank (the fishies series) i promise NONE are photo etited in the slightest the most ive done is cover part of the light on some of them that created neat effectssorrunding area is my desk tanks so small i just keep it near me while im workin on my comp so yea
oh and when im switchin water its quite fun as i have and want no net but the white fish is usted ta it by now
if yall might think up some cool names the white one i just call a koi tho now that ive seen some--and wanna get one in there-- yea the outher 2 were bauyght november 1st in my mind 2nd day of samgain so id be morelikely ta get black and gold/orange ones
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Here is the constructive critique you wanted:
Your composition here is passable but it seems a bit off balance due to the negative space you have going on to the left which adds no real content to the the shot. I use the triangle rule which was used by the masters and which I judge a pictureβs composition by, well that and creativity. The rule follow that you have 3 parts, figures, objects, or elements that create more or less a right or isometric triangle. This triangle can be repeated many time over and over again for increasing complex pictures but with a strong composition. Other triangles can be used but cause a weaker composition. While the shot is for the most part pretty clear the lighting is to uniform for this to be truly outstanding,directional lighting would help this out a lot and depending on the the beam of such light could make some interesting refractions because of the water.
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if was cropped so at left you would see desk would that help??
with lighting if i had covered some of the flash could it have helped??(some of fishies pics flash was covered in part or all same with the more kitten pics)
thanks tho--think i get the triangle thing to some extent
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Ya cropping off the desk might help, but I think just retaking the picture would be best.
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the tanks near empty the white one lived the longest even then it was but a few months at the most aka the fish are dead too
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LOL A new composition then 
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they have that or have fallen apart so horridly i dont wanna touch them
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