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Published: 2018-12-04 06:03:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 7163; Favourites: 108; Downloads: 0
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Comics commissioned byΒ BiscuitKrisDone last March 2018.
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The cons: the perspective is wrong on the computer desk in the top panel, it doesnt fit the perspective established by the background and placement of the figures. The mask they are putting on her is totally to movie Bane mask from the Batman and Robin movie of the 90s.
Pros: Beautifully painted, page layout is very nice, the characters all look like individuals with different bodies and faces.
Side note: I cant help but wonder why the guards are both bald and wearing tobogins on their heads. Is that a requirement of this particular unit? Yeah my mind goes to weird places like that. After enjoying your figure work its cool to see you doing some comic pages.
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Result of intended awkward multi vanishing points? Either way thanks for pointing it out. Maybe I should avoid cropping out objects into the pic next time and just follow the basic perspective rules.
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It happens, sometimes I go for the cool rather than the realistic. Check this out, I drew this roller coaster from reference first then drew in the rest of the bottom panel before realizing it didnt work at all in perspective, lol. Then I lazily decided I just didnt want to fix it cause I wanted to jump onto the next page. But even my 9 year old nephew called me out on it looking weird. Take about a lesson in doing better, called out by a kid, ouch!
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Yep. And my pen frustratingly sucks during this time only to know later it was because of the nibs wearing out. Full digital on panels is sometimes a pain when your tablet is
not working very well because I am used to traditional when it comes to pages. I was called out also last time for slacking on my perspective due to boredom and deadlines.
It was a good lesson as I have to get back to the basicΒ and then studied back again. I am now avoiding the use of grids or readily made perspectives in 3D software like Sketchup
when doing sequentials or scenes, just like what you said it conflicts on the established horizon. This was one of the pages before that realization.
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Nice, we learn, we grow, we get better.
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That's the same deal as Captain America, actually. He was supposed to be the "first of many", but some idiot lost the formula.
(Well, okay, technically, the scientist who invented it never wrote it down out of fear it would be stolen; and then he was murdered.)
Didn't matter... HE was all they needed.Β
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'' Nobody cared who I was until I put on the mask ... ''Β
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Its awesome to see you do some actual comic book work!
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