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This time I gave AJ real freckles instead of the 3 white/yellowish dots?You can tell I do enjoy drawing both of them as humans.
You can make up your own story on what happened.
Note: I never realize Big Mac has freckles. I been drawing him without freckles the whole time. LOL!
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Why is everyone all like "Rainbow Dash did it"? My first association was that AJ sprained her ankle and Mac has to carry her home
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Well, to me anyway both their facial expressions don't show she was hurt... physically that is. It's more of a sad scene, with AJ crying, clinging onto her brother while Mac just keeps on his solid face, as he is deep in thought about his sister as to what happened. Just how she has her face into Mac's neck just shows she is hurting inside, that she is relying on him for comfort and support...
... or who knows. As John said, it's up to our imaginations.
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Por AJ TT______TT
I really like the way you draw them as humans, even applebloom
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Oooohhh, this is sad, but it is very, very touching. I feel for you, AJ. 
I'm gonna say either Granny Smith had her day and AJ's still grieving, or she suffered an incident with one of her friends that she blames herself for. I'm tempted to make up a story here.
Beautiful work as always, I love it when an artist captures such strong emotions as you have done
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That is actually an interesting suggestion, the one about Granny Smith. I could see that one being a BIG strike to AJ.
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Very true, it would be.
I'm not the first to suggest that scenario though, but if such were to occur, I'd certainly expect a scene like this to follow immediately after.
I personally find a falling out with one of her friends to be the more interesting scenario. Whoever that might be, Dash, Rarity.....Anyway, she has a major argument with one or more of them and that has at the very least jeopardized their friendship. AJ's tough, but there's a soft core on that pony as there is with the other ponies; losing any one of her friends would be a big blow.
Or a more far-fetched scenario, the farm is going under. That would hit AJ really hard.
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That last one would REALLY hit her hard. She left the city for it after all. She knows it's what her calling is, it'd be very hard to let that go with out a fight, and tears at night.
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Hmm, I honestly think this third idea would make a neat fanfic if done right. 
And you're right. Her cutie mark after all is apples, her whole livelihood surrounds apples. If she doesn't have Sweet Apple Acres, who is she? What is her calling after that's all said and done?
Imagine the pain of not being able to do what you love the most. AJ and her whole family would really be left with little to turn to. They might even have to leave Ponyville. That would make it even worse for her for obvious reasons.
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Hmm.... Who could we commission to write such a fanfic? It sounds like it could be quite good. It'd be about how the other ponies try to help her get her farm back, or some such. too.
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I don't know, but it is such a tempting idea.
I suppose sometime when I have the free time I could try it. I've tried this sort of this in the past, and somehow I kind of have an idea of how it would play out. When and how I were to do it, though, I can't say with certainty.
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Yeah, I know that feeling. it's not an easy thing making a fanfic that fits in with the known story universe.
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Actually, I think it can be done well, given the proper time and everything 
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Yeah. I'm in the same boat. Between School, Work and my Martial Arts activities, I don't have much time to write the book I'm already working on. Otherwise I might take a kick at it.
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In time, I'll probably give it a shot. I love fanfiction, and I think it'd be a fun opportunity. I am madly in love with MLP and to make it the basis of a fanfic is a great idea.
Highly anticipating Season Two! 
Oh, you're working on a book?
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I also am anticipating Season 2! The series rocks!
Yeah, I'm working on a fantasy story. It's about a group of six people who are chosen by the different gods of the world who have to find a way to stop an impending doom. It'll be good, I just need to finish getting the writing done. I have the first 14 chapters of book one. It's a three book saga. It'll be awesome!
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Wow, ambitious! I hope I'll get to see some of it sometime. Good for you, man
Come September 17th, the Elements of Harmony shall rise again! 
I'm looking forward to seeing more of Princess Luna this season, how about you?
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Yes, very much excited to see Princess Luna. I want to see here actually make a good long appearance in the show. She's an awesome Character design, but they haven't done much with her sadly. She could be AMAZING! And with all the Fandoms out there of Luna, it makes you wonder what they will incorporate, and what they will leave out.
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Indeed, there's some AMAZING fanart of her on DA. They have to give her one or two episodes to show off her stuff. She's Celestia's equal magic-wise, she's bound to be an amazing character if they show her onscreen again.
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Your pony humans have the same snuggly feeling to them as they have as ponies. I still feel deeply for them.. very well done~
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Writers at youre stations!!!
Also anyone who makes a clopfic style comment deserves the SS
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My guess is AJ started another fight with one of her friends again...she's the one that causes the most feuds in the show D:
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Can you blame her? She's cursed with that broiling southern attitude. I would know, LOL.
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rainbow dash happened, great art as always...
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There's a lot of power in this piece. It really makes you wonder what happened.
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Oh~, I wanna write something for this ouo
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I really like your versions of AJ and Big Mac. It just looks more believable to me than others. And I love to see them act like siblings too. Really lovely piece.
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Yeah... a pretty sad story, it looks like.
Still, I like the way you draw them too.
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Her and Rainbow Dash got into a fight. . . And Big Mac had to break it up and Applejack got her feelings hurt. <----- My idea of what happened.
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i can picture the fight ending with RD shouting "I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!" and AJ trying to look tuff even though her heart shattered she yells "FINE I DON' NEED YA ANYWAY!" then when RD leaves she breaks down in tears and Big Mac carries her home since its getting dark and she is too upset to get up :c
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Yeah, that's exactly how I see it happening too.
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yeah :c, glad someone thinks the same ^^
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One sunny afternoon on Ponyvile, out story begins in the bright and colorful candyshop known as Sugarcube Corner, where our favorite farmer Applejack has taken rest after a long day of hard work. However, she is not alone. Applejack had been sitting at a table with her new boyfriend, Caramel.
"...N' so ah said, Big Mac! Ya gotta fix Winona's house before she gits off chasin the chickens again!" Applejack said with a gleeful smile
"And then what happened?" Caramel responded, looking at Applejack with a warm smile."
"Take a guess! That big lug fergot and Winona did exactly what I said she would!" Applejack said before laughing.
"Hahahaha! Gosh, you sure do have a lot of stuff happening at your farm everyday. Sounds like fun!"
"It is a lotta fun, but it's a lotta work too, since we gotta work so much, we just figured how to make work fun."
"Heh, maybe when I get a day off work, I can come help around too. How do you think about that?"
Applejack rested her head on her arm and began to put Caramel's hard in a loving fingerlock with her own.
"Ahh love that." Applejack said before leaning over the table to peck her lover on the lips.
"Mmm... So uhh, when kin ya come over? We kin let ya in with us pretty much any day." Applejack continued.
"Well. I have to take off on a business trip tomorrow, so I won't be here for a few days to meet with some big names at Cloudsdale." Caramel said.
"You headed off ta Cloudsdale? But only them flying folks can go there."
"Well. Yes, But my boss is a pretty smart mage, so I'd be able to walk on those clouds no problem."
"Ah see, well ah sho do hope you have fun there!"
"Heh, Unlikely. All it's going to be is one big job."
"Well ya better start learning to have fun while workin' then!" Applejack said before they both start to laugh.
"Of course, Well, I should go home and practice on my presentation. I want to make a good impression you know!"
"Alright. Knock em dead sugar!"
As Caramel got up from the table, he walked away to leave the shop, and he gave his girlfriend a playful wink before heading off. As Applejack sat at the table. She thought about the same things any girl her age would think of. Romance, Love, possibly marriage. It was something that she wasn't sure if she should even think of. Their love is pretty young, but she wasn't sure if she should wait for Caramel to propose to her or if she should break tradition and propose herself, however, Applejack wasn't the type of girl who would break tradition.
Soon, after hanging out with Pinkie Pie for several hours, she has decided to head home and call it a day, she had received a call at home from Caramel informing her that he had already left for Cloudsdale and that he would be returning in about 3 days.
And so, Applejack used the 3 days to catch up on things she missed out on while trying to keep a steady relationship with Caramel. Such as spending more time with her friends, using the extra time to make more money, or just simply just relaxing away. Whenever she tried to call Caramel, he always said he was busy so she though he must have been doing some pretty important things, So she left him alone for this trip.
On the third day, the day Caramel was suppose to come home, Applejack has gotten a call that morning from her best friend, a friend she hadn't spoke to in a while. Rainbow Dash. Rainbow had taken a vacation to Cloudsdale a few weeks before and had just returned today. She had wanted Applejack to meet up with her at Sugarcube Corner so that she could tell Applejack about her vacation.
Quickly, she complied and soon enough, Applejack met her ecstatic rainbow-haired friend.
"Howdy there Rainbow! How was yer vacation?" Applejack said, with a compassionate smile.
"Oh man! It was totally awesome! I had tons of fun playing sports of some of my old classmates, I met Gilda again and boy, she wasn't too happy seeing me again, but we had this nice long talk and she isn't so mean anymore."
"You're tellin' me that Gilda aint no big mean mother hubbard anymore?"
"Well. She still kindda is. But trust me! She's getting there, it wasn't so easy cause I had to do like. A bunch of sassy stuff, but that isn't very important."
"Really now? Well aint that a surprise? Rainbow Dash findin' some way to fix up Gilda."
"Heh, Yeah. Oh! But that's not even the best part!"
"Hoo boy. Do tell Rainbow."
"I think... I might have met the right guy for me!"
"OH BOY! Aint that just something! Common Rainbow, you gotta tell me 'bout this guy, What's he like?" Applejack said, with an extremely excited smile.
"Well. He's got long flowing brown hair..."
"Uh-huh!"
"He's got these big bright blue eyes."
"Uh-huh! What else?
"He's got these like caramel bars that are just soooo good."
"Uh-huh." Applejack said, slowing down a bit.
"He was in this business suit, which probably meant he was rich, but he also had this reed of hay in his mouth too. He look kindda funny but I thought it was cute."
"Uh... Huh" Applejack was beginning to get suspicious.
"And and we met... Oh he was so awesome! Haha... Lemme just say that he's a totally AMAZING kisser."
"What was his cutie mark?"
"His cutie mark? I think it was horseshoes or something like that."
Applejack's heart was smashed at the sound of those words. Her eyes widened in surprise and her pupils shrunk down to to size of small dots. The small reed she had in her mouth dropped immediately. She couldn't believe what she was hearing. Could it be true? Could she be talking about..?
"AJ? You alright?"
Applejack shook her head and looked at Rainbow Dash in the eyes. "Oh yeah! Ah just got caught thinking about somethin'. So uhh... What was his name?"
"Oh yeah! I was gonna tell you, why don't you meet him for yourself? I asked him to meet us here. Oh look! Here he comes now!"
Applejack instantly looked back at the door, waiting to see who this person is, she had become visibility sweaty and increasingly nervous. She only had thoughts like this in her darkest nightmares. And it has seemed like it had become a reality.
The doors opened, and in though the door, came Caramel, still in his business suit, and stopped dead in his tracks with panic the moment he saw Applejack.
"AJ, I'd like you to meet Caramel!"
"...We've met."
"Applejack! I... I didn't think you'd be here! Caramel said. Nervous and hit with fear.
"You two know each other?" Rainbow Dash said with concern.
"Of course we do! Tell her Caramel! Who am ah?" Applejack yelled out, gathering the attention of the others in the shop.
"She's... Uhh. She's my friend..?" Caramel said, desperately trying to save himself.
"Your FRIEND? Is that what ah've been to you this whole time?!?"
"Just what is going on here?!?" Rainbow Dash yelled out.
"Caramel... Is suppose ta be my boyfriend. We were sappoed ta get hitched together one day!"
"What?"
Applejack had gotten up, her face strucken up with an immense anger. She stomped over and looked Caramel straight in the face.
"Gimme a reason why ah shouldn't knock ya out right now!"
He stammered in his words, "Uh I ah, uh. Um I..."
Applejack's anger has reached it's peak. She raised a fist up, prepared to strike Caramel down, while he was cowering under her. Right as Applejack was about to deiliver the blow, Rainbow Dash has grabbed her arm, yanking it back which such force that she nearly spun Applejack around.
"Applejack! Stop!" Rainbow Dash yelled out
"Why should ah!?! I should just stomp this little rat right now and-"
"AJ! You can't!"
"And why's that?!?"
"Because! Because..."
"Cause Why? Unless you have SOME Sorta... Wait... Rainbow you aint tellin' me that..."
"...I kindda like him."
Applejack was dumbfounded. "Wha... What? You gotta be kiddin me. How can you like this SCRUMPY LIL VERMINE!?!"
"I dunno, I just-"
"And dosn't it mean ANYTHIN to ya at all that this boy cheated on me?"
"A little but-"
"JUST A LITTLE!?!"
Applejack who seemed to have enraged even more, turn back over the Caramel, who hadn't moved an inch was standing frozen, terrfied of Applejack's wrath.
"And YOU! Just who do you think you are runnin' off with some other girl just cause ah aint there! Ah mean! What's wrong with you!"
Caramel stood silent and still.
"...Don't ah mean anythin' to ya?" Applejack said much softer then before, suddenly taking on a sadder disposition.
Caramel yet remained silent. He looked directly into Applejack's face, then to Rainbow Dash, but he yet remained silent. The atmosphere around then grew more grim as the tension between Applejack and Caramel bloomed stronger and stronger.
Caramel's silence simply made Applejack furious as Applejack pulled her fist and slamed into Caramel's jaw, knocking him over. Rainbow Dash cried out and immediately ran to Caramel
"Rainbow. Just what do you think you're doing?" Applejack said snarkily.
"Just stop! Just leave him alone!"
"...Rainbow?"
Rainbow Dash helped Caramel up back on his feet, where then then offered a few comforting words before leaving the shop.
"And just where are you going?"
"Away from here! You need to cool your jets AJ."
"Cool mah- What- Dosen't it matter at all to ya that he cheated on me?"
"It does but-"
"But what?"
"But... But... But nothing! You just need to chill!"
And with that, Rainbow Dash left with Caramel's arm over her sholders. They left without saying a word, without looking back, and without any remorse. And Applejack stood there inside the shop wathcing them leave, with her face red with fury and sweating with stress.
"RAINBOW! YOU'RE SUPPOSE TO BE THE ELEMENT OF LOYALTY! WHERE'D THE LOYALTY GO?"
After receiving no answer, she continued on.
"FINE THEN! BE THAT WAY! AH DON'T NEED YA ANYWAYS."
Applejack turned around and took a seat at the table she normally sat at, her frustrations just flew around in her head as she felt angry enough to destroy everything. Soon enough, she gained enough fury to randomly slap the stand of sugar off the table. Pinkie Pie who had watched the whole conflict, walked over the Applejack.
"Applejack... Are not alright?" Pinkie Pie said, trying to be comforting."
"Heck naw. Just leave me alone for a bit."
"Okie dookie... Just lemme know if you need something cause you don't look swell."
"Thanks sugarcube. Ah just need some time.
And Applejack sat there on that table, for hours on end, just sitting, thinking, and trying to get her mind off the situation. She had never been cheated on before and she never knew anyone who has, so she had no idea how to deal with this. People came and left, things have been done and Applejack didn't pay a care or give a damn, she was just simply trying to contain her emotiongs in.
So much time had passed and she didn't even notice the sun falling into the horizon and the night raising up.
"Applejack?" Pinkie Pie said. "I called Big Macintosh to come get you so... He should be coming by soon."
"Why, I could get home by myself."
"It just seems like you needed it."
"...Alright. Thanks sugar."
Soon after, what she said would happen, happened. Big Macintosh had come by and attemped to convince Applejack to come home, after a couple minutes of convining, Applejack has gotten off from the table. When Big Macintosh saw that her legs were wobbly for some reason. He had lifted her up into his back in a piggyback ride.
On the way back home, in the dark night sky.
Applejack had changed. An entire day of holding back her feelings had broken her. Halfway though the road, she had broken down, right on Big Macintosh's back. When Big Macintosh has tried to comfort his sister, she bit back sharpy and told him to keep walking, and he complied.
Big Macintosh had felt immense pity for his sister, It was something he knew he had to discuss with later in the morning.
But now. It was just about getting home.
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Awwwwww nooo poor baby D: ( But for real that was perfect)
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omg that was amazing i love it!
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Oh thank you. But that was an very rushed, and a very inferior piece. Glad you liked it though!
Maybe you should check out my account if you want to see more
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Much appreciated my friend
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That was awesome. Wonderful job!
You get internets
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