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johnpf In reply to MatTwassel [2020-01-22 20:11:21 +0000 UTC]

I've taken your cropping suggestion and redone the image.

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johnpf In reply to Surreal-Muse [2017-08-03 05:53:23 +0000 UTC]

Go ahead!
(I already suspect what you might point out. I noticed it, too, and had a few moments of "Should I change that and render again?" but decided against it because I have other pictures waiting to be done.)

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Surreal-Muse In reply to johnpf [2017-08-03 07:17:47 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty then. What jumped out at me is how her right shin is lined up with the chair leg at first glance it made her shin look really fat. You could twist her thigh a bit so its not right against it. But i think the culprit here is the color of the chair. Its so close to flesh color it kinda blends in there. Any other color would suffice.

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johnpf In reply to Surreal-Muse [2017-08-03 08:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for telling me about that.
That wasn't actually what I was thinking you'd mention. Reason I didn't even consider it is that I think I'm using the bottom of the chair leg (the bit under her right foot, touching the floor) as a guide to let my eyes know what's going on there. But reading it from another perspective is useful that perhaps not everyone feels that way. Thanks!

(What I thought you were going to mention is the poor specularity on her hair. Totally forgot to sort that out and only noticed it when the render had already run for several hours.)

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Surreal-Muse In reply to johnpf [2017-08-03 09:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Well we are all different people so its all good. I am sure you can point out things in my own work that i would be oblivious to.

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