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Description Full title: Ebifly! Kawaisouna Mahoushoujo Monogatari
(Ebifly! Sad Magical Girl Story)

Eri Mizutani, an average highschooler, was one day buying fish for her mother when she slipped on a discarded head of tuna and knocked over a tank of shrimp, releasing them into the nutrient-laden gutters. After paying for the damages, she was walking back home when lo! a voice came at her from the sewers below. Among the fortunate shrimp she saved was a magical prawn (which is not a shrimp, but nobody really cares except marine-biologists) who shows his gratitude by granting Eri the ability to transform into the heroine Ebifly, along with one super power of her choice. Seeing herself in the reflection of a local pigeon's eyes, she says, "I hope nobody recognizes me."

And so, the unrecognizeable heroine is born! She can magically switch to her alter-ego at whim without anyone suspecting who she is. Even when appearing to the same person twice as Ebifly, they will deny ever having met her before. With this practically useless power, Ebifly has no enemies and no trouble trying to protect her secret identity, though nobody would really care anyway. Her shrimp powers include swimming, breathing underwater, and the ability to feed on plankton. These are all useless as she lives many miles inland. As Ebifly, Eri walks around the neighborhood and...helps the children with normal stuff like getting their dogs to come out from under park benches. That kind of stuff. Not that anybody cares.

Well anyhow, on to the story behind creating the character! I was eating shrimp for dinner one day and was peeling the shell off of them like a jacket. Then I wondered what it'd be like to dress in a shrimp's shell. The end.

The name "Ebifly" is a pun on "Ebi-furai" - fried shrimp. However, she doesn't fly, and isn't a fly. I just didn't bother to think that far ahead (that is, three letters) when I chose the name. My excuse now will be that shrimps look like they're trying to fly when they swim. There. On another note, I came across an observation while designing this character:

Can you name one creature that has more than four legs and isn't a bug? Or at least doesn't look like one?

I asked my mom this and after a while she answered "dragon."
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Comments: 255

Ender-Toast [2019-07-04 12:37:40 +0000 UTC]

how about the fact that she's the Flyest shrimp around

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SketchyShadowCat11 [2016-12-20 02:52:22 +0000 UTC]

haha cute

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Laugh-Butts [2016-01-25 05:27:32 +0000 UTC]

IT'S PREFERT

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NotHereAnyMor [2015-10-16 01:07:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh god this HAS to have the most embarrassing henshin sequence ever.

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apple-crumbler [2015-03-18 08:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Lettuce from Tokyo MewMew in a Nutshell

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Bananaphobia [2015-01-08 01:09:15 +0000 UTC]

This is the funniest thing

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AVO-GSY [2014-02-23 07:07:39 +0000 UTC]

that's where that noodle bowl anime shrimp girl came from
Luv your anime very much  

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Dante8411 [2014-01-14 18:34:02 +0000 UTC]

You've been into shrimp for longer than I thought.

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JohnSu In reply to Dante8411 [2014-01-22 07:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, shrimp is SO COOL

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Dante8411 In reply to JohnSu [2014-01-22 07:56:35 +0000 UTC]

They're like krill, but bigger and humans eat them instead of whales!

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wxzhenghoppytruffles [2014-01-09 01:40:06 +0000 UTC]

pffft! XD


hmmm.... Squid. Octopus.......


well, awesome, this is so cool. and weird...

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Chispituta [2013-08-03 04:08:37 +0000 UTC]

Love your creative mind. I have never cosplayed before but I would sooooo cosplay this!

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mkdavi [2013-06-03 15:43:58 +0000 UTC]

Hope she doesn't run into a certain shrimp loving heroine. Maybe she won't recognize her as shrimp?

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JohnSu In reply to mkdavi [2013-06-16 20:03:03 +0000 UTC]

I think she already has enough shrimp costume trauma to not be a liability.

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EclipseMind [2013-03-24 04:18:33 +0000 UTC]

A Newt with cancer. They grow new arms when they get tumors!

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Ana-ko [2012-10-30 15:55:35 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Hawkheart29 [2012-04-10 23:38:50 +0000 UTC]

I just love her hair.

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LDivi [2011-12-02 00:33:40 +0000 UTC]

Cute. Gotta love mediocre super-powers XD.

But who's the shrimp girl on the right, and how does she relate to all of this?

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StickyRicePlatter [2011-09-03 23:29:59 +0000 UTC]

CUTTLEFISH!

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Jisunbun [2011-01-26 22:07:49 +0000 UTC]

epic D:

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ClayBrigadier [2011-01-22 04:36:44 +0000 UTC]

octopi and squid .

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kalbiv123 [2011-01-05 04:08:16 +0000 UTC]

shrimp. Lobster. A mutated human.

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Zazi-chan [2010-12-11 09:38:26 +0000 UTC]

a crab has more than 4 leg and is not a bug

your is is very cute and creative

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peachibear [2010-12-09 07:13:59 +0000 UTC]

What would you do if I ever cosplayed this? XDDDD

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JohnSu In reply to peachibear [2010-12-20 23:30:51 +0000 UTC]

I would take a picture

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peachibear In reply to JohnSu [2010-12-21 00:17:40 +0000 UTC]

I think I might make that my Halloween costume XD

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JohnSu In reply to peachibear [2010-12-21 01:14:18 +0000 UTC]

take a picture!

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peachibear In reply to JohnSu [2010-12-21 01:26:15 +0000 UTC]

I would! I'll post it on here and credit you C:

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Farencore [2010-11-16 21:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaaaaajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajajajjajajaja
OMFG I't seems like a story that a friend creates about me XD

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Polutwo [2010-09-06 15:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh my. I wish had you as my writing teacher. Descriptions like "peeling the shell off of them like a jacket" could get me into some very good colleges.

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Phenoca [2010-08-31 14:19:15 +0000 UTC]

"Even when appearing to the same person twice as Ebifly, they will deny ever having met her before!"

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Resident-Evil-Gamer [2010-06-30 17:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmm shrimp

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chiyuko [2010-06-01 04:28:47 +0000 UTC]

LOL your mom's answer made me laugh so hard!
I don't know why but I find it funny when moms say those kind of stuff.
Anyway, awesome story! A big thing that I look forward to in your deviations is the description.

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Nocmin [2010-04-18 17:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Aha! I knew I recognized your art/humour. I've been looking for this picture for a while!

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NotHereAnyMor [2010-03-16 03:31:21 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I wanna see her transformation.. I'd die laughing.
MT

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Takimashou [2010-02-01 03:11:40 +0000 UTC]

STARFISH!
arthropods
a dragon (your typical western one) has more than four LIMBS... does that count?

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LDivi In reply to Takimashou [2011-12-02 01:07:09 +0000 UTC]

By many accounts, the Basilisk, and certain other dragon relatives, have more than 4 legs, actually...

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TobiObito4ever [2010-01-27 22:24:19 +0000 UTC]



And let me think about that riddle.... More than 4 legs and not a bug.... Oh, is it a spider?

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1-Ace [2009-11-27 23:11:56 +0000 UTC]

LAWL.

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Tanya56 [2009-10-01 20:19:02 +0000 UTC]

I love that her hair in the first image looks like a shrimp. :3

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HareTrinity [2009-09-27 14:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Lots of legs and not a bug?

Vertebrates (real) have a max of 4 limbs...

...Jellyfish, octopi and squid work?

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JohnSu In reply to HareTrinity [2009-09-28 03:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Maybe, though tentacles are not quite what I meant when I said "leg"

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Kietra-Akine [2009-09-21 21:52:12 +0000 UTC]

I know this one! It's Sleipnir!

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Lost-Marblesbag [2009-09-12 00:39:09 +0000 UTC]

acttualy, there's been many acounts of cows with extra legs, some phenomena that accors as a fetus

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hammertheshark [2009-07-08 01:07:04 +0000 UTC]

YOU HAS TO MUCH FREE TIME

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norukulegend [2009-06-27 00:57:08 +0000 UTC]

she's not panko-breaded, is she?D:

XDD after we saw this, my friend and i laughed until our sides hurt.

made my day.

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WateryGrave [2009-06-23 19:25:13 +0000 UTC]

XD Dragon.
My my my. <3

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Redds [2009-06-23 05:05:50 +0000 UTC]

Men.

They have 5 legs.

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fireborn19 [2009-05-22 15:59:26 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS SO AWESOME! lol- you did a great job! haha- if this were a real manga I'd totally read it!

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kawaiinekodesunee [2009-05-03 15:27:29 +0000 UTC]

I'd totally read this maga if you made it into one
it seems like it would be funny

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