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Published: 2017-05-03 04:27:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 358; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Description Un breve retrato de mi novia Virginia, se lo merece por mala(?

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A brief portrait of my girlfriend Virginia, she deserves it for bad(?
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irontiuay [2017-05-03 20:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Te quedo muy bien ^^

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JonathanHackLife In reply to irontiuay [2017-05-03 20:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Muchisimas gracias!! Aunque se parece muy poco trato de mejorar :3

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irontiuay In reply to JonathanHackLife [2017-05-03 21:09:54 +0000 UTC]

En todo caso la intenciΓ³n es lo que cuenta, y a mi me parece que se ve bastante bien ^^

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JonathanHackLife In reply to irontiuay [2017-05-03 21:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Gracias n_n β™₯

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arbiter7734 [2017-05-03 04:36:58 +0000 UTC]

just a bit of constructive criticism, it would look a bit better with a longer horizontal line and flipping the outer lines would help too so instead of having )-(, have it like (-)

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JonathanHackLife In reply to arbiter7734 [2017-05-03 04:42:19 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I love constructive criticism! My ideals are in improving
Should I form the other curve on the cheek?

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arbiter7734 In reply to JonathanHackLife [2017-05-03 04:46:54 +0000 UTC]

its up to you, you could try a thinner line if it doesn't look right

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JonathanHackLife In reply to arbiter7734 [2017-05-03 04:53:33 +0000 UTC]

You say like that? Β 

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arbiter7734 In reply to JonathanHackLife [2017-05-03 05:09:22 +0000 UTC]

no, I mean put the ( that's already touching the mouth line to the other side and put the ) on the opposite so it looks sorta like (--) that

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JonathanHackLife In reply to arbiter7734 [2017-05-03 05:56:40 +0000 UTC]

I think I'm not good for this D: Β 

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arbiter7734 In reply to JonathanHackLife [2017-05-03 23:19:25 +0000 UTC]

that's sorta what I meant, maybe have the () lines a bit closer to the mouth though

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