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Published: 2013-01-09 06:15:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 576; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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2013, DigitalModel: Tara ( )
01/09 edit: exposure and contrast for more face detail.
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astarayel [2013-01-09 22:33:30 +0000 UTC]
In the thumbnail, you couldn't tell that there was anyone standing in the forest, so the photography seemed a bit typical, but then when I saw the full view, she really caught my eye!!
I love what you've done with the composition and perspective: the way the model is looking up, and is sort of off center, really puts the focus on the grandeur of the forest itself, and your eye follows her gaze and the tree trunks, hoping to catch a glimpse of the tops. That's a wonderful effect.
I would agree that the contrast is a bit too much: I know that it usually make the details of a black and white photograph stand out, but here it kind of obscures the model's face and hides some of the details of the bark on that wonderful tree. Tone that down a bit, and you'll have an even more fantastic picture here.
Keep up the good work!!
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jonesblachowicz In reply to astarayel [2013-01-10 01:39:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the suggestion! I've toned it down, so you can see her face better. That bugged me a little after the first initial edit, I hadn't gotten to fixing it yet.
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astarayel In reply to jonesblachowicz [2013-01-10 02:51:05 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!!
It looks great
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AlanTheRobot [2013-01-09 18:02:14 +0000 UTC]
I really like it but I think the image might just have a tad bit too much contrast. It'd be nice to be able to see the face and the tree and its texture more clearly.
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