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The quality is good, but I have a few things I'd like to point out as a critique.
I feel because she has smaller breasts, the angle isn't the best for her upper half, it makes her look completely flat, as if she doesn't even need the bra. She shuold be sitting up more. Also, while making the one eye slightly squinting, she shouldn't have her face turned like that while her hair is pulled on the same side, to me it just looks off, I'm not sure what it is about it, but the face should be turned the other way with that expression.
I also feel both her hands should appear relaxed, as one of them looks strained, with the straightened out fingers, it looks less natural and more tence as if she's having dificulties finding a good pose.
I also think this kind of piece would be best suited for 100% straight forward. rather than from a partial side-view, making the couch look tilted and throwing off the balance of the whole image.
All in all it's not a bad photo, but I think the angles need a little work.
Hope you understand my points and don't take them as insults, they are not meant to be.
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I was just going for a feet photo. I was not very concerned about anything else at the time. I do agree with your comment, but I was only taking a series of feet images from different angles.
Thanks,
Jon
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Perhaps you should take a different approch with the perspective then, because I had no idea that the feet, and not the panties, were the main focus of the image. 
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I agree. That image was many moons ago. I have learned a little ,since.
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Well it showed up in my deviantions list so I assumed it was somewhat new, but that is good to hear 
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I keep most stuff posted. I like to see where I am going and where I have grown.
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