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Published: 2015-07-10 01:43:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2559; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 2
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oh, what a stupid way to live, try, try again, you just resist~wow two months
i cant believe i ever thought the other one was even art
old: fav.me/d8rs8qo
blank meme:Β fav.me/d2xu044
my entry for Improvement-Club lighting challenge thing. I worked on light source definition, backlight, colored light, and making sure to use color shading.
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Hello! I'm fromΒ
Oh my what an improvement owo)b keep up the great work frnd~! ^^
Okay, as u have requested for a critique, i will point out 2 or 3 things which can work on.
First of all anatomy (yes is a pain x3 ) but u can surely improve! as i can see a load of improvement in 2 mnths~!
Know where the creases on clothes will form. The image will look more dynamic
Colouring is all together gud~! Β
Also u can work a little bit more on the BG too~!
Hope this helps~! best of luck~!
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Hello! I'm from !
Your shading and highlighting style is really cool, but it appears to be inconsistent.Β
Also, you lose a little impact because the background is ambiguous, so it's a little distracting trying to grapple for context. It appears really ominous and scary.Β
Nice job on the expression!Β
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ah, thanks a lot!!
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Wow! You improved a lot!! Keep working !Β Β
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You have done a very big improvement in coloring, in only 2 months! O.O It's very impressive! Her expression gives a lot of emotions at once, it is so difficult to do \o But I must admit that there are some things that I don't understand. First, her hair. A part of it seems to not be attached to her head and it pertubs me %) I don't understand the background too... What is it? Maybe I don't have enough information (for example if it is a fanart)? Anyway, keep up that incredible improvement! :'D
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ah, thanks so much! yeah, I get the thing about her hair a lot, but it's actually fan art of this chara: rebloggy.com/post/kagerou-projβ¦
so yeah, that explains the background too :3
thanks for the comment!
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I live in England so I read the dates as 2 days apart XD I was like wooooahhhh!
But still in 2 months that's a great improvement I love your lighting ^^
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oh haha sorry, guess I wasn't thinking much about the order of the date, maybe I should've written it out XD
thanks so much, though! thanks for the watch too!~
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Nice try on the different shades of colors to make the shadows on her dress.
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I like your concept of before an after to show what improvements were made of the original. Though the use of digital tools created a three-dimensional look, you still manage to make the new drawing like it hasn't strayed from the original, which is not a bad thing! Ive seen new versions of old works that looks nothing like the original.
The after looks unfinished, maybe its intentional. Her pigtails are floating. perhaps you havent added her ribbons yet? Β Very nice! Imlooking forward to your progress.
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don't get me wrong, but i like a lot the old one. but yeah you got better!
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ME TOOOOO
>w<Β
its mah second fave of all the kagerou project
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yobanashi decieve Β >w<
Kano's face when "he can no longer be saved" is just..
urk...
right in the feels...
;-;
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;-; dem feels
kagepro as a whole is like
800% feels
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Q-Q ikr
Ayanoooooooooooo ;-;
but then u get kisaragi attention to make u happy again Β TvT
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and otsukimi recital!
except maybe crying a little at it too
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GDAMMIT JIN Y U MAKE SO SAD SONGS
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T^T
//by the way, would u wanna do a collab? i could do the line art
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ahh that'd be awesome! what do you wanna make it a picture of?
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so ill work on something and send u it thru stash k?
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The old image looks more expressive in the face.
The new image looks significantly more polished and has better shading.
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okay, thanks for the feedback!
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thank you so much QAQ
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no problem, i always enjoy your artΒ
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^^ you are very talentedΒ
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*hardcore blush* thank you so much for saying that!!
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no problem, its true ;3Β
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